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* is speechless to above comment*
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Anyway, your latest poem is excellent, DP.
I particularly liked this one.
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Anyway, your latest poem is excellent, DP.
I particularly liked this one.
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I like how your poems rock even when you're not even from an english speaking country =\
I also like the person writing them, so I can't comment without bias =\/
I also like the person writing them, so I can't comment without bias =\/
I love you, Eikre.
^_^
New poem... Pretty obvious what its about.
Frozen
Monotony,
The time it seems never ending.
Waiting,
Till the day you come for me.
Promises,
Cling onto them for security.
You and me,
Ignore all other choices.
Frozen,
I will not move from here.
I've chosen,
The one I want with me.
Frustration,
Patience runs thin.
Unchanging,
I want to be with him!
Frozen,
I will not move from here.
I've chosen,
And I've chosen him.
^_^
New poem... Pretty obvious what its about.
Frozen
Monotony,
The time it seems never ending.
Waiting,
Till the day you come for me.
Promises,
Cling onto them for security.
You and me,
Ignore all other choices.
Frozen,
I will not move from here.
I've chosen,
The one I want with me.
Frustration,
Patience runs thin.
Unchanging,
I want to be with him!
Frozen,
I will not move from here.
I've chosen,
And I've chosen him.
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Bluesky-x, the poem is about frustration and getting fed up of waiting for a loved one.
Thank you, Valleyofchrome.
I have loads of time on my hands and at times when I start writing I can't seem to stop so here are two poems...
Inner walls
I'm suffocating,
Scratching at these inner walls.
It hurts me,
Yet I must not fall.
The bruises,
Show my inner pain.
All these excuses,
Still refusing to change
Freedom,
Does that even exist?
Individuality,
We must cure this disease.
The same,
No one can be different
To be sane,
Anything else to be prosecuted.
Still she scratches
Against those inner walls,
A real person screaming,
Refusing to be smothered anymore.
She will be alive,
The girl who was killed by you.
She will be heard.
Your lies destroyed by the truth
And here's another....
Amber and Honey.
Vanilla and honey,
The scent lingers,
But the moment is gone
And so are you.
Amber and honey,
The flame from her eyes dampened.
Forcefully smothered
By the pain of truth.
An age alone,
Time has taken its toll.
What was once alight,
Now turns to steel.
From the flames of life,
Comes the destruction of change.
The will to fight,
Gone with age.
Vanilla and honey,
The scent has faded,
All that’s lefts are memories,
Of her being with you.
Thank you, Valleyofchrome.
I have loads of time on my hands and at times when I start writing I can't seem to stop so here are two poems...
Inner walls
I'm suffocating,
Scratching at these inner walls.
It hurts me,
Yet I must not fall.
The bruises,
Show my inner pain.
All these excuses,
Still refusing to change
Freedom,
Does that even exist?
Individuality,
We must cure this disease.
The same,
No one can be different
To be sane,
Anything else to be prosecuted.
Still she scratches
Against those inner walls,
A real person screaming,
Refusing to be smothered anymore.
She will be alive,
The girl who was killed by you.
She will be heard.
Your lies destroyed by the truth
And here's another....
Amber and Honey.
Vanilla and honey,
The scent lingers,
But the moment is gone
And so are you.
Amber and honey,
The flame from her eyes dampened.
Forcefully smothered
By the pain of truth.
An age alone,
Time has taken its toll.
What was once alight,
Now turns to steel.
From the flames of life,
Comes the destruction of change.
The will to fight,
Gone with age.
Vanilla and honey,
The scent has faded,
All that’s lefts are memories,
Of her being with you.
Cos thats the line that popped into my head and started the entire poem.... I know I'm weird. .__.
Those were much better than the other ones. . . . . . . I loved 'em.
I'm glad that you do .
Your poetry is after all one of the main reasons i started writing again.
Your poetry is after all one of the main reasons i started writing again.
Awww thanks. . . . .that makes me feel special.
That aside...
That articles on dreams...
Hehehehehe...
I laughed.
That articles on dreams...
Hehehehehe...
I laughed.
Was it really funny. . . .?
The fact that you kept cracking up was amusing and at some point Froad (you were with Froad, right?) started laughing as well...
Yep. . . . .I thought it was funny. . . . .but that's me. .. ... I think lot's of things are funny. . . .
I do too though I manage to keep a straight face most of the time as I'm told me laughing is scary. XD
We should stop the spamming . . . .. I guess. . . . .
This was inspired by Chosen's poem "Never Fear"
Plunge
Jump,
Plunge to the ground below.
Fall,
Promise me I'll be alone no more.
Love,
Will you be there to catch me?
Trust,
Place in you my everything.
Fear,
The oncoming darkness feels so real.
Fight,
To destroy all my doubts with your light.
Dream,
One day this will all be real.
Time,
Only with patience your touch I'll feel.
Mine,
Live for me and only me.
Call,
Call out my name 'till your voice is hoarse.
Jump,
I'll jump to the ground below.
Fall,
Promise me I'll be alone no more.
Plunge
Jump,
Plunge to the ground below.
Fall,
Promise me I'll be alone no more.
Love,
Will you be there to catch me?
Trust,
Place in you my everything.
Fear,
The oncoming darkness feels so real.
Fight,
To destroy all my doubts with your light.
Dream,
One day this will all be real.
Time,
Only with patience your touch I'll feel.
Mine,
Live for me and only me.
Call,
Call out my name 'till your voice is hoarse.
Jump,
I'll jump to the ground below.
Fall,
Promise me I'll be alone no more.
Thank you. ^_^
Never Fear is prettier.
Never Fear is prettier.
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