Re: Sakura Secret Mission (A Naruto FanFic)
Here is the review guys,
Kiba: Okay not only was I BARELY IN THIS CHAPTER!! IT WAS ALL ABOUT NEJI!!
Me: LOOK FIRST OF ALL IT'S NOT ALL ABOUT YOU KIBA!!
Kiba: Right it's all about Naruto
Me: Sorry Kiba but Naruto my favorite character
Kiba: But I'm way COOLER THEN NARUTO!
Me: KIBA I DON'T CARE! AND LEAVE NEJI OUT OF THIS!
Shino: Kiba can't you just shut up already? Your giving me a headache.
Kiba: Shino WHO CARE'S WHAT YOU THINK?
Me: You know Kiba you could be in Naruto's place and have to deal with all those fangirls
Kiba: Who cares about a bunch of FANGIRL'S?? I SAY BRING IT ON!!
Shino: You really shouldn't say something like that Kiba.. the fangirls aren't something you should mess with
Kiba: Who CARE'S!! I'm not afraid of a bunch of FANGIRLS!!
Screams could be heard waiting outside demanding for Kiba to come outside
Me: Kiba if I were you.. I would run
Kiba: Yeah RIGHT LIKE I'M GOING TO RUN.. I'm Not AFRAID OF A BUNCH OF DUMB FANGIRLS!
Fangirls spot Kiba.. Kiba stands there teasing them
Fangirls: ROAR!!
Kiba gets swept away by the fangirls
Me: I warned you
Shino: He really should have run while he could.. he's such a fool
Me: Where's everyone else?
Shino: I don't know.. but I think I better go save Kiba
Me: Alright bye
Shino leaves
Neji shows up
Me: How are you doing Neji?
Neji stares off in a daze
Me: Neji.. you there?
Neji: ....
Me: Okay your creeping me out so.. I think I'll sit way over there. (points to a chair)
Neji looks up, then glares at me
Me: Ah.. why are you looking at me like that?
Neji: HOW CAN YOU ASK ME SUCH A BAKA QUESTION!! IS IT BAKA QUESTION DAY? THANKS TO YOU I HAVE TO SUFFER FOR TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS!
Me: Your so cute when your angry
Neji: IF YOU PUT A SINGLE TV IN THE NEXT CHAPTER I WILL.. I WILL.. I will..
Me: You will do what Neji? I make all the rules in this fan fic.
Neji: Why.. why me.. why can't it be someone else
Me: if you start whining or expect me to pity you then you might want to leave before lee shows up.. Or a tv
Neji gets up with a glare and leaves
Me: Well that was fun while it lasted
A little while later
Shino comes back carrying a beaten up Kiba
Me: Looks like the fangirls got the better of you Kiba
Kiba: just.. shut it
Shino: I got to admit it's kind of funny seeing you beaten up by girls
Shikamaru comes in
Me: Hello Shikamaru
Shikamaru: ...I think I'll keep my distance, after the last chapter I rather not get on your bad side again
Tenten: Why what did you do to get on her bad side in the last chapter?
Shikamaru just stares at her... before saying: You thought I came out of a garbage can
Tenten: I don't remember saying tha- ...Wait THAT WAS YOU??
Shikamaru nods : IT took an hour to get all the ketchup out of my hair
Tenten trying to picture Shikamaru as the garbage man she saw yesterday then begins to laugh
Shikamaru:Why do you think that's funny!
Tenten just laughs
Me: Because how often does something like this happen to some one like you?
Shikamaru thinks about it
Me: Besides it was priceless seeing you cover in Choji's food.
In the center of the room a TV shows up
Tenten watches then laughs harder as it replays the waiter dumping Choji food all over Shikamaru then does a close up showing Shikamaru face
Me: Wait didn't Choji order from the same waiter who dump food all over you?
Tenten: Yeah he did!! This is so hilarious... Shikamaru your so funny looking!!
Tenten goes back to laughing
Shikamaru:If the sand ninja show up for the party in the next chapter.. things are going to get crazier
Me: oh do you mean Garra, Temari, and Kankuro? Cause there all the way over there, and there a bit early for the party
Shikamaru: There here already!! That was fast.. Wait I go to get rid of this TV! It's too embarrassing!
Me: Tenten I think you should move
Tenten stops watching the TV but before she even move a fraction all the way from a distant you can hear a certain yell coming closer and louder
All of us see Lee in the distance
Shikamaru: Good thing Neji's gone...
Lee comes running:NO THE ALMIGHTY TV HAS COME BACK FROM THE DEPTHS OF NEJI'S DESTRUCTION PHASE!! DON'T DESTROY IT!!
Shikamaru: Lee it's for your own good.. and Neji's if I get rid of this thing
Me: You know what would be fun..
Shikamaru and Lee wait for me to go on, but Lee get's impatient
Lee:TELL US!! SO I CAN TAKE THE TV ALREADY!!
Me: Let's see who can get to it first.. you or Shikamaru
Shikamaru: sighs... why do I have to race Lee for it?
Me: DO WHAT I SAY OR ELSE I WILL MAKE SURE SOMETHING MORE EMBARRASSING HAPPENS TO YOU IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
Shikamaru: Girls like you are scary.. fine I'll do it
Lee: YES I have the most confidence I will win this race
Both wait for me to say go
Me: 3..2.. 1.. G-
Before I could even finish saying go a figure runs past destroying the TV before Shikamaru or Lee can even blink to see what happen to it
Me: o... Wait is that?
Having seen it blown to bits, there in the smoke stood Neji wielding a bat, breathing hard then gives us a deadly look
Me: I think I'll wait over here.. maybe go talk to Garra
Shikamaru: right behind you
Lee: Uh.. hi Neji.. um.. WHY DID YOU RUIN THE ALMIGHTY TV?? Other then that why are you looking at me like that? Your scaring me Neji... what are you doing?? Neji?!!
Me: Whatever you do.. don't look back Shikamaru.. you definitely don't want to watch
Shikamaru: Yup should have seen that coming
In the back ground you could hear Neji yelling at Lee..
Shikamaru: Poor Lee.. all he wanted was a TV
Me: Glad I'm not Neji who has to have Lee as his team member
Garra appears beside me
Me: Hello Garra
Garra: Is that Lee?
Me: Oh.. um.. let's just say you don't want to know
Garra: ...sigh I don't understand why I'm here
Me: would you like to go home then?
Garra: no..
Kankuro: Garra I think we need to be somewhere, remember?
Garra: right maybe I will find naruto..
Me: If I were you I would stay clear of naruto for now.
Kankuro: Why?
Me: oh... Let's just say the next chapter.. going to be loads of fun, laughs evilly
Garra and Kankuro leave looking confused by what I could mean by "loads of fun"
Tenten: They have no idea..
Me: yup, poor naruto he has no idea just how bad things are going to be in the next chapter..
Naruto shows up
Naruto: what do you mean bad things are going to happen?
Me: You'll see
Kiba: I have the feeling things are going to get worse
Shino: your probably right
Me: He is..
End
Well hope you guys enjoy this review. The next chapter of Sakura Secret Mission will be coming soon.