Entire thing looks a bit sloppy. Headphones especially are messed up.
Such an enjoyable person you are. <-<
Agreed. Was my first time to use both white and black charcoal and I definitely could have made the desk look more unified. The MP3 player itself could be more rectangular, not as funny looking as it is.
The camera quality could be a little better. I can't blame everything on the camera, but it's more sharp irl, not as smudged as you see here.
I found the headphones to be one of the better parts of this. As that was exactly how the headphones looked, I was quite pleased. Especially since I forgot they were even there till about halfway through. XD Was it the headphone cord you dislike? It's too thick and a little messy where it hangs off the table, yet it does seem to curve like it's supposed to. It's permanently bent those ways from being wrapped around the Sansa.
I'm sorry, I seem to disagree with you. :/ I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to tell me here, especially everyone's addressed the smudged. I wouldn't necessarily say sloppy, just not smooth. Although the smudge above the can, how I hate that. If that's what you're talking about, I had already addressed it in the description on dA. An early mistake in proportions that would not let itself be fixed.
Thanks for the eh, comment though.