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So basically I took it upon myself to rewrite KH1 into a story of my own version, and now that I've gotten most of it done, I've figured it couldn't hurt to share it a bit. So anyway, my version of Kingdom Hearts (One).
WARNING: Some Kairi fans may be upset of the fact that I decided to change Kairi's character because her character in the game sucked. kthxbai.
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Voice of Sora: I’ve been having these weird thoughts lately, like is any of this for real or not?
Sora felt strange, like he was dreaming. He could feel something rushing past him, like he was falling… but where? He started to feel like he was cold and wet, and soon opened his eyes and rose up, realizing he was, in fact, underwater. His feet touched the surface of something, and when he tried to walk forward, a blinding light appeared and many white doves flew out from the ground and into the sky, leaving Sora stuck on a platform of Snow White and her Seven Dwarves. He stares up into the dark sky, realizing he isn’t underwater, but stuck somewhere in the darkness.
Mysterious Voice: So much to do, so little time... Take your time. Don’t be afraid. The door is still shut. Now, step forward. Can you do it?
Sora steps forward, listening to the strange voice, pondering why it sounds like a… a mouse. Then, trapezoid-like stones with a sword, a shield, and a staff appeared.
Mysterious Voice: If you give it form... It will give you strength. Choose well.
Sora jumped onto the stone with the shield and picked it up, holding it in both his hands. He stared at it for a few seconds, noticing that on the front was a big mouse emblem, along with what was on all the other weapons.
Mysterious Voice: The power of the guardian. Kindness to aid friends. A shield to repel all. Is this the power you seek?
Sora nodded, waiting for the voice‘s next reply.
Mysterious Voice: Your path is set.
The shield disappeared from Sora’s arm, and he jumped off of the stone.
Mysterious Voice: Now, what will you give up in exchange?
Sora chose the sword.
Mysterious Voice: The power of the warrior. Invincible courage. A sword of terrible destruction. You give up this power?
Sora: Yeah.
Mysterious Voice: You’ve chosen the power of the guardian. You’ve given up the power of the warrior. Is this the form you choose?
Sora: Uh-huh.
The trapezoid stones disappeared. The floor began to shatter and Sora slipped and began to fall once more into darkness. Although this time, he lands on the circular floor with a portrait of Cinderella. A shield appeared in Sora’s right hand.
Mysterious Voice: You gained the power to fight.
Sora tried out the attack with the shield.
Mysterious Voice: All right! You’ve got it. Use this power to protect yourself and others.
Suddenly, strange black creatures began to appear from the ground. they had beady, yellow eyes and two antennas that seemed to wiggle around in every direction.
Mysterious Voice: There will be times you have to fight. Keep your light burning strong.
Sora grabbed his shield, and then headed straight for the Shadowy creatures. He crashed his shield straight into them, turning them into nothing but dust. Soon, he defeated all of them-
Mysterious Voice: Behind you!
Sora turns around and quickly blocks the Shadow’s attack with his shield. He recovers quickly, and then throws the shield into the creature, destroying it, and it returned back into his right hand. A door then appears, and Sora walks over to it curiously, thinking it’ll take him further through this dream world.
Sora: I can’t open it...
Sora sees a treasure chest appear and walks over to it. He examines it, and as he does it springs open. Then a large crate appeared, and so Sora smashes it with his weapon. Then a barrel appeared and Sora smashed that as well. The door then opened and lights began to flood out as Sora advanced through it. Sora ends up on Destiny Islands’ play island, where Selphie, Tidus and Wakka were waiting.
Mysterious Voice: Hold on. The door won’t open just yet. First, tell me more about yourself.
Sora looks up into the sky, a bit confused, and decides to talk to his friends. First, he approached Tidus.
Tidus: What are you afraid of, Sora?
Sora: Uhhh… Getting old.
Tidus: Gettin’ old? Is that really so scary?
Sora: You know you can't do the same things that we did when we were young if we're old.
Tidus: (shrug) Ya, I guess so.
Sora decides he has nothing more to say to Tidus and this time approaches Wakka.
Wakka: What do you want outta life?
Sora: I wanna see rare sights.
Wakka: To see rare sights, huh?
Sora: Yeah, one day, we're gonna get there.
Wakka: "We"?
Sora: Me, Riku, and Kairi; we're all gonna see other worlds some day.
Wakka: If ya do, don't forget to write back, ya?
Sora finishes his Wakka and then finally decides to approach Selphie.
Selphie: What’s most important to you?
Sora: My friends, of course!
Mysterious Voice: You’re afraid of getting old. You want to see rare sights. You value your friends. Your adventure begins at dawn. As long as the sun is shining, your journey should be a pleasant one.
Sora: Okay.
Mysterious Voice: The day you will open the door is both far off and very near.
