First chapter http://forums.khinsider.com/fanfiction/115492-riku-terra.html
Well here is the second Chapter, I hope you like it. I clairified some things and I hope they answer any questions that you had from the last chapter.
Oh, as you can see, I changed the girl's name, her name by popular vote is Mai!!!:thumbsup:
Yeah, and I tried to intent but that didn't work so well.
The stars (*) like that are extra stuff that was not in the typed story. I added it after you guys had questions.
So, like I said before any questions please comment, I'll answer any questions!
I tried not to make it too long, I want the chapters to be short, so yeah, I hope you enjoy!
Riku and Mai
Two
Mai paused, looked in all directions except the way she came from and gasped for air. Mai then remembered and headed to her left. The dogs, the barking, she could remember all of it. She was running, she remembered she was running. Late at night, she was running for a long time. Mai ran and ran; she was getting closer, closer to her last memory that was full and vivid.
Well here is the second Chapter, I hope you like it. I clairified some things and I hope they answer any questions that you had from the last chapter.
Oh, as you can see, I changed the girl's name, her name by popular vote is Mai!!!:thumbsup:
Yeah, and I tried to intent but that didn't work so well.
The stars (*) like that are extra stuff that was not in the typed story. I added it after you guys had questions.
So, like I said before any questions please comment, I'll answer any questions!
I tried not to make it too long, I want the chapters to be short, so yeah, I hope you enjoy!
Riku and Mai
Two
Mai paused, looked in all directions except the way she came from and gasped for air. Mai then remembered and headed to her left. The dogs, the barking, she could remember all of it. She was running, she remembered she was running. Late at night, she was running for a long time. Mai ran and ran; she was getting closer, closer to her last memory that was full and vivid.
Mai stopped and looked around again. It was hard to remember what the area looked like. She was running in the dark. Mai ran by a dead dog. She found the area… the last vivid, clear memory she had.
Mai found it, she looked around, and she remembered it. She looked around and went to the tree that she felt was familiar. She touched it and turned her back to it. Mai sat there and thought back. She thought with all her might. Soon she remembered why she was being chased. They wanted her, they wanted her body.
Mai allowed her mind to wander. It took her to a place where it was cold. Mai walked in and did something, after some time she walked out. As she walked way she was pushed into a building. She was knocked unconscious; she woke with a man over her. Mai pushed him off and ran with the sheet. She ran not knowing where she was headed. She just needed a place that is safe. The sun was setting, she tried to ask people for help but they ran at the sight of her, others would throw trash at her. Mai had to run. She had to flee to find a person who would take her in.
After a few minutes Mai heard dogs chasing her. Mai ran and found herself in the woods. She couldn’t remember the faces though. She wanted to see them so that when she got away she would hunt them down. But she couldn’t remember the face.
Mai heard a gun shot, she heard dogs, and she heard steps.
“What are you doing?!” Riku scared her out of her thoughts.
Mai looked at him, “I can’t remember…” she said after a long while.
Riku sighed. He realized he was being too rough. “Look, just don’t go off running again, not like that anyway. I don’t want you getting hurt.”
“Listen… I’m sorry; I didn’t mean to, I just can’t remember…”
Riku stared at her. His blue eyes studied her. “Mai…”
“I can’t stand this! I can’t remember anything!” she yelled, she stomped. Then forgetting what she asked not to do, she dashed off. Riku caught her and twirled her around and wrapped his arms around her.
“I told you to stop! You’re so stubborn!” Riku held her. “Why are you so stubborn?!”
“So are you!” she started to yell. “Let me go! Let me go!” she yelled. Riku held her tight; he wasn’t going to let her go.
“I’m stronger than you so give it up!” Riku yelled after at least five minutes of her yelling and tugging.
“I hate you! Let go of me!” she repeated.
“Mai, I risked my life to save you I didn’t have to, now you either relax or I’ll chain you to the bed at the apartment.” Riku said.
Mai fought more.
Riku groaned and flipped her on his shoulder, holding her over his shoulder he started toward the city. Mai fought but Riku held on to her tight.
