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Okay, wait a minute, what the hell is going on? So, what you are saying is that Mai became prgnant when Benjie protected her from being killed by those two psychopaths, and her unborn baby is really her dead dog Benjie. So, is she giving birth to a dog or a human? Is it just Benjie's soul that is in this unborn baby, or is it an actual dog growing inside of her? Seriously, I am just really confused right now. And how do Dusk and Dawn plan to abduct Mai? And aren't they supposed to be going after Doki as well? It seems as if they are more concerned with Mai. Man, there is just a lot of confusion going around. Now, on a lighter note, I found it quite humorous that the World that Never Was had a hospital. That was funny to me because I just found it very random. Anyway, enough of my rambling, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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interseting.................... I have no I dea what I talking about awsome update!! :D
 

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Here you go. I have the next chapter for you. This chapter is the last one for this part, the next part is the last and will hopefully answer all questions. that I am not about to answer now.

For TwilightRiku_13: You'll learn why they're more concerned about Mai in the next part of the story. But Mai will give birth to a human... sorta, when the story ends you'll understand by then how Benjie became Mai's child. And yes, hospital thing was random but I wanted to have a little fun... in the drama and made the world slightly more... inhabitted (did I spell that right?)

Uh... I think I answered everything ^^ Well, here it is!

Enjoy!

Part Four
Riku and Mai: The unborn dead one
Ch. 3

Riku and the others were sanitized, making it safe for them to be around the baby if it came. Riku still had to wait, and it was killing him. Every second that went by made Riku’s heart beat faster and faster, he paced the floor waiting. Doki and Raven watched, tapping their toes and sweating with worry.

Riku groaned as he looked at the clock again, it had been seven minutes, was she okay? Was she having the baby yet? Was she screaming and crying his name? Riku couldn’t stand waiting. He had to know if she was okay.

Soon a doctor came to Riku. Riku ran up to him, Riku controlled his hands, he wanted nothing more than to shake that man and tell him if his wife was okay.

“It was a false alarm and it’s a good thing too,” the doctor smiled.

“Why’s that a good thing?” Riku asked gasping for air.

“Well, for one you don’t have a camera to capture the moment, I can tell you’re a first time father, and lastly because she almost passed out.”

Riku swallowed, “Why did she do that?”

“She was calling for you but right before I came to get you she passed out.”

Riku swallowed again, this doctor thought it was a joke but Riku wanted it to be over… soon if not now.

“Well, can we see her now?” Raven asked.

“No, not yet, we can have doctors checking on her, she is slowly gaining consciousness, when I get the info, I’ll tell you.”

Riku bowed to the doctor. When he rose he shook the doctor’s hand. The doctor left leaving the teens in a state of relief… well for Doki and Raven.

~mean while~

“Ah, Mai,” a doctor came to her. Mai opened his eyes, she was dazed and confused but she heard his voice. “You’re awake…”

“Riku…” Mai’s vision was fuzzy and she couldn’t tell what the doctor looked like. She struggled to see, “Riku…”

“You will see him soon, sleep.”

Mai hearing his words slowly drifted to sleep.

Dawn grinned, she was so weak she didn’t even know whom she was really talking about. “Dusk, grab her gently, if she wakes the powers will activate.”

Dusk slowly collected Mai into her arms. Dusk winced, even holding her the powers were active. Dusk’s arms and clothes were burning. “We must hurry, she’s burning me.”

“Alright.” Dawn answered, he then realized that the powers were still active. But there was nothing he could do.

Dawn opened a corridor and they were gone.

~mean while~

“You may go see her now,” a female doctor came to the three, waiting and anxious.

Riku smiled and ran, he had to see her. “Mai!” he called as he reached the door. Swinging the door open he froze, she wasn’t in the room.

Doki and Raven were soon behind him and confusion hit them as they saw the room empty.

Mai was gone…

Riku shook his head, “Ninja! Ninja!”

Suddenly Ninja appeared, “What’s wrong?”

Hurricane was with him, she stood silently for only a matter of seconds. Then she started to check the room.

