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KingdomKey

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Re: Sakura Secret Mission (A Naruto FanFic)

Thats a relief to know you guys like the fourth chapter =) wasn't sure if you guys would or not.

Sorry Zarin I Yehudahi for the confusion of what AC means. Should have made a note for what it stands for like this (AC means for those who don't know Assassins Creed).

But since Lanydx Reborn has clear that up for ya, I will make sure next time, if need to I will add a side note for anything else.

And thank you for clearing that up Lanydx Reborn :)

Also review will be next, but there will be a few surprise guests, so I am letting you guys guess who they may be.. And they may be in the next chapter of Sakura Secret Mission.
 

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Somehow I double posted... :-/

Well tomorrow will be editing fourth chapter so the sentences will run smoother.

and if I have time review should be up tomorrow once I get done with it :)
 
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Re: Sakura Secret Mission (A Naruto FanFic)

You're putting Assassin's Creed? Sounds interesting...I'm intrigued. It's a good combo.
 

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Yeah, I have an idea for the next chapter that has AC put into it.. Naruto will be like the Assassins sort of.. :)

Review to be up possibly tomorrow or some time soon, chapter in a day or two for I haven't started yet. However I am currently working on the review :)

yup should be fun mixing AC into the next chapter.
 

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Hey glad to help but don't let the readers push you around. It's your story do what you want.
 

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Alright but I still like the AC idea. Just depends on how the chapter flows :)

Also just to let you guys know, the review won't be up until later. So depending on when I post it... it could be quite awhile. So if I don't post it soon which means it will be really late, then you guys can check it out tomorrow. Like I did for the fourth chapter.

Other wise it will definitely be up some time tonight. And thank you for still going to this fanfic, telling me what you think, and requesting for more chapters. Knowing its good and stuff like that, makes me write more chapters, an reviews knowing people read them and find them good or funny.