Mai fought all the way there, as they walked through the city people would stop and stare at both Mai and Riku, especially Riku. Riku controlled his anger and closed his eyes every time he saw someone going to laugh. Once at the apartment door Riku realized that Mai had stopped fighting. His back was warm from all the hitting; his shoulder was extremely hot from Mai just being there.
He looked at her, his arm wrapped around her waist. His blue eyes met her’s. He set her down. Mai just folded her arms and turned away. Riku didn’t say anything; he just unlocked the door and went in. Mai soon followed closing the door behind her. Mai walked over to Riku, standing in the kitchen, grabbing a cup from the high cabinet. Mai sighed; she could tell Riku was sulking.
“I’m sorry,” Mai said finally. “I just…”
“I never met a more stubborn person,” Riku laughed. “You remind me so much of him…” Riku’s voice trailed off.
“I’m sorry, really.” She tried again to repeat herself.
“Don’t worry about it. I understand how weak you feel, I once felt the same.”
“Weak?! I am not weak!”
Riku turned to meet her face.
“I know you are,” Riku teased.
“I am not!” she yelled louder.
“Okay, prove it, beat me in a duel.”
“A duel?”
“This right now,” he said a grin still on his face.
“Fine!” Mai yelled. *“Right now, here and now!”
Riku stood and went to the living room; he pushed the coffee table to the side and waited for Mai in the center of the living room. Riku didn’t put up any fist he just stood there. Mai stood confused and met him face to face.
“I don’t feel like fighting a girl but I have a solution,” Riku went to the television and reached behind it. He pulled two black rubber swords from it. He tossed on to Mai. “Here, that way I won’t have to hit you,” Riku said. He lifted his fake sword it was level with his eyes. He waited.
Mai attacked first and Riku dodged it. Mai was frozen in confusion, she didn’t see him move, and then she felt a soft push. She was hit with the fake weapon. Riku didn’t move after that, he waited.
Mai turned quickly and pulled her weapon through with her arms. Riku just jumped back a little and swung his blade in a similar pattern only his came and didn’t stop. Riku hopped a little with the weapon above his head and when he pulled it down over his head it Mai blocked it. She pushed up with her weapon. Riku continued to push; Mai fell to her knee as her arms started to give.
Mai looked up to see Riku grinning. She took this as a shock, he couldn’t believe it. He was having fun. Mai found some strength, she pushed the weapon off her’s and attacked. Riku must have seen it coming before she attacked because he fell on his back and kicked jumped his way back up. Mai was hit with his feet. She felt and Riku stood above her, his weapon slightly pressed against her chin.
“That was fun, you fight well,” Riku said.
Mai just looked up, she took his hand, “Thank you…” she said softly. He still had the smile on his face. “I haven’t battled like that in a long time, I think two years,” Riku took the weapons and placed them behind the TV again. He laughed. It was weird to see him laugh. Even though she had been in the apartment for four weeks, she had never heard him laugh. Mai thought back day by day, the first week and a half she was out cold, the next three weeks after that she was healing faster and he would stay in the room for an hour or so and then leave. He would talk about little things, things that didn’t give her a hint on his life. But he never laughed. He smiled very now and again but he never laughed.
Riku stopped laughing, he walked with Mai to the hall but only fore he turned and faced her.*
Then there was silence, followed by a sound of breath leaving the body.
“You got him to talk more…” Roxas appeared, he was standing in the door way holding a plastic bag of sodas. “No matter what I do, we can’t hold a good conversation.”
Riku turned away and went to his room.
Mai was left alone; she looked at this blonde haired boy. She was not sure who he was. Then a flicker of the past came to her mind. She had brushed pass him earlier. Mai watched him put the bags in the kitchen. She couldn’t help but feel like she met this person before. But she couldn’t think of the time. How sad, Mai thought, I can’t remember anything but fights.
“I can’t believe you got him to talk so much.” Roxas took the soda out of the bag. “Well, you must be Mai, I heard about you.”
“I’m sorry for running pass you the way I did.”
“No problem. I don’t really understand nor care.”
Mai lowered her head for a moment. Riku soon came back and didn’t make eye contact with Mai. He didn’t seem to realize she was there. For the first time in weeks, Riku was ignoring her. Mai at first didn’t care but after the first five hours she felt alone even though they were both there.
