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[CaptainMarvelQ8]

i think i like this outcome better than my SOTW entry~

CnC

 

[Ðari]

Definitely. Out of opinion, feels like the surmise is drawn toward the point closest to the stock, but not the stock. Its pretty much your attention whore, not sure if that was your intent. Attempting to find a balance, and flow but its pretty much scattered, i'd imagine this being a bit more justified as an abstract.

 

[Cloud]

At first glance i couldn't see the stock. I liked it much more then, haha. I'd scrap the paper texture you have on the right, it does the tag no justice. Powerful lighting and shading would look nice too, i think. Good job though

 

[CaptainMarvelQ8]

Definitely. Out of opinion, feels like the surmise is drawn toward the point closest to the stock, but not the stock. Its pretty much your attention whore, not sure if that was your intent. Attempting to find a balance, and flow but its pretty much scattered, i'd imagine this being a bit more justified as an abstract.

ahaha,well it's kinda like that and the fact that the stock was already small so i didn't want a big chunk covering it

At first glance i couldn't see the stock. I liked it much more then, haha. I'd scrap the paper texture you have on the right, it does the tag no justice. Powerful lighting and shading would look nice too, i think. Good job though

xD
The paper texture was basically the 'base' of the tag,that's why i didn't want to remove,also if i wold remove it;the sig then would smaller than it already is

THANKS GUISE!