“She’s gone, where is she? Was she in your sights?”

Ninja swallowed, “No… we lost sight of you guys once you got here… and… we were looking for you and that’s when you called me.”

Riku looked at Ninja for a second.

“Ninja,” Hurricane called, Ninja turned to her, “she’s been here, and she left not too long ago.”

Ninja nodded and turned to Riku, he knelt down and bowed his head, “Riku forgive me, but as of now Mai is gone.”
 

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Wasnt expecting this. Poor Riku. He has to go through all of this. But i still dnt understand why Riku is making a big deal out of her going through pain when she goes through labor.
 

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Woah, I definitly thought that Mai was going into labor..but you fooled me! I've always hated Dawn and Dusk, there are no words to describe them besides 'mean' And poor Riku, he has to go through so much. I must say tho I am quite confused on how this baby is going to turn out. Great work, hope I can find more answers in the next chapters!
 

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Grrr!!!! God damn those two psychopaths!!!! They took Mai!!!! Oh man, poor Riku!!! He has just been through total hell with this whole ordeal. Man, Dusk and Dawn need to die horrible deaths, hopefully by fire or acid or someone bashing their brains in with a metal baseball bat; any of those things work for me. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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Hey guys, I gotta laugh when I say this, LOL, you guys really hate my antagonist don'tcha? Well, that's what they were made for. Also, I have a nasty way for them to die... so far. But I think you'll enjoy part five, that is where all the questions will be answered... even some from the prequel and from the first one that started all of this mess that is happening in the sequel.... hopefully >>; Anway, I hope you guys like the next and final part of the story!

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Part Five
Riku and Mai: Birth
Ch. 1

“You were suppose to watch her!” Riku grabbed Ninja and shook him. “You were suppose to watch her! You were suppose to keep her safe!” Riku shook Ninja more violently, “Why weren’t you watching her?!”

“Your highness, I’m sorry, forgive me,” Ninja said.

“Riku, calm down, we can still find her,” Raven said.

Riku turned and glared at her, Doki stepped in between the two, “Riku, as a friend I ask that you don’t glare at Raven that way,” Doki spoke calmly without yelling, holding in his anger as best he could.

Riku sighed and released Ninja. Ninja turned to Hurricane, “Ninja, they left this world.”

“What?!” Riku exclaimed, anger filled him, but slowly it decreased. “Doki stop that!”

Doki shrugged, “Control it or I will,” he folded his arms.

“Okay,” he groaned, “Can you guys track her?”

“We can, but because we don’t know which world she’s on we’ll have to go to several,” Hurricane answered.

“But we’ll have to hurry,” Ninja said.

“Why?” Riku asked.

“Well, you all know that Mai is going to have the baby soon but once it’s actually time to conceive the powers will be neutralized, for both the child and Mai,” Ninja said, “and that will make them very exposed to anything.”

“How long do we have before then…”

“Two weeks if not three.”

Riku gasped and lowered his head, “So… she’ll be safe from any attack until then, right?”

“Yes,” Ninja said, “As far as I know…”

“As far as you know…” Riku said filled with the uttermost doubt.
 

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Man, Riku is really pissed off now, but, then again, this was expected seeing as his pregnant wife was just kidnapped by two assassins who have been ordered to kill her. Man, if that were me, I'd be beating people to death with two by fours and setting things on fire, but it's a good thing Riku's not like that. So, where oh where could Dusk and Dawn have gone? Seriously, I haven't the slightest idea as to what world they could have gone to. Well, I'm sure it will be revealed soon. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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Wow. That is a different side to Riku alright, but then again, he should be mad. His wife is missing and she's pregnant! Things are going to get more hectic along the way, no doubt. Hopefully, they find her soon. Great update, and can't wait to find out what happens next.
 

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Hey you guys! I hope you... well I know you enjoyed it but you guys got to see Riku's angry side... again. Well, I have the next chapter for you, again another short chapter and you guys probably won't believe this but the story is actually much shorter than Riku and Mai, the first one, and five chapters longer than the Prequel: Ikari. Strange? So this part has nine chapters and will be over soon, T-T and the last chapter is the longest and I love how I had it end, I was working on the ending for a few months and I decided that to combine two of them. You'll like the way this story ends... I promise.