“You really suck you know that?!” Roxas said as he pushed Riku in the shoulder, their football game was close, there was only a few minutes left on the clock. Riku was even athletic in video games! Riku continued to stay a head of the game. He got his field goal and turned his head slowly at Roxas.
“I win again, you need more training,” Riku said, the time was up, the forth quarter had ended.
Roxas dropped the joystick, “I give up,” Roxas faced Mai, “Do you want to play?”
“No, thanks…” she said slowly, that was the most attention she got in ten hours. They were playing games for ten hours. Each game Riku won, Roxas lost.
“Alright, well, I got to go, I have to go to work tomorrow,” Roxas said, he worked for three jobs, he got rid of bees, took out the trash, and delivered mail, but he had flex-time, he was able to change his work hours at will. “See ya,” he waved, closing the door behind him.
Riku didn’t say anything; he turned off the PS2 and headed for his room. Walking by Mai he paused. Then he walked away. He didn’t look down. He went to his room and went to sleep.
Mai couldn’t believe he ignored her for ten hours, it was late and it was dark outside except for the street lights that pierced the darkness in the apartment. Mai pulled her eyes away from the street light and went to bed.
The next morning Riku was in the kitchen, he was still silent, he didn’t talk to Mai. Riku completely ignored her. Riku was cooking an omelet, odd because he never made one, he normally made pancakes. Mai noticed that he realized she was there, he had her plate made already, and it was in the living room. Mai at first sat at the living room table, giving Riku his space. But after a few minutes Mai couldn’t control herself and gathered her things and went to the table in the dinning room which was open and next to the living room.
Riku looked up from his plate.
Mai wanted answered. She was going to press for them. “Why?”
Riku looked up, he sat staring at her. He didn’t reply.
“Why did you ignore me?”
After a long time Riku finally answered. “Today is the year anniversary of his death.”
Mai fell silent. Riku looked at his plate.
“He was killed because of me. I was there but I couldn’t save him every since that night I’ve been fighting off the enemy, He fought strong, but I couldn’t save him. I couldn’t get to him in time.” Riku didn’t seem like he was going to cry, he didn’t seem sad, he seemed enraged. “I can’t help but think it was my fault, he was going to marry Kairi, he told me this, and I wanted to see him follow through. But that night…”
Mai sighed; she pressed for the answer and realized that she brought out more grief. “But why? What does that have to do with me?”
“I saved your life because I felt I’d be doing something right by him, we had been friends for over twelve year and he’s gone now, but when I first saw you I remembered him. The heartless were coming in, attacking him, he was fine until something happened, he was shot in the arm somehow, I saw him fight stronger but I couldn’t understand… I saw him shot again, I ran for him but the heartless surrounded me. As I fought them off, he sunk lower to the ground. I ran to him, I had to save him, he had a bright future.” Riku paused.
Mai looked at her food and pushed it aside.
“It was so hard to understand, how could he travel, fight hundreds of enemies and fall here so quickly. But I didn’t even think, I tried to save him. I killed the heartless but it was too late. The Keyblade had disappeared. When I touched him Roxas started to form.”
“Roxas…”
“The boy from last night, he is the nobody of my friend.”
“Nobody? Heartless? Keyblade?”
Riku looked up and saw Mai getting pale. Then suddenly she tipped over to her side and started to fall. Riku ran to save her. He caught her and held her in his arms. Mai was unconscious.
Riku held her and after a moment carried her body to her room. Riku didn’t have to wait long for her to wake. She jumped up with a fright. Riku was at the window.
“Riku?” Mai looked around. She couldn’t remember how she got in bed.
“You pass out a lot don’t you?” he said, he was near the window staring out to the world.
“But…”
“Why did you pass out?”
“I don’t know.”
“What was the last thing you remember?”
Mai paused. “I don’t know, I remember something like Heartless, Nobodies, and a Keyblade. But after that I can’t remember anything.” Mai answered.
“Riku looked out the window; I guess I know what I have to do.”
“What?”
Riku turned to her then he smiled. “I have to help you find your memory,” Riku stood from leaning on the wall. Riku walked out of the room. He stopped and at the door and turned to look at her. He stood in such a way that his hair was starting to cover his eyes. But why, why would he change his stance? Mai got out of bed and walked with him.
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