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I've read most of your fic, not bad to be Honest, however if you have spelling Problems why not write all you stuff on Microsoft word since it has a spell check system?

other then that your style of writing is funny & Interesting. . .I really wanna rep U however. . .looking at a sertant red dot I don't think I can do much =*(
 

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its okay and yes i do have microsoft and i use it! no really i do sorry... its just i will think something and sometimes i will type what im thinking wich is wrong...i know it sounds like a really bad excuess but its true my teachers found that out....but it true! and thankies for the rep XP i dont even care if its not real! im just glad i got a new fan!
 

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Riku’s love chapter 13...I don’t know why I said 19 last time...I think it was me not sleeping...oh well welcome to that last chapter. It is a very sad yet nice day summer has ended and well so has the fan fic.... im going to miss this. But I had fun doing it.
Im going to start a new one! Yay I would love it if my readers would read it!

Thank you for the comments! Sorasheart281


fire and heat part 1
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Since that night no one has talked about what happened. It has been hard. But I have my friends holding on to me and watching over me. Plus my mom and father. I want to learn about them and what they were like. Is that to much to ask? I sometimes dream about them and what they were like. But I don’t know if that was true. I love them and want them to feel me. Kairi has a picture of them on her dresser, I look at if often...well I look at it a lot. Riku has been strong and has been there for me. Im very grateful.

“Jasimen?” asked Riku

“Yeah?”

“ would you like to goto the beach today? Have some fun?” he asked his voice had a hope full tone to it.

I thought about it why not? I can use some fun! “Okay im in!”I piped

“Yes!” he did his own little dance ( AN the happy dance!)

“ give me a few minutes to change ,okay?” I asked.

“ fine meet me at the beach!” he said walking away.

“ okay.” I closed the door to change.

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when I walked to the beach I saw everyone there. I was happy to be with my friends. They all spotted me walking from my house and jumped like fools. I rolled my eyes and saw Riku walking towards me. I could only smile.

“ good to see you out and about.” he said joking.

“ yah I need to get my head together and take it all in.”

“Good.” he leaned in a kissed my cheek.

“ hey love birds get over here!” yelled Tidus

“Were coming!” I yelled as we walked with are toes in the sand.

“ hey, I was wondering when you would come outside.” kairi said.

“ I was in my own little world.” I walked to the shore and looked at it, taking it in.

“ its beautiful right?” asked Riku.

“ its perfect.” I said looking at the sea.

“ im happy you came here, it seems complete with you here.” he said looking as well.

“ im happy as well I look forward to the future.”

All of the sudden the ground shook. Sending us flying to the ground. Everyone had fear in there eyes.

“ what’s going on?” I asked holding on to Riku.

“ I don’t know, but this isn’t good.” he said holding on to me.

The shaking grew. I was getting afraid. Then I fell throw a hole it felt like water, I was drowning. I couldn’t breath. I was shaking. I landed on my feet and saw nothing. I looked around and then saw light. I jumped. And then I saw where I was at. It was a white place. It reminded me of a palace. Was I dreaming? I saw two lovers holding two babies. The man looked loving in the women’s eyes and smiled. He was so happy. He had dark circles under his eyes. His hair was a mess and looked as if he just went through hell and back again. But his eyes.. Looked so..

“ aren’t we the luckiest parents?” the men asked

“ yes we are so lucky that our babies lived.” the women said looking at her children with loving eyes.

“ what should we name are children, Samantha?” asked the tall man
“ this one is Kairi.” she said with loving voice

“ that is perfect my dear.” he said with a bigger smile.

“ now, Tom what are you going to name the other?”

“ she has my eyes, and she has emerald my chin and my hair....Jaismen.”


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im evil!!!! hahahahaaha im crazy!!!! I hope you liked part one! Part two will be close I must work on it!
 

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she read!!!! jumps all round! i have been haveing family troubles >< so i dont know when i well be able to work on it i hope buy next week it might be up it just dpends. im relaxing and not trying to worry but it nevers works so please beare with me as i well try to have this up and running.

PS im makeing a new one as soon as it is over. it depends.its a yuffie and leon one, im haveing my english teacher look it over ><
 
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