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Davy Jones

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=-ORGANIZATIONS XIII-= retry​

Story

It has been a few years since the fall of Xehanort and Organization XIII. Sora, Riku, and Kairi are back home together. Mickey, Donald, and Goofy have returned to the castle and to their friends or spouses. Everything seems to have turned out for the best. How oblivious people can be...

As it turns out, Xemnas's organization was only one of a larger web. The twelve remaining organizations have now seen the keyblade at its most powerful. The leaders of the organizations made the XIII Committee. With the loss of one of their members, the nobody leaders of the organizations are gearing for war. And their first priority was to get rid of threats.

They set out, all 156 members of the combined twelve organizations, to defeat the three keybearers at Destiny Islands. Although a few of the weaker members were taken, the XIII Committee was able to defeat and kill their keybearer foes. King Mickey received news of the problem and has summoned forth his secret weapon: a new group of keybearers. For Destiny Islands wasn't the only place the keybearers came from. Totalling nine in all, the fledgeling warriors must set out to defeat the XIII Committee, for, like a snake, if you cut the head off the body dies. Will the keybearers kill the snake that is the Committee? Or will the venomously evil Nobodies bite back? The fate of the worlds will be revealed in time.

COMMITTEE NOBODY TEMPLATE

Name

Number (I-XII)

Title (the ___ ____)

Gender

Element

Appearance

Weapon

Personality

Bio (no short "he/she remembers little of his/her past". Make a story for him/her.)

Just for fun, Theme Song

KEYBEARER TEMPLATE

Name

Gender

Race

Allegiance

Keyblade

Appearance

Personality

Bio (same as above)

Theme Song

Committee XIII-
I)Xerxes- The Paternal Husk
II)Insox- The Shadows breath
III)Xaren-The Twilit Angel
IV)
V)Miltuxhi- The Steeled Scientist
VI)Arox- The Crimson Thorn
VII)Rexa- The Fury of Time
VIII)Xyana- The Rebellious Nightengale
IX)Kixar- The Quiet One
X)Graxic- The Prince of Calamity
XI)Maximus-The Mad God
XII)Xialync- The Dark Garou

Keybearers
1)Raven
2)Veyal
3)Geiga
4)Kosuke (Hoko)
5)Blake
6)Sade
7)Adrian Gniewek
8)Rhyion
9)

Worlds:
Radiant Garden
Port Royal
Agrabah
The World That Never Was- Starting point for XIII Committee
Disney Castle- Starting point for Keybearers

New Worlds:
Dreamland: A land of forests, magic, happiness, and home to the Fountain of Dreams

N. Sanity Island: A small tropical island home to tiki-gods. It includes surrounding islands and is home to one orange marsupial

Willow Castle: A decrepid castle on the outskirts of the worlds. It sits on the edge of a huge void. Its only prominent feature is its large crystal heart.​
 
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Name: Kixar

Number: IX

Title: The Quiet One

Gender: Female

Element: Dreams

Weapons: Swords and a shape shifting choker called "Nobodies Hallow Heart" and magic(The sword in the Apperance but two of them, and please see appearance for what her choker looks like...one of the things it can't change into a keyblade.)

Appearance: , but her hair is black. The Nobodies Hallow Heart, is a emerald color heart shaped choker with a amethyst colored tear drop in the middle, with vines of ruby and diamond running through the whole heart. It can change into muiscal insterments and weapons she wants, but one of the things it can't turn into is a keyblade. Oh well, you can't have everything.

Personality: Kixar doesn't talk to the other leaders, but then again I guess you can say there is a reason. She is usually found watching one of the keybearers for some reason, she is a dreamer always dreaming of the life she once had. She loves music, books, art anything that will be able to calm her down. Kixar works alone when it comes to battles, when she isn't causing trouble for the keybearers she is hang out in her room.

