Oops Double Post - hehe;
Well suddenly I found Chapter 13 on my comp. The writer must have sent it to me. LoL (Read the posts above to get that.)
I figured I should post this for the actual writer.
And if I was the writer I would say this;
Sakura Chan News! What's happening after this story ends.
Gah! We have 4 chapters left after this one!
- Chapter 14 ~ My Sanctuary (In Progress)
- Chapter 15 ~ An Unexpected, Unwanted, Not So Welocome, Guest (Partly Finished/ The End Is Done.)
- Chapter 16 ~ The Final Battle (Already Finished / 6 Pages in Writing. @.@ Lots Of Typing To Do.)
- Chapter 17 ~ A New Beginning (Already Finished)
T_ T It is sad. The story is definitely coming to an abrupt halt. Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I want to write my story some more. But all that has a start has an end. Too bad its just so soon. It seems soon to me anyway.
Well I am doing a last revision to this story. Yes one more. Only this time it's in third person - and it starts off with Sakura's mother alive. ( I have the first chapter done.)And Yukito gets arrested.(Not in the first chapter, Duh! Eventually he does.)Crap! Spoilers. The last version is rated Teen instead of what this one is which would be like PG13. And sorry kiddies, that one isn't going on this site, because there are younger kids on this site, and I dont wanna expand their vocabulary in a bad way. *Yes the third and last revision has curse words. There was even suppost to be a few in this version that were edited out.* (By Me, Duh!) If you want the last version PM for the site that I do have it on. I'll give ya the link. If i give you the link and your under 13 then you have been warned. There is going to be content not suitable for you.
I was originally not going to write a sequel right away because of the whole rewrite thing, but if you guys really want me too I will. ^-^
And I'm pretty sure that's it.
I'll keep you posted if it's not.
So now that I'm done. Here's Chapter 13! (Yea I know it's short. But I'm two seconds away from brain dead here. Gimme a break.)
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Chapter 13 ~ Home Again
I stood there in the alleyway not wanting to move. I knew that what was coming next. I knew what I would have to do. I wanted to get revenge on my father for killing my mother, but what if I fail? Then he gets my powers too. Who will stop him then?
I shook my head trying to get rid of my doubt. I looked at Yukito, and then I started to walk out of the alleyway. Very slowly might I add. I got to the end of the alleyway and looked out. My father wasn’t there. I sighed, and then stepped out onto the sidewalk. When I looked around, my father still wasn’t there. A huge rush of relief came. I closed my eyes, and then I started to walk with Yukito. Or rather I started to run to him. He was way ahead of me.
“Slow down!” I yelled at him. Of course, he didn’t.
I finally caught up with him. The second I knew he could see me. I gave him the death glare. “You could have waited.” I said
“But I didn’t want to,” Yukito replied, “it’s not my fault you’re slow.”
I stuck my tongue out at Yukito. He can be a real jerk sometimes.
“So where are we going?” I asked
“You’ll see” Yukito answered
We walked straight through the bad part of town. I’ve lived here for five years now, and I have never gone down these streets. I’ve never even heard of them. Then again why would my mother tell me the how to get to the bad parts of town. One thing is for sure. I’m never going down those streets again.
There were tons of drug dealers and people selling god knows what in the alleyways. One of them actually came up to me and Yukito. We said no and the dude wouldn’t leave us alone . . . so he mysteriously flew through the air and hit a wall. No one bothered us after that.
Anyway, after about 30 minutes of walking through that horrible part town we got to a fence.
I stared at Yukito not knowing what to say. Yukito looked at me and then started to climb the fence.
“What are you doing?! You don’t know what’s behind that fence!” I yelled in a hushed tone. I didn’t want whatever or whoever was behind that fence to hear me.
“Actually I do.” Yukito answered, “Now follow me.”
I looked down at my feet and started to climb. By the time I was half way up Yukito reached the top and was already on the other side. About five minutes of climbing I reached the top, and then I looked down, big mistake. Because I couldn’t move after seeing how far up I was. Then I got so scared I let go of the fence. After that I fell down the other side of the fence. To top that all off, Yukito caught me.
Yukito was grinning from ear to ear. He was enjoying my extreme embarrassment. This is one of those moments where you’re so embarrassed you can feel you face getting redder. I’m gonna kick myself forever with this one. I would have rather taken the pain from falling. Why did he have to catch me?
Yukito put me down. I turned around and suddenly I knew where we were.
We were in my backyard. I was home.
Spoiler
*Backs away* Umm Yeah.........Oh! Theres something I need to do over ther *Points behind her*...........Well I better get going now........