Fanfiction ► Secret Mission: High School

[Horizon's Knight]

It had a very interesting ending. There are some suggestions for the sequel though.

1. Have the Demon Sisters and Sephiroth try to take over DI.
2. Have people discover Org. XIII
3. Put some magic between Sora & Namine.
4. Have Roxas compete for Xion's affection.
5. Have Sora use the Keyblade already.
6. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, I suggest have Zexion change either Axel or Roxas into a girl for humor, and to not scare away the guys who read this fanifc.
7. Explain why so many Heartless are appearing on DI (Ex: Some sort of Villan)
8. Although this is supposed to be a comedy, can you add a little more fighting in the next fic. After all, they are there because of the Heartless.

That is all I have to say.

 

[JustCallMeShadow]

It had a very interesting ending. There are some suggestions for the sequel though.

1. Have the Demon Sisters and Sephiroth try to take over DI.
2. Have people discover Org. XIII
3. Put some magic between Sora & Namine.
4. Have Roxas compete for Xion's affection.
5. Have Sora use the Keyblade already.
6. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, I suggest have Zexion change either Axel or Roxas into a girl for humor, and to not scare away the guys who read this fanifc.
7. Explain why so many Heartless are appearing on DI (Ex: Some sort of Villan)
8. Although this is supposed to be a comedy, can you add a little more fighting in the next fic. After all, they are there because of the Heartless.

That is all I have to say.

Maybe a Shadow could accidentally say they're from the Organization.

 

[Bellaisima358]

Wow, I loved the ending! I hope (and if you will, I cant wait) For the summer vacation!

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

It had a very interesting ending. There are some suggestions for the sequel though.

1. Have the Demon Sisters and Sephiroth try to take over DI.
2. Have people discover Org. XIII
3. Put some magic between Sora & Namine.
4. Have Roxas compete for Xion's affection.
5. Have Sora use the Keyblade already.
6. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, I suggest have Zexion change either Axel or Roxas into a girl for humor, and to not scare away the guys who read this fanifc.
7. Explain why so many Heartless are appearing on DI (Ex: Some sort of Villan)
8. Although this is supposed to be a comedy, can you add a little more fighting in the next fic. After all, they are there because of the Heartless.

That is all I have to say.

thank you for your suggestions

Do you have anything you'd like to comment about this chapter?

 

[Paupu911]

It ended already? awesome fanfic and awesome job! and the suggestions seem pretty funny, heheh. anyway you said there's gonna be another thread? tell us right away when it's made, please? =)

 

[The Dream]

Aww man it ended?
Oh well, funny ending and it is obvius they would blow up the school
Can't wait for the sequel

 

[Diomedes]

ROFLMFAO! that was allout hilarious! So, is Saix a Were-dog? Lol, dog crips = awsomeness personafied! Can't wait for sequel!

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

The sequel is up!!: Secret Mission: Summer Vacation

 

[Keyblade Seeker]

It looks SO funny! May I post this in FanFiction.net? Don't worry; I'll make sure to credit you. Update me when you change your screen name, okay?

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

It looks SO funny! May I post this in FanFiction.net? Don't worry; I'll make sure to credit you. Update me when you change your screen name, okay?

actually I already have SMHS on FanFiction.net

 

[MM125]

Wow, I just found it, you should update that.

Anyway, that was great, I've literally spent days trying to make the perfect comment on the final chapter, but I've given up on that.

It had a very interesting ending. There are some suggestions for the sequel though.

1. Have the Demon Sisters and Sephiroth try to take over DI.
2. Have people discover Org. XIII
3. Put some magic between Sora & Namine.
4. Have Roxas compete for Xion's affection.
5. Have Sora use the Keyblade already.
6. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, I suggest have Zexion change either Axel or Roxas into a girl for humor, and to not scare away the guys who read this fanifc.
7. Explain why so many Heartless are appearing on DI (Ex: Some sort of Villan)
8. Although this is supposed to be a comedy, can you add a little more fighting in the next fic. After all, they are there because of the Heartless.

That is all I have to say.

I'd like to add one thing to this.

9. IF you are going for an AkuRoku pairing, put in a yuri pairing, so as not to discourage guys (not like me, I'll read it regardless of how much yaoi you throw in) from reading it.

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

nah I decided not to put yaoi in summer vacation sorry yaoi fans

 

[MM125]

I figured when you said you'd have Axel/Larxene.

 

[I *heart* Axel]

i love the story so much!!!! i have a suggestion. i think axel and demyx should fall in love with a pretty girl, but they both dont know that the like the same girl, and they get in a huge argument. yeah, and HOLD THE LANGUAGE, SHEESH! I CAN REPORT YOU AND HAVE YOU BANNED OFF THE SITE!!!!! but i'm 2 nice 2 do tht. so please, hold the language!

 

[Lanydx reborn]

Your story is great. I hope for more.

 

[KingdomKey]

This.. was.. FANTASTIC!! Wish it hadn't ended but I'm glad to know you made a sequel Your fanfic was so funny I couldn't stop lol or stop reading it. It was that awesome. You did an awesome job.

 

[Broken Nobody]

Love it! c: -not done reading-.. ah D: may i please print the story out?

 

[Mikoto-Cat]

Love it! c: -not done reading-.. ah D: may i please print the story out?

Of course u can, I don't see anyone stopping u