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Serah Version Showcase [versions 5 and 6 Final]



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EDIT:

Yeah this turned out to be more of a showcase, sorta. I've made so many versions XD. But I think I'll stop now ^_^

Final Versions!

Serah V5

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Serah V6

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Serah V1

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Serah V2

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Serah V3

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Serah V4

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Well I went to searching for stocks and I found this. And I thought "I have to make this a tag"

So I did but now I'm in a blank. Hehe

So cnc please~
 
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Re: Work in Progress

The effects over her face ruin it quite a lot, and there's a little too much dead space on the right side. Aside from that, you've got something pretty nice happening here.
 

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Re: Work in Progress

...It looks done to me.
Though text would give maybe more affect som white writing with a back shadow or something.
Though coulours go well I think , maybe a darker or lighter tone red.

oh . . . well I'll see what I can do with the red a bit. Thanks for the opinion.

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The effects over her face ruin it quite a lot, and there's a little too much dead space on the right side. Aside from that, you've got something pretty nice happening here.


hmmm ok I'll fix her face and maybe I'll put some text like MangaCrazy said on the right to fill it up. Uhm do you know how to add more fonts in gimp? Cause I've got boring fonts. OH another question are you Lancelot a.k.a. Bumblebee a.k.a (the list goes a long way I think) . . .?

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Omg it is you!
 
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Re: Work in Progress[NEW VERSIONS]

Oh, with GIMP, go into the gimp 2.6 or whatever version you have, and there should be a Fonts folder within that. Just save a new font into there, then refresh the Fonts dialog when you next open up GIMP.

Also, v3 and v4 are looking pretty awesome, there =D v2 has something pretty sweet going for it, though. I think... try putting v2 over v3 on about 40% opacity, and see what the outcome is like, because v3 is a little too contrasted.
 

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Re: Work in Progress[NEW VERSIONS]

It's still monotone and the text is very distracting to the focal you fixed. Don't over use your adjustments. Monotone is good for some tags, but not for this on it makes it boring. It could also use some spicing up. And V3 and 4 have way too much contrast.
 

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Re: Work in Progress[NEW VERSIONS]

It's still monotone and the text is very distracting to the focal you fixed. Don't over use your adjustments. Monotone is good for some tags, but not for this on it makes it boring. It could also use some spicing up. And V3 and 4 have way too much contrast.

Well I don't know if my final versions are much better but I think I'll stop making more versions now and start another. At least now I have better knowledge on what to do ^_^. I'll keep your opinions to heart.
 

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Text is awful, effects and colors appear to be random and haphazard.
 
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