Well, enough of my mouth.... uh, typing, here is the story without further a due!

Enjoy!

Part Five
Riku and Mai: Birth
2

Mai opened her eyes, she couldn’t help but wonder why she was in pain. She sat up, she held her belly and looked around. Her brownish eyes saw a white round room.

“You’re awake,” Dawn stepped out from a door.

Mai then realized where she was, she was in a flower like capsule. She was separated by a thin crystal wall.

Dusk soon appeared at Dawn’s side, “Took her long enough…”

Dawn nodded and glued his eyes on Mai. “All we have to do is wait for the child, then kill them both.”

“Why are you trying to kill me?!” Mai yelled out, fear overwhelmed her. “Sure, the old King hated me and I did break the law and I did kill the King but I made Heart Haven better, I made it a more beautiful place to be. And the Havens like it, they enjoy living the way they do now. Isn’t that good enough?”

“Sorry, Goddess, you’re not the one who gave us this mission,” Dawn frowned.

Dusk rolled her eyes, “There is nothing you can do. So make our jobs easy and have the child already.”

Dawn chuckled, “Dusk, be patient, there is nothing to stop us, Riku and the Lightons won’t be able to find us.”

“May I get to kill the child?”

Dawn nodded, “Yes, I like children but for you-”

Dusk looked at him, “Then let’s keep the child, being that he is the heir we could rule Heart Haven together through him.”

Mai listened carefully, she wanted nothing more than to kill them for their thoughts. They wanted to kill her and take her child. Mai wasn’t going to let them have her child. ‘I’ll kill them before let them take my child.’

At that moment Mai screamed in pain.

“This is it!” Dusk leaned forward with a great eagerness.

Mai held her belly and grinded her teeth. But it was soon over, she had sweat pour down her head and her breath leaving her faster than she could take it in. She had to keep her child in as long as she could.

Dusk groaned and arched her arm as if she was going to punch Mai.

Dawn then stopped her, “Dusk, control, we still have time.”

With that Dawn and Dusk walked away, leaving Mai in her capsule.

Mai rubbed her belly. “Stop trying to come out,” she whispered.

‘Mommy… soon… soon…’

“Soon?”

‘Soon… soon… I see… you… soon.’

Mai swallowed, that clearly meant her child was going to leave her body soon. But she didn’t know how soon.
 

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Holy crap, this is very, very bad!!! Mai is being held hostage by two psychopathic killers, and she's going into labor!!! Man, I hope like hell that Riku, Doki, and the others get there as soon as possible. So, those two freaks took her to Twilight Town? I mean, it sounded like she was in the same pod that Sora was in after the insanity at Castle Oblivion. Oh well, I'm sure all will be revealed soon. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 

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Hello peoples! Let me first apologize, my laptop failed on me so I couldn't give you the chapter yesterday. So right now I'm using the house computer, and I hope it works because this keyboard is driving me crazy alone, I just hope this computer doesn't act like an idiot on me.

Anyhoo! On with the story!

Enjoy!

Part Five
Riku and Mai: Birth
Ch. 3

He had been to seven worlds, none had what he was looking for. None of the worlds had Mai or Dawn and Dusk there.

Riku was starting to lose hope. Mai was nowhere! They were traveling through corridors, not gummi ships, so they had plenty of time to search each world. And because Ninja and Hurricane had the amazing powers of speed they searched three or four worlds alone by themselves. Still, Mai was gone.

Riku’s tail slid against the ground. His lion head hung low, he walked away from Simba with sad look. He opened a corridor and was back at Disney Castle, the others waited there, clearly they found nothing.

“No leads huh?” Riku asked.

“No,” Sora said. “But I know we’ll find her!”

Riku glared up and then sharply turned his head away. “Stop being so optimistic,” he said under his breath.

“C’mon man, she’s alright, she can hold her own,” Sora said.

