okay befor i begin im just going to clear some stuff up...im not that good of a speller i know i suck so plz bear with me. 2 thing is that i have been thinking about riku not haveing someone he has 2 best freinds and there kindagoing out so it left me to think that maybe i should write a fan fic about him and someone new. this is grl who ur going to meet is not an oringal charcter she kinda pop one nite in my dreams and it went from there..well enogh of me jabbing shall we begin? i hope u enjoy my new fic and this is my frist one i would luv it to see comaints and how i can approve of it and anything u have in ur mind...... befor i forget its 1 person view of riku and the new grl
What a beautiful day...the sun is out and its hot really hot. I wonder how sora and kairi are man do i miss them its been hard buy myslef and im mostly alone it would be nice to have someone around to hang with and to talk to.
"what the...?"
There was a girl on the road she looked half dead i ran up to her to see if she was okay.
"uhh are u okay?" i said a little stupity in my voice.
"Oh god not again well u people leave me alone! You ****ing order members keep comeing after me non stop! i told you once and this is the last time i well say it again I DO NOT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT KINGDOM HEARTS I KNOW NOTHING!"
"okkaaayyy um there is no order members they have been long gone."
to this when i said this the girls temper rose she looked like she was going to kill me!
"Thats im going to end this once and for all".she said screaming her lungs out and as she said that two keyblades came out one was oblivan and the other was oathkeeper.
"If you want me come and get me!"she said running up to me
I took out my keyblade and dodge her attack easily she came around and swung her keyblade so hard that i wont flying and hit the ground hard. When i got back up she was already comeing for me and at that i hit as hard as i could and at that she fell to the ground and didnt move.
'oh **** what did i do?" I said with my voice shakeing
I ran to her to see if she was alive i checked her pluse and it was normal. i checked her head to see if she was hot and she was bruning hot it looked as if she had a fever. I picked her up as gently as i could and cared her to a near river i went in to the water and laid her in there so she could cool and it seemed to be working at this she woke up.
''Wh..where am I?" she asked softly
"Your at a near by river and after i hit you i came over to see if you were not dead i checked your forehead and you were bruning hot so i took you over here to cool you down do you feel better?" i asked a little bit woirred
"yeah im a little bit better thank you i think i owe you one." she said laughing a bit.
"Its okay it happens you just rest okay do you have a camp set up?" I asked
"yeah its not to far from here." she said
"okay let me take you to their and then i well leave you alone."
"No i well make you some dinner i think its the least i could do since i sent you flying." she said laughing at her own joke.
"hm well okay i think dinner would do.'' i thought it was perfect thing i havent ate since god knows when.
At that i started to walk to her camp site and found fearly quikly i noticed she had dark taned skin and big green eyes she had a round face and looked very sweet, she also had brown colored hair. she kinda reminded me of kairi.
okay well thats the end of the first chapter i hope you enjoyed it! rember i can really use comments to help me make this easry for you guys!
What a beautiful day...the sun is out and its hot really hot. I wonder how sora and kairi are man do i miss them its been hard buy myslef and im mostly alone it would be nice to have someone around to hang with and to talk to.
"what the...?"
There was a girl on the road she looked half dead i ran up to her to see if she was okay.
"uhh are u okay?" i said a little stupity in my voice.
"Oh god not again well u people leave me alone! You ****ing order members keep comeing after me non stop! i told you once and this is the last time i well say it again I DO NOT KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT KINGDOM HEARTS I KNOW NOTHING!"
"okkaaayyy um there is no order members they have been long gone."
to this when i said this the girls temper rose she looked like she was going to kill me!
"Thats im going to end this once and for all".she said screaming her lungs out and as she said that two keyblades came out one was oblivan and the other was oathkeeper.
"If you want me come and get me!"she said running up to me
I took out my keyblade and dodge her attack easily she came around and swung her keyblade so hard that i wont flying and hit the ground hard. When i got back up she was already comeing for me and at that i hit as hard as i could and at that she fell to the ground and didnt move.
'oh **** what did i do?" I said with my voice shakeing
I ran to her to see if she was alive i checked her pluse and it was normal. i checked her head to see if she was hot and she was bruning hot it looked as if she had a fever. I picked her up as gently as i could and cared her to a near river i went in to the water and laid her in there so she could cool and it seemed to be working at this she woke up.
''Wh..where am I?" she asked softly
"Your at a near by river and after i hit you i came over to see if you were not dead i checked your forehead and you were bruning hot so i took you over here to cool you down do you feel better?" i asked a little bit woirred
"yeah im a little bit better thank you i think i owe you one." she said laughing a bit.
"Its okay it happens you just rest okay do you have a camp set up?" I asked
"yeah its not to far from here." she said
"okay let me take you to their and then i well leave you alone."
"No i well make you some dinner i think its the least i could do since i sent you flying." she said laughing at her own joke.
"hm well okay i think dinner would do.'' i thought it was perfect thing i havent ate since god knows when.
At that i started to walk to her camp site and found fearly quikly i noticed she had dark taned skin and big green eyes she had a round face and looked very sweet, she also had brown colored hair. she kinda reminded me of kairi.
okay well thats the end of the first chapter i hope you enjoyed it! rember i can really use comments to help me make this easry for you guys!