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Here is the review guys,

Kiba: Okay not only was I BARELY IN THIS CHAPTER!! IT WAS ALL ABOUT NEJI!!
Me: LOOK FIRST OF ALL IT'S NOT ALL ABOUT YOU KIBA!!
Kiba: Right it's all about Naruto
Me: Sorry Kiba but Naruto my favorite character
Kiba: But I'm way COOLER THEN NARUTO!
Me: KIBA I DON'T CARE! AND LEAVE NEJI OUT OF THIS!
Shino: Kiba can't you just shut up already? Your giving me a headache.
Kiba: Shino WHO CARE'S WHAT YOU THINK?
Me: You know Kiba you could be in Naruto's place and have to deal with all those fangirls
Kiba: Who cares about a bunch of FANGIRL'S?? I SAY BRING IT ON!!
Shino: You really shouldn't say something like that Kiba.. the fangirls aren't something you should mess with
Kiba: Who CARE'S!! I'm not afraid of a bunch of FANGIRLS!!
Screams could be heard waiting outside demanding for Kiba to come outside
Me: Kiba if I were you.. I would run
Kiba: Yeah RIGHT LIKE I'M GOING TO RUN.. I'm Not AFRAID OF A BUNCH OF DUMB FANGIRLS!
Fangirls spot Kiba.. Kiba stands there teasing them
Fangirls: ROAR!!
Kiba gets swept away by the fangirls
Me: I warned you
Shino: He really should have run while he could.. he's such a fool
Me: Where's everyone else?
Shino: I don't know.. but I think I better go save Kiba
Me: Alright bye
Shino leaves
Neji shows up
Me: How are you doing Neji?
Neji stares off in a daze
Me: Neji.. you there?
Neji: ....
Me: Okay your creeping me out so.. I think I'll sit way over there. (points to a chair)
Neji looks up, then glares at me
Me: Ah.. why are you looking at me like that?
Neji: HOW CAN YOU ASK ME SUCH A BAKA QUESTION!! IS IT BAKA QUESTION DAY? THANKS TO YOU I HAVE TO SUFFER FOR TWO WHOLE CHAPTERS!
Me: Your so cute when your angry
Neji: IF YOU PUT A SINGLE TV IN THE NEXT CHAPTER I WILL.. I WILL.. I will..
Me: You will do what Neji? I make all the rules in this fan fic.
Neji: Why.. why me.. why can't it be someone else
Me: if you start whining or expect me to pity you then you might want to leave before lee shows up.. Or a tv
Neji gets up with a glare and leaves
Me: Well that was fun while it lasted
A little while later
Shino comes back carrying a beaten up Kiba
Me: Looks like the fangirls got the better of you Kiba
Kiba: just.. shut it
Shino: I got to admit it's kind of funny seeing you beaten up by girls
Shikamaru comes in
Me: Hello Shikamaru
Shikamaru: ...I think I'll keep my distance, after the last chapter I rather not get on your bad side again
Tenten: Why what did you do to get on her bad side in the last chapter?
Shikamaru just stares at her... before saying: You thought I came out of a garbage can
Tenten: I don't remember saying tha- ...Wait THAT WAS YOU??
Shikamaru nods : IT took an hour to get all the ketchup out of my hair
Tenten trying to picture Shikamaru as the garbage man she saw yesterday then begins to laugh
Shikamaru:Why do you think that's funny!
Tenten just laughs
Me: Because how often does something like this happen to some one like you?
Shikamaru thinks about it
Me: Besides it was priceless seeing you cover in Choji's food.
In the center of the room a TV shows up
Tenten watches then laughs harder as it replays the waiter dumping Choji food all over Shikamaru then does a close up showing Shikamaru face
Me: Wait didn't Choji order from the same waiter who dump food all over you?
Tenten: Yeah he did!! This is so hilarious... Shikamaru your so funny looking!!
Tenten goes back to laughing
Shikamaru:If the sand ninja show up for the party in the next chapter.. things are going to get crazier
Me: oh do you mean Garra, Temari, and Kankuro? Cause there all the way over there, and there a bit early for the party
Shikamaru: There here already!! That was fast.. Wait I go to get rid of this TV! It's too embarrassing!
Me: Tenten I think you should move
Tenten stops watching the TV but before she even move a fraction all the way from a distant you can hear a certain yell coming closer and louder
All of us see Lee in the distance
Shikamaru: Good thing Neji's gone...
Lee comes running:NO THE ALMIGHTY TV HAS COME BACK FROM THE DEPTHS OF NEJI'S DESTRUCTION PHASE!! DON'T DESTROY IT!!
Shikamaru: Lee it's for your own good.. and Neji's if I get rid of this thing
Me: You know what would be fun..
Shikamaru and Lee wait for me to go on, but Lee get's impatient
Lee:TELL US!! SO I CAN TAKE THE TV ALREADY!!
Me: Let's see who can get to it first.. you or Shikamaru
Shikamaru: sighs... why do I have to race Lee for it?
Me: DO WHAT I SAY OR ELSE I WILL MAKE SURE SOMETHING MORE EMBARRASSING HAPPENS TO YOU IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
Shikamaru: Girls like you are scary.. fine I'll do it
Lee: YES I have the most confidence I will win this race
Both wait for me to say go
Me: 3..2.. 1.. G-
Before I could even finish saying go a figure runs past destroying the TV before Shikamaru or Lee can even blink to see what happen to it
Me: o... Wait is that?
Having seen it blown to bits, there in the smoke stood Neji wielding a bat, breathing hard then gives us a deadly look
Me: I think I'll wait over here.. maybe go talk to Garra
Shikamaru: right behind you
Lee: Uh.. hi Neji.. um.. WHY DID YOU RUIN THE ALMIGHTY TV?? Other then that why are you looking at me like that? Your scaring me Neji... what are you doing?? Neji?!!
Me: Whatever you do.. don't look back Shikamaru.. you definitely don't want to watch
Shikamaru: Yup should have seen that coming
In the back ground you could hear Neji yelling at Lee..
Shikamaru: Poor Lee.. all he wanted was a TV
Me: Glad I'm not Neji who has to have Lee as his team member
Garra appears beside me
Me: Hello Garra
Garra: Is that Lee?
Me: Oh.. um.. let's just say you don't want to know
Garra: ...sigh I don't understand why I'm here
Me: would you like to go home then?
Garra: no..
Kankuro: Garra I think we need to be somewhere, remember?
Garra: right maybe I will find naruto..
Me: If I were you I would stay clear of naruto for now.
Kankuro: Why?
Me: oh... Let's just say the next chapter.. going to be loads of fun, laughs evilly
Garra and Kankuro leave looking confused by what I could mean by "loads of fun"
Tenten: They have no idea..
Me: yup, poor naruto he has no idea just how bad things are going to be in the next chapter..
Naruto shows up
Naruto: what do you mean bad things are going to happen?
Me: You'll see
Kiba: I have the feeling things are going to get worse
Shino: your probably right
Me: He is..

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Well hope you guys enjoy this review. The next chapter of Sakura Secret Mission will be coming soon.
 
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Lol :)

By the way what does WoMD mean?
 

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LoL =) Would have added Sai but because this is the before Sasuke goes off and leaves, I wasn't sure if adding him would be a problem or not.. I guess I could.. would be fun to add Sai.. Knowing Sai he would enjoy all the havoc that's going on in these chapters an reviews.

Well do you think I should? Cause I can.. I don't think anyone can tell the difference anyways..

Also was this review ok? I know there was less funny parts.. but saving it for the next chapter or two. But just wants to know what ya think.
 

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The review was good. One character who needs to be in this fic other then Sai...GARRA OF THE FUNK!!
 

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Okay. I'll add Sai.. Yeah I know Garra, Temari, and Kankuro didn't get much spot light in the review, going to work on that for the next chapter or so. Probably be three more chapters, I think I can fit Sai in some how with out messing the plot up.. Garra will be fine since I have plans for him along with everyone else.

Wow got a lot of work to do when I think about it. Going to take a few days to do all this. There will also be more reviews.. I think the 2nd Review wasn't nearly as good as the first because of the time crunch I was in today. Usually it's easier when I have more time to think about it or it just comes to me. Hopefully if I make another review it will be a lot better.

So thanks for telling me it was good... but not entirely sure it was.. got to work on next chapter for Sakura secret mission, and the rest of the stuff :)
 

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lol neji just came out of nowhere and destroyed that tv lol feel a little sorry for lee though lol ^_^, this review was very funny KingdomKey ^_^ *gives thumbs up* wonder what gaara kankuro and temari will do in the next chapter, can't wait to find out ^_^
 

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Okay, glad to know you like it SogeUsopp114 and Lanydx Reborn likes it.

So more chapters will be up sometime soon.
 
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