Errr, are you SURE? Cuz ppl are like what the hell, its too long blah blah blah....
But, when you read the story, is it exciting or makes you want to read it? Cuz i dont know about the interest level to continue it. I have ch 4 almost done though.
So long as the thing's not in one gigantic paragraph that kills the eyes, and it's not, then it's fine.
And yeah, it definitely makes me want to read it.
EDIT: Just rated the thread a 5, if that helps at all.