Fanfiction ► Rikku's Last Mission 2

[aidan6660]

OH MY EFFING GOD!!! this story rocks. this is the best fan fic ive read,
my only regret is that i didnt get a chance to be in the story... :'(

oh well mabey next time...

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

^-^

Thanks! But, it's been over for a while now. The story is continuing in When Broken Is Easily Fixed.

 

[Winged Unkown]

Lol nice fanfic so far its really good and funny ^_^ keep it up!
Rikku is my fav FFX-2 character! I cant wait to read more!

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

lol.

Can anyone say Super Bump?

Anyway, thanks for reading it. After this one, I suggest reading When Broken Is Easily Fixed. It follows right after this fic and then RLM 3 which is my current one.

 

[Vogue AntiChrist]

The overall story was pretty good. I liked it.
What you failed to do though was, in the beginning, directly capture the audience.
Something more grabbing would have made me want to read it more.
The vocabulary was sometimes repeated and restricted.
Like, I noticed you used the word 'feign' one too many times.
I suggest you lengthen it up to make your story format more interesting :3
Ah, what else? I can't think of anything.
Aaanyway, that was a great fanfiction. 8 out of 10, much? Au revoir~

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

The overall story was pretty good. I liked it.
What you failed to do though was, in the beginning, directly capture the audience.
Something more grabbing would have made me want to read it more.
The vocabulary was sometimes repeated and restricted.
Like, I noticed you used the word 'feign' one too many times.
I suggest you lengthen it up to make your story format more interesting :3
Ah, what else? I can't think of anything.
Aaanyway, that was a great fanfiction. 8 out of 10, much? Au revoir~

Thanks for the advice. I know the vocab is a bit... Bad, but hopefully, I'm progessively getting better. As for the length, I'm trying my best, and I WILL get better (hopefully).

But, thanks a lot.

 

[Thelonepickle]

C_U. This is old. CLOSE IT.

>_<

You're takin' up space. If you want some attention, just UPDATE on Rikku's Last Mission 3!

>_< So close this. >.>;

 

[Ayumi]

WOW

i LOVE this story xD~!!!!!!

very very VERY good^^

Rikku's soooooooooo Awsome shes my fav O.O actually ^^;; some of my friends call me Rikku >>>;;

but anyway this is an AWSOME Story I Love it alot^^


very good

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

WOW

i LOVE this story xD~!!!!!!

very very VERY good^^

Rikku's soooooooooo Awsome shes my fav O.O actually ^^;; some of my friends call me Rikku >>>;;

but anyway this is an AWSOME Story I Love it alot^^


very good

XD

Thanks for the input. I'm really glad you like the story. If you want, I can give you links to the sequels. Well... There's a fic after this, but then a fic that's still going (RLM3).

 

[Ayumi]

OMG rly?

can you plz i wanna read more^^

BTW nice Rikku sigs

She's sooooo AWSOME^^

 

[Cloud_Unchained]

Here's When Broken Is Easily Fixed (Not so much Rikku, but she plays a role later on):
http://forums.khinsider.com/showthread.php?t=26763

RLM 3 should be on the second page of the fan fiction forum.

=D

Thanks for reading.

And I agree. Rikku IS awesome. Just... Not so much the FFX-2 version. I loved her in FFX-2, don't get me wrong, but I REALLY love the FFX Rikku. So... Innocent.

 

[Taokitty]

Well, all I got to say is this..=^_^= I finally finished reading this one! Sorry to be posting, but I felt I should post something, poor Sy, though! T_T Well, I'll be reading the third one tommorow!=^_^=

 

[Ayumi]

I love your stories with Rikku xD! Shes one of my favorites i love her ,3 not like that tho but shes awsome,i love your writing xD!