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Diastyl

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A silent shadow, a heavy weight on my chest
guess I was too immature
it bothers me so much that I cant rest
guess I'm not so sure

I miss being a kid, because there never was pain before
and I didn't really notice that much
How people hated me, and wanted to kick me to the floor
just because I didnt fit in

I feel empty and alone
just because the friend in my heart is gone
there's nothing I can do to fill that hole
and my tears and loneliness just won...

I wrote this cuz I guess I lost my best friend, and because most people think I cant even blend with society.

What do you think about it?
 

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After 8 years, she became popular and I was pretty much a freak so we just drifted apart as best friends.... I still miss her though
 

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Beutifull. i have tried poetry. my friend told me that it sounded like a 3 year old dead dog with squeky voice, and a adult always making constipated noises, had a kid, and that kid had got his voice box/throat crushed.

it sounds harsh but he says that he was being nice:lol::lol::lol:
 

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Yes, your posts were deleted. Don't discuss things like that in this thread again; take it to VM or PM, I don't care which.
 

Diastyl

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Beutifull. i have tried poetry. my friend told me that it sounded like a 3 year old dead dog with squeky voice, and a adult always making constipated noises, had a kid, and that kid had got his voice box/throat crushed.

it sounds harsh but he says that he was being nice:lol::lol::lol:

Don't worry, one day you'll succeed in making a good poem!

Just like how I'l succeed in filling the hole in my heart again :)
 
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