Re: Simple Stuff : -2 Unassorted
ANSWER: I don't! I stayed vague in every way possible because I don't know anything about hospitals/procedures.MAJOR QUESTION OF THE DAY! How do you know so much about medical procedure?
Is "cleaning" something surgeons do in brain surgery? I dunno, but it sounds plausible enough for me to get away with. The clot itself is also vague on purpose. Wouldn't a clot--which stops blood from reaching the brain--cause a seizure? Probably, but the fact that a "genetic disorder" is causing the clot is probably a bigger offender of defying logic. To me, writing is a balancing act of weaving words and tricks, to be honest. I have to think about what is actually possible and what the readers would be willing to believe. Could a genetic disorder cause blood clots? Who knows, maybe! This also extends to my other writings as well: In CLASSIC, Bryer is mauled by a tiger. People who get attacked by tigers are generally screwed, so I had to make him extra lucky and only be clawed from behind and give him enough time to escape. Then I had to ignore the bloodloss he was suffering (which would probably make him unstable along with experiencing shock) and have him heal immediately with an unexplained "magic gel". How does it work? Magic! Again, that's me working with what the readers expect in a somewhat realistic setting as well as what they would be willing to believe. This also isn't me trying to sucker the reader either, and I hope no one takes it that way; it's more like I'm trusting that the reader can use some suspension of disbelief to enjoy the story. It didn't matter why Richard was dying: the point was that he is, in fact, dying.The surgeon had removed the clot, only for it to slowly reform as soon as they began cleaning.
yeeesssssss. It's all fiction, but I love this.I feel like this is something you'd see in real life, or a true story that actually happened.
jesus christ pls don't ever change for reals tho<3I guess this leaves me askin, did he commit sudoko in a previous chapter?