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Pokemon: An Adventure of A Life Time.
Kanto Saga: Chapter 01; The Legend Starts


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Up above is a brand new fanfic from myself it's kinda long but i put a lot of work in it. and i hope you guys enjoy it also let me know if you think i should include more covers of the characters singing Pokemon songs :)
 
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Not bad, like to see were this goes~
Also them singing the original theme song brought back both nostalgia and made me feel old.
 

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This was awesome! It fills me with so much nostalgic. I miss playing Pokémon. The song to go with it really hit the spot. The story itself was really good. I enjoyed the playful banter between Red and Blue. Green is such a sweetie. I think she's the smart one in the group that can settle a pair of boys down. I imagine great things will arise from Red having Charmander as his starter. Actually, it makes me want to cry a little, because I remember when Ash first got Charmander. I'm so happy Red got Charmander as a starter pokemon. I hope they become good friends.
 

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Thanks I'm glad ya'll liked it the next chapter may be out tomorrow or later today and i take it that ya'll want me to continue having the trio to sing certain Pokemon Songs?
 

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Well here's the next chapter of the story. I'm continuing with adding the songs every now and then. and I'm just gonna have fun writing this story

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lol That end commentary~ Not a bad chapter, I love me shorter chapters in a story like this. Also this made me laugh a little:
Pikachu came over it and poked Red.
Not sure why. xD Just gives the imagery like "you dead? *pokes repeatedly*"
 

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lol That end commentary~ Not a bad chapter, I love me shorter chapters in a story like this. Also this made me laugh a little:


Not sure why. xD Just gives the imagery like "you dead? *pokes repeatedly*"
Yeah that was kinda a spelling error on my part but I'm sure most will know what i mean.
 

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I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I like how Pikachu wanted to tag along with Red. Green is such a sweetie. Their relationship gives me the impression that they'll become an item someday. The song and commentary was delightful to read. :D I wonder what Butterfree's powers will be like in battle. (I never used said pokemon in the games.) I hope to see more chapters soon!
 

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Here comes a new chapter in my Pokemon Story. in this chapter i start to make some changes to the plot a tad bit to make it more unique in my story. Anyways here is the part where Red battles Brock. next chapter we head towards Mt. Moon.


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I like the Green, Red, and Blue dialog part of the story. It was funny. I like how you went with the 2 vs. 2 attack method instead of it being singular; making the battle go by a lot more quicker. I'm curious what the backstory of Misty and Red would be like. Since they know each other and all. With that said, it was a fun read. :D
 

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Female Brock...wasn't expecting those kinda changes. =3
A good chapter, I also enjoyed the commentary. Green is totally jelly~ xD
 

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Here is 2 more chapters for this story. Red Makes his way through Mt. Moon as he run into Proton, one of 4 of the Rocket Executives for Team Rocket. We get some kinda light on Green's background as well the introduction of Yellow who decides to travel with Red for awhile.

Kanto Saga; Chapter 04; Mt. Moon.

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Green being apart of Team Rocket was a mouth opening shocker. It kind of makes me more wary of her now. I don't doubt Proton's words, but maybe, Green changed over time to be the sweet girl she is now to Blue and Red? Also, I kind of wonder if Yellow is somebody else? Perhaps posing in disguise? It's weird to think Yellow shows up out of the blue. Therefore, both updates were great! I look forward to reading more like always. :)
 

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I wonder what changed Green as well. For some reason Yellow strikes me as the source of comic relief from here on out. (or rather Reds reactions to him) xD
 

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Here's a new chapter for my story. in this chapter Red challenges Misty.

Kanto Saga; Chapter 06; Vs Misty the Fiery Redheaded Pokemon Trainer


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Sorry no end of chapter talk this time. but it'll return next chapter.
 

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Green and Misty have quite the background together. Green must be really high up on the chain to be leading a bunch of grunts at the age of seven. It's cute to see Green get all jealous over Misty squishing her boobs against Red's face. Misty is really affectionate. I imagine she's not much competition for Red's affections, since she seems to be older than Red; and happens to know Green's feelings for Red. The battle against Misty was an interesting one. I wonder how Red will do against future gym leaders?
 

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And here is the chapter that everyone's been waiting for we get a momentary glimpse at Green's early life.

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Green sure had it rough. A pity she had to endure such a cruel mother. I suppose Lance took her under his wing? Will we be seeing Madame Ariana again in the future? I'm surprised Blue knew about her past too. It's a wonder why Red was left in the dark unless Green asked him not to tell. Otherwise, it was a good chapter. I would also recommend you choose another color instead of gray. It's a little hard to read the flash back unless I high light it. :3
 

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Was really hoping to see more of the Misty Green conversation. ;u;
Greens life seems very rough though. x[
 
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