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Silence, silence, silence
all i hear is silence

I was lost in it
I was living in it

Now my happiness is dying in it
slowly dying, dying, dying

There is still time to think this thourgh
should i go back or should i stay here

If i go back
I reenter a world of unappreciation

If i stay
I live out my days in loneliness

Such difficult decisions
to be made in
Silence, silence, silence
 

Amalthea

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Hmmm...I like this one as well. You should try to put all your poetry into one thread. You'd probably get more feedback that way....unless, of course, you don't want feedback.... Personally, I search out poetry, and comment on them, especially the one's I like.

I like your style, though. Some would say the repetiveness of certain words makes it worse, but I like the way you've used them.
 
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