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Definitely. Out of opinion, feels like the surmise is drawn toward the point closest to the stock, but not the stock. Its pretty much your attention whore, not sure if that was your intent. Attempting to find a balance, and flow but its pretty much scattered, i'd imagine this being a bit more justified as an abstract.
At first glance i couldn't see the stock. I liked it much more then, haha. I'd scrap the paper texture you have on the right, it does the tag no justice. Powerful lighting and shading would look nice too, i think. Good job though