Our Flag, My soldier... ♥

[MangaCrazy101]

I walk slowly on a mislead path,
Trying to mend my broken heart.
The silence is broken,
the glass is shattered.
And now I know; that you are gone.

The last post sounds,
my heart pounds.
Grief filling my soul,
No one can fill this hole.

My man, my soldier.
Lost forever in a battle of death.
Green camssplattered with Rose red.
Aussie flag drapped over a black 'box'.
Seasalt tears fall.

My world is at an end.
My soldier on who I used to depend.
Now an angel winged with snow feathers,
waits deep in my heart.
We're together, though we're apart.

Dirt was dug,
One grave, one love.
A single rose fell from above,
landing our our nations pride.
To honour my soldier...

Will I live?
I have nothing else to give,
Yet I'll continue on with his honour.
tears are shed yet I still live on,
even though he's gone.




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tell me what you think..

 

[Reverie]

This is a bittersweet poem. It's really short, but well thought out.

 

[BloodRose]

Jo says thanks muchly for commenting <3

 

[Reverie]

No problem. It's worth reviewing. <3

 

[Kiwi +]

Pretty good poem..too bad Jo isn't on here anymore though... :/