“Sora be realistic here! Mai is gone and we can’t find her, and I alone searched seven worlds! And all together we searched every world including ones we never been to! What on earth makes you so silly I’ll never understand! My wife is gone! She’s going to die soon if we don’t find her! And-” Riku cut himself off, making a fist. “Just leave me alone!”

No one blamed Riku, no one judged him, they knew what was at stake here. They understood his pain and frustration. Sora although hurt could only understand him more. Sora then understood that Riku was in the darkness of this, there was no light until he saw some proof she was okay.

Ninja appeared and bowed to Riku, whom was walking away, “Riku,” he called from his bow.

Riku turned around, “What?!”

Ninja remained knelt down, “There are two worlds we haven’t check, Yen Sid’s castle and Twilight Town.”

Riku turned to him. “You tell me this now?!”

“We double checked every world we have searched, reviewing the worlds we learned those were the only two we did not check.”

“Maybe we should talk to Yen Sid,” Mickey suggested.

“Yeah, that is his world…” Cloud said.

“Yeah, we should go but you guys should stay here,” Mickey said.

“King Mickey, I think you should be more specific,” Kairi whispered.

“Oh, you’re right!” Mickey smiled, “All those from the Final Fantasy Galaxy go back home.”

“Who’s bright idea was it to call our side of the universe Final Fantasy?” Tidus asked.

“I don’t have a clue,” said Arc, “And I’ve studied many books from all of our worlds, I’m still trying to figure out where the Fantasy part came in.”

Bartz Klauser shrugged.

Mickey nodded to them and they were de-summoned and back home. With that being said, only Sora, Kairi, Riku, Doki, Raven, Ninja and Hurricane were still in the room.

“Alright, you guys go ahead, I’m going to check out and see if I can open the door.”

Doki looked at the King, “Door? Door to what?”

“Heart Haven, Mai told me how to do it.”

“Oh, be careful, it might just summon Heartless.”

“Yes, I am aware,” Mickey nodded.

“Okay, let’s go.” Riku groaned and opened a corridor.

Once on the other side Riku and the others were at Yen Sid’s castle. Riku looked at the tower that was before them. It was tall and although it looked like it was only a few stories tall it was really more than that. Magic has it’s ways one could guess.

Riku went to the door and walked in. The stairs was on the others side of the room. Riku didn’t wait for the others, he wanted answers and quickly.

Riku walked up the stairs and was soon in Yen Sid’s room.

“Ah, Riku,” Yen Sid greeted him before Riku fully opened the door. “Why have you come at this hour? Are you in need of help?”

Riku bowed and paid respect, “Master, we’ve been searching for my wife, Mai, for nine days now. There has been no sign of her and we were hoping you could pin point where she was. We don’t have much time because she could give birth any moment and when she does her kidnappers will be able to kill her.”

Yen Sid nodded, “I see,” he could hear the restraint in Riku’s voice. Riku was trying so hard to keep calm and respectful. “Riku, the world you have not checked is the only world she could be on. Twilight Town, check there and see if she is there, I can also tell you that she’s still alive. I sense that she is surrounded by light but other than that I can’t help you.”

Riku blinked, he didn’t think Yen Sid would answer so quickly, He thought Yen Sid would waste his time with riddles. “Thank you! That was more help than you know!”

Riku ran out the door and came back to bow to him. “You’re welcome, now go,” Yen Sid waved him off.

Riku ran down the stairs and met the others. “Guys! Twilight Town! And I think I have an idea of where she is!”

“That’s great. But what did Yen Sid say?” Doki asked.

“Mai’s still alive! We have time but we got to get to her!” Riku kept running pass. He dashed down the stairs until he was outside, the ghostly train waited for them. Riku held the door open for the group, they got in the train and all but Riku was sitting.

“Riku, sit down,” Raven asked.

“No… I won’t rest until Mai’s back in my arms.”

Doki looked in Riku’s mind, he winced when he saw Riku’s thoughts. “Riku, please stop,” he said turning his head away and holding his hand up as if to stop Riku. “Think positive, I’m begging you.”

