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K here is Chapter 1.

Showdown of Fate

by The One He Fears and Cloud_Unchained

Cloud_Unchained spends his day looking around Spira
for Rikku. "Where could she be?" As he walked, he came across a sphere. He watched.

Hey Cloud_Unchained, Rikku rocked my world. Five times. Today.

Well the gauntlet is thrown. ya' jealous?

Come on Cloud_Unchained, let's have a war of words.
either that or me and Rikku are off to Destiny Islands to get a tan, and some other rated R things.

Grr... Damn. Who does he think he is? Cloud_Unchained asked himself. Rikku and Cloud_Unchained have been in love for a long time. They always got along. Cloud_Unchained headed toward his gummi ship. He flew to different worlds, just to find his Rikku.

"Hmmm... This might be a bit interesting," The One He Fears said.

"What?" Rikku said resting on his bed.

"Well, it looks like Cloud_Unchained is on a hunt,"

The One He Fears said.

"Hmm... He always tried getting what he wanted. All our relationship is about lust. He's lost that spark I saw when I first met him," Rikku said.

"Don't worry, I'll be more than he ever was," The One He Fears said as he put his arms around Rikku. What he didn't know was Rikku still loved Cloud_Unchained, but those feelings were fading fast.
 

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Aww, Cloud_Unchained give him a hug!

Wow... I did not know any of what happened in the first chappie... waiting for the second!
This should be good! *rubs hands in anticipation* Soz... I'm feeling rather bored...
 

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...is this before or after FF-X? After, I suppose seeing as she has no other life/history.
*sigh*Just feeling a bit sarcastic, but I'm still waiting for the next chapter! :)
 

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Are you all nuts Time for some criticizm(Acts like Simon from American Idol)
That was the worst fanfic i've ever read.First you used someones username instead of their real name second It was just horrible!
 

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I took the liberty of posting Chapter 2 (Sorry!)

Chapter 2

Flying in space, Cloud_Unchained was on a desperate quest to save Rikku

from The One He Fears. He felt extremely determined and willed to do this. As he

sped off into space, he got a call on his commsphere.

"So you do care," the person on the other side said.

"Who are you?! What've you done to Rikku?" Cloud_Unchained said.

"Hmph, you act as she's in trouble," he said.

"She is! I'm not protecting her!" Cloud_Unchained said.

"Hmmm, you sad, pathetic, little person. She came to me. I was the one

who supplied her with grenades and other weapons. We became fast friends,

we've gone out occasionaly. We almost got intimate, but she "thought" she had

to stay loyal to you. We did realize everything was moving to fast, so we stayed

friends. She came to me, saying your relationship is nothing but lust. Now i'll be

more than a friend to her," he said.

"What's your name?" Cloud_Unchained snapped.

"Call me, The One He Fears," he said.
 

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Cloud_Unchained said:
who supplied her with grenades and other weapons. We became fast friends,

we've gone out occasionaly. We almost got intimate, but she "thought" she had

to stay loyal to you. We did realize everything was moving to fast, so we stayed

friends.

In truth we became Lovers and didn't get married, but he must have edited that. He's so jealous.
 

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Hahahaha!!! - Me laughing at the quarrel, rather than the fic.
I find it kinda funny that you guys are actually writing that as a fic!! Teehee!
 
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This story = strange.

I thought it was about Cloud and Sephiroth.
 
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