Sora then was back in the same place as before, but on another platform with a portrait of Aurora. Sora approached the light and group of Shadows appeared once again.
Sora: Again?!
Sora drew his shield and fought off the Shadows, destroying each one with a fierce jab. Then, a path appeared before Sora to another platform further up. Sora ran up the path, and as he did, they began to disappear so as to he couldn’t go back. Once Sora finished the path and arrived on the new platform…
Mysterious Voice: The closer you get to light, the greater your shadow becomes.
Then, Sora’s shadow began to rise right in front of him, creating a huge monster with a hole shaped like a Heart in his stomach and Medusa-like hair.
Mysterious Voice: But don’t be afraid.
Sora tried to run away, but almost fell off the platform when he got to close to the edge. He realized that he was trapped with this thing.
Sora: Easy for you to say.
Sora then charged at the monster, trying to attack it, but miserably failing. The monster then slammed his hand straight where Sora was standing, and Sora barely managed to roll out of the way. He then began to attack the hand as it slowly slid deeper into the platform, creating a dark portal around it as more Shadows from before appeared. Sora jabbed his shield into one of their faces, and then kicked at the other. They both disappeared, and soon the monster withdrew his hand.
Sora: …How… am I supposed to beat this thing?
The monster began to release dark energy shots around the area after Sora, each he barely managed to escape. Then, Sora saw an opening and jumped onto the hand, ran up the arm, and then slammed his shield into the creatures’ face once he reach the shoulders. The monster then began to fall down, and soon Sora began to get engulfed in darkness.
Mysterious Voice: And never forget… You hold the mightiest weapon of all. So don’t forget: You are the one who will open the door.
Sora tried fighting off the darkness, but soon he was engulfed in it and felt helpless.
(Voice of Riku): Sora… Sora…
(Voice of an old woman): Move it Riku, I’ll wake the damn boy myself! Wake up you lazy bum!
Sora then opened his eyes and found himself drooling on his desk with the whole class looking at him.
Sora: Huh?
Old Woman: How dare you “huh?” me in my own class, boy! You were sleeping in here! What, you think this is your home or something.
Sora: But Miss-!
Old Woman: Don’t “But Miss-!” me! You’re not even wearing pants!
Sora: What?!
Sora picked up his head from the desk and looked at Riku who sat next to him, and Riku hinted for him to look down with his eyes. Once Sora did, he realized that his teacher was in fact right: He had no underwear on.
Sora: Aaaaahhhhhhh!
Then, the whole room began to melt away, and Sora began to fall further into darkness.
WARNING: Some Kairi fans may be upset of the fact that I decided to change Kairi's character because her character in the game sucked. kthxbai.
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Chapter One: Dreaming
Voice of Sora: I’ve been having these weird thoughts lately, like is any of this for real or not?
Sora felt strange, like he was dreaming. He could feel something rushing past him, like he was falling… but where? He started to feel like he was cold and wet, and soon opened his eyes and rose up, realizing he was, in fact, underwater. His feet touched the surface of something, and when he tried to walk forward, a blinding light appeared and many white doves flew out from the ground and into the sky, leaving Sora stuck on a platform of Snow White and her Seven Dwarves. He stares up into the dark sky, realizing he isn’t underwater, but stuck somewhere in the darkness.
Mysterious Voice: So much to do, so little time... Take your time. Don’t be afraid. The door is still shut. Now, step forward. Can you do it?
Sora steps forward, listening to the strange voice, pondering why it sounds like a… a mouse. Then, trapezoid-like stones with a sword, a shield, and a staff appeared.
Mysterious Voice: If you give it form... It will give you strength. Choose well.
Sora jumped onto the stone with the shield and picked it up, holding it in both his hands. He stared at it for a few seconds, noticing that on the front was a big mouse emblem, along with what was on all the other weapons.
Mysterious Voice: The power of the guardian. Kindness to aid friends. A shield to repel all. Is this the power you seek?
Sora nodded, waiting for the voice‘s next reply.
Mysterious Voice: Your path is set.
The shield disappeared from Sora’s arm, and he jumped off of the stone.
Mysterious Voice: Now, what will you give up in exchange?
Sora chose the sword.
Mysterious Voice: The power of the warrior. Invincible courage. A sword of terrible destruction. You give up this power?
Sora: Yeah.
Mysterious Voice: You’ve chosen the power of the guardian. You’ve given up the power of the warrior. Is this the form you choose?
Sora: Uh-huh.
The trapezoid stones disappeared. The floor began to shatter and Sora slipped and began to fall once more into darkness. Although this time, he lands on the circular floor with a portrait of Cinderella. A shield appeared in Sora’s right hand.
Mysterious Voice: You gained the power to fight.
Sora tried out the attack with the shield.
Mysterious Voice: All right! You’ve got it. Use this power to protect yourself and others.
