Pop idol yessss

[The Big Lovin']

v1

v2

Here is some SHIT for you to look at. Was messing around n' shit.

CnC yo thnx

 

[Malibu]

V2 is better. Its filled the negative space in the top corners.
Also the lighting is better but maybe a bit "over the top".
Placement is bad don't put oyur stock or Render squarley in the middle
unless absolutely necessary.

 

[The Big Lovin']

It wasn't until about I was halfway through playing with it that I noticed where I placed the stock. So I just worked with it like that 'cause I'm lazy as hell.

Thanks, yo.

 

[Artemis]

i also like V2 better
i like the effects you placed around her, and the lighting is better.
the first one feels...incomplete
but that is opinion

 

[Charlie]

Lmao. what the hell.
I actually prefer V1.
Looks less choppy.

If the first had sparks, it'd feel a bit better.
With that smudging going on, too many extraneous things would kill it.

 

[saratp]

Lmao. what the hell.
I actually prefer V1.
Looks less choppy.

Lol, same here.


The lighting in both is way over the top in my opinion. The left side of the stock turns me off
because of the lighting.
I really don't mind the placement of the stock but thats just me.
You also should work on blending your render more, because you can see the white at the top.
Also maybe sharpen it a little more.