Bio: Kixar had only just turned eleven when she and her little sister was attacked by the heartless, defending her she noticed that there was no way that both of them could escape. So telling her little sister to run she used herself to keep the heartless away from her, beyond this there is not much known about Kixar because the rest of her memories where wiped out of her past. But up to date, she has been speaking every once in a while with the other leaders trying to figure out what they should do next.

But the only thing she does remember of her past is her sister, who she is looking for hoping that the heartless didn't get her and that she is okay. Kixar has had her fun with Mickey, Sora, Riku and Kairi toying with them I guess you can say. She had warned Xemnas not to take Sora lightly, but that was his mistake not hers. Telling the other leaders about what had happened, she and the others went to the Destiny Islands. I guess you can say she has never felt love, she would have been the one to destory Sora but that fun was stolen form her.

Kixar watched as Sora was killed, there was something about watching Sora get killed made her cry. Knowing that nobodies can't truly feel all they do is fake emotions, now she sometimes wonders what the girl she is looking for would say to this. But she can't help but feel as if she has broken a promise to this girl, she has seen a teen age girl with long black hair and icy-blue eyes in her dreams but she can never find out the name of the girl who haunts her dreams.

Theme Song: "Promises" by Randy Travis

Weakness: Sometimes she to tied up in her own pain that she forgets about others emotions


Name: Raven

Age: 15

Gender: Female

Race: Human

Allegiance: Twilight

Keyblade: Twilight's promise

Other Weapons: A shape shifting locket called "Listen to your Heart" and magic

Appearance: , "Listen to your Heart" is a heart shaped icy-blue tear drop with a garnet heart in the middle while the vines are pearl and emerald, which can change into any weapon she like.

Personality: Raven seems to be the quiet type never really let out what is troubling her, she is a really sweet teen once you get to know her. She doesn't trust people that easily since of what happened in the past, she has a wall up to keep herself from being hurt again. She is a really soft spoken sort of teen, you can usually find her when she's not fighting around some sort of body of water. She is a dreamer but also a spell caster, she doesn't show her emotions because she doesn't want to be a burden to her teamates.

Bio: Raven lost her family to the heartless and her best friend, she because of this she has turned out to be alone wolf. Raven has been world hoping for sometime now, being the teen she is it's hard to get close to her with out her jumping and running away. She has been by herself for ten years only being a year younger then her friend, the thing that she doesn't know about is that she lost a piece of her heart so she has no memory before the heartless attacked her home world.

This teen seems to have some strange powers that are locked deep within her, all though she doesn't know it she has the power to find the hearts to the nobodies all though she is not a nobody or a heartless. The reason of this power is unkown at the moment in time. And that her home world is Dreamland, all though she does not remember this world ever being her home. Raven has been searching for her big sister who is currently MIA, not knowing who she is although she is at risk of losing her for good.

Raven has ended up at Twilight Town form time-to-time, going there to chill out and take a break form fighting heartless. What she doesn't know is that her sister is in big trouble, having dreams of a group who call themselves the "Committee XIII" and some teens with weapons shaped like keys. A voice says that this weapons are called Keyblades. Raven has been having these dreams since she was twelve, wanting answers then but decied to wait until now to go looking for the answers she seeks.

Theme Song: "How can I help you say goodbye" by Patty Loveless

Weakness: When a friend of hers gets hurt, she begans to beat herself up for it. So to stop this from happening she profors to fight alone.
 
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Name: Xoro

Number: I

Title: The Dancing Blade

Gender: Male

Element: Emotion

Appearance: Xoro
I'm sorry but this is the best i could get.

Weapon: Three Samurai Blade. He uses all three. Two in his hands and one in his mouth.

Personality: A quiet member of the organization. He is a fierce fighter when it comes to battle and executes moves with ease. He always speaks in a calm manner and no one remembers a time when he had lost his temper. He feeds his emotion into his weapon and strengthens them during battle.