Suddenly, strange black creatures began to appear from the ground. they had beady, yellow eyes and two antennas that seemed to wiggle around in every direction.
Mysterious Voice: There will be times you have to fight. Keep your light burning strong.
Sora grabbed his shield, and then headed straight for the Shadowy creatures. He crashed his shield straight into them, turning them into nothing but dust. Soon, he defeated all of them-
Mysterious Voice: Behind you!
Sora turns around and quickly blocks the Shadow’s attack with his shield. He recovers quickly, and then throws the shield into the creature, destroying it, and it returned back into his right hand. A door then appears, and Sora walks over to it curiously, thinking it’ll take him further through this dream world.
Sora: I can’t open it...
Sora sees a treasure chest appear and walks over to it. He examines it, and as he does it springs open. Then a large crate appeared, and so Sora smashes it with his weapon. Then a barrel appeared and Sora smashed that as well. The door then opened and lights began to flood out as Sora advanced through it. Sora ends up on Destiny Islands’ play island, where Selphie, Tidus and Wakka were waiting.
Mysterious Voice: Hold on. The door won’t open just yet. First, tell me more about yourself.
Sora looks up into the sky, a bit confused, and decides to talk to his friends. First, he approached Tidus.
Tidus: What are you afraid of, Sora?
Sora: Uhhh… Getting old.
Tidus: Gettin’ old? Is that really so scary?
Sora: You know you can't do the same things that we did when we were young if we're old.
Tidus: (shrug) Ya, I guess so.
Sora decides he has nothing more to say to Tidus and this time approaches Wakka.
Wakka: What do you want outta life?
Sora: I wanna see rare sights.
Wakka: To see rare sights, huh?
Sora: Yeah, one day, we're gonna get there.
Wakka: "We"?
Sora: Me, Riku, and Kairi; we're all gonna see other worlds some day.
Wakka: If ya do, don't forget to write back, ya?
Sora finishes his Wakka and then finally decides to approach Selphie.
Selphie: What’s most important to you?
Sora: My friends, of course!
Mysterious Voice: You’re afraid of getting old. You want to see rare sights. You value your friends. Your adventure begins at dawn. As long as the sun is shining, your journey should be a pleasant one.
Sora: Okay.
Mysterious Voice: The day you will open the door is both far off and very near.
Sora then was back in the same place as before, but on another platform with a portrait of Aurora. Sora approached the light and group of Shadows appeared once again.
Sora: Again?!
Sora drew his shield and fought off the Shadows, destroying each one with a fierce jab. Then, a path appeared before Sora to another platform further up. Sora ran up the path, and as he did, they began to disappear so as to he couldn’t go back. Once Sora finished the path and arrived on the new platform…
Mysterious Voice: The closer you get to light, the greater your shadow becomes.
Then, Sora’s shadow began to rise right in front of him, creating a huge monster with a hole shaped like a Heart in his stomach and Medusa-like hair.
Mysterious Voice: But don’t be afraid.
Sora tried to run away, but almost fell off the platform when he got to close to the edge. He realized that he was trapped with this thing.
Sora: Easy for you to say.
Sora then charged at the monster, trying to attack it, but miserably failing. The monster then slammed his hand straight where Sora was standing, and Sora barely managed to roll out of the way. He then began to attack the hand as it slowly slid deeper into the platform, creating a dark portal around it as more Shadows from before appeared. Sora jabbed his shield into one of their faces, and then kicked at the other. They both disappeared, and soon the monster withdrew his hand.
Sora: …How… am I supposed to beat this thing?
The monster began to release dark energy shots around the area after Sora, each he barely managed to escape. Then, Sora saw an opening and jumped onto the hand, ran up the arm, and then slammed his shield into the creatures’ face once he reach the shoulders. The monster then began to fall down, and soon Sora began to get engulfed in darkness.
Mysterious Voice: And never forget… You hold the mightiest weapon of all. So don’t forget: You are the one who will open the door.
Sora tried fighting off the darkness, but soon he was engulfed in it and felt helpless.
(Voice of Riku): Sora… Sora…
(Voice of an old woman): Move it Riku, I’ll wake the damn boy myself! Wake up you lazy bum!
Sora then opened his eyes and found himself drooling on his desk with the whole class looking at him.
Sora: Huh?
Old Woman: How dare you “huh?” me in my own class, boy! You were sleeping in here! What, you think this is your home or something.
Sora: But Miss-!
Old Woman: Don’t “But Miss-!” me! You’re not even wearing pants!
Sora: What?!
Sora picked up his head from the desk and looked at Riku who sat next to him, and Riku hinted for him to look down with his eyes. Once Sora did, he realized that his teacher was in fact right: He had no underwear on.
Sora: Aaaaahhhhhhh!
Then, the whole room began to melt away, and Sora began to fall further into darkness.