Riku groaned. “I can’t help it…” Riku sighed after his groans didn’t affect Doki. “Mai… I’m worried about her… and I can’t help but think like that… she’s slowly becoming human from the way she looks and she’s weak… and we don’t know for sure when she’ll have the baby… I wanted to wait for this day to come… I wanted to wait years…”

Ninja sighed. “Riku… I’m sure she’s fine…”

“She wouldn’t be in this mess if you were watching-”

“Riku, stop, look, he’s hurting as it is, Mai has done many things to the Havens, and that means him too,” Doki said. “Look, because of what Mai did I can’t read Raven’s mind. Mai’s making the rules, and although I have no clue how she got the pregnant, I can promise you is that any Haven can have children now. Mai is okay, and don’t blame him for her going missing, you can only blame Dawn and Dusk for being strict with their ways.”

Riku heeded Doki’s soft words, Doki’s words were soft and calm but strong and like a sword that stabbed into Riku’s heart and ears.

“Did she change your life, Doki?”

“I found Raven, didn’t I?” Doki smiled, he stood to meet Riku’s gaze, he rested his hand on Riku’s shoulder, and gently tightened his grip. “Riku, because of Mai I found the cure for my deadly mood-swings. Mai made Haven a better place and I owe her my life, and if you’re married to her I owe you my life as well.”

Riku grinned, “Doki, ever since you were cured you’ve made nothing but pure sense, everything you say makes sense, and I don’t know what happened to you but I’m glad I made a friend like you,” Riku rested his hand on Doki’s shoulder. “Doki, thanks, for everything…”

“No need for thanks, friends do that all the time,” Riku smiled at Doki’s words.

The train stopped and they pulled into the station. The group walked out of the train that now looked like a normal one and walked to the center of the town.

Riku summoned his blade and groaned.

“Riku, do you have an idea of where they are?” Doki asked.

“Yes,” Riku said, “If she’s surrounded by light there is only one place with a place like that.”

Doki grinned, “The old Mansion, the one Ansem used to live in with you.”

“Yeah… I have a feeling they’re holding her in a place of light because they know the baby will grow faster.”

“Maybe…” Doki agreed. Doki summoned his KingdomKey and walked next to Riku. “Riku, go on,” Doki stopped and de-summoned his blade. He turned to Raven and sadly smiled.

“What’s wrong?” Raven asked. She could tell something was wrong with him. It was as plain as the nose on his face.

“Raven, I need you to stay here,” Doki said.

“What? Why?”

“Because it’s dangerous…” Sora filled in. He had been aweful quite during the trip and those were his first words, he passed Doki and Raven with Kairi at his side, they followed Riku’s lead.

Raven groaned, “Kairi’s going,” she pointed out. “Why can’t I?”

Doki sighed, “Raven, Kairi has a Keyblade… you don’t… and… listen, I might not come back. I don’t want you to see me die… if it comes to that.”

Raven started to cry. “Doki… why are you thinking like that?”

Doki held her, he knew it was harsh but he couldn’t lie to her either, “I’m saying that because it’s a possibility, I might not come back and I don’t want you to see me die…”

Raven embraced him, “I’ll stay if you swear to come back…” she said.

“I can’t keep that promise…”

“I can’t live without you,” Raven said.

“Raven, there’s no way I can’t breath without you. I know for a fact that if you die I will kill myself. There are no questions asked. I need you alive even if I’m not.”

Raven cried more, “But what about me?!”

Doki smiled and kissed her forehead, “I swear I do everything I can to come back.”

Raven was wide eyed. She stood frozen as her beloved walked off to what might be his doom. But ever fiber in her told her to stay… at least for a while. Raven found a bench near by and watched him disappear beyond her sight. ‘Don’t die on me, please don’t…’
 

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Awesome chapter, Zipporahss, and hooray for your home computer not crapping out on you. So, I was right, Mai is at the Old Mansion in Twilight Town. Man, I'm just glad that the others figured that out in time. I can't wait to see this battle royale. I have a feeling it will be epic, just PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE do not let Doki or anyone for that matter die; I will be really upset. Anyway, great job, and I look forward to more.
 
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