Bio: Born in a small and quiet village. Xoro was a master when it came to swordplaying. He could defeat most of the village elders. But one night, his village was attacked by a strange darkness, bringing with it The heartless. Being the strongest, naturally, he tried to fend off the invaders. but he lost and payed a terrible price. He lost his heart to the darkness and his memory was severely damaged. He know wanders, trying to find answers to unlock his hidden past.

Theme Song: :My December" by Linkin Park
 

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Name: Sino

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Allegiance: Twilight

Keyblade: Large blue one that can slit in two

Appearance: Blonde hair, black cloak conceals all but face and only bottom of that can be seen.

Personality: Always serious and ignorant, can never admit he's wrong.

Bio: Friends and family were killed by heartless, he was surrounded and his keyblade appeared in his hand; he killed every heartless he saw, accidentally ripped a black curtain, which he used as his cloak.

Theme Song: (I'm not really that good with music. Don't know any. Sorry.)
 
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there were a few things I didn't like about Xerxes, mostly his past, so I'm going to change those a bit but still keep the general idea of the character. I'm also probably making him more of a wimp than in the last role play


Name Xerxes

Number I

Title The Paternal Husk

Gender Male

Element Heart

Appearance An incredibly tall Nobody rising above most people by three feet easily but other than that he has no prominent feature to identify him by. His skin is smooth and hairless from top to bottom. His eyes are dull green and usually the last thing you notice about him.
He isn't too thin or too fat and his physique is relatively fitting to his height. His chin is fairly round and the bridge of his nose his flat and slightly upturned where t meets the nostrils. He doesn't seem to wear anything other than that Organization coat


Weapon none.

Personality Xerxes is incredibly reliant on his non-emotions and displays the closest thing to having a heart compared to most nobodies. He acts like a parent to most of the nobodies save a few exceptions His kindness and generosity for those who he sees as children however don't translate into his leadership abilities and is either bad at leading the nobodies or simply does not care to do such. Either way he is growing constantly fearful that he will soon be deposed by another committee member and that combined with his already lack-luster role in the coming war and the general devision between Nobody Organization has him fearing that he is no longer needed or unwanted. This is the leading cause to his ever present paranoia and his recent actions in almost halting the war at the risk of causing infighting within his people is beginning to anger more than just a handful of his children.


Bio Xerxes in a different age had been known as Esrex. However he had been far from human then. The first life forms to be willed into existence by Kingdom Hearts did not have hearts. They were a horribly unfaithful and "logical" race that pained Kingdom Hearts to give life. These creatures glorified themselves and sought to rise above their creator as gods. However kingdom hearts after thousands of years of battling with this first race had decided that enough was enough and immediately created a second race this time it did not make the mistake of leaving these people without anything to make them wonder what was right and what was wrong.
The first race looked at these beings as inferior and saw their morality as ignorance. Though there had been one thing that these new creatures had that the first born wanted greatly. These new people had in their possession the element of light. A powerful thing indeed. But instead of asking for this light the First race began to war with the second so that they could have all the light for themselves
Esrex was born during this time a result of the union between a member of both races, He wasn't an oddity though the war taxed heavily on both creatures and a third separatist faction formed comprised of both races. Interracial mating was not uncommon in this circle.
To the first race the hybrids were disgusting and deserved not to have been conceived to begin with, they labeled these creatures as nothings. Eventually the populace of these hybrids grew to such an extent as to "force" the armies of the first race to take action and begin a mass genocide of these long lived beings. (A single generation of these creatures usually outlived ten of any of the other races).
Most of the hybrids grew to side with the race of light due to their philosophy of equality among the races. Esrex however had sided with the race of non-light, later renamed darkness. Esrex was shunned wherever he went in the society he had felt most at heart with and grew to accept it.
He would eventually prove valuable to those without hearts. Offering himself to science the studies done on him yielded the key to winning he war and gaining the light for those following the darkness. They would all fuse their bodies with the darkness and come out the stronger. However they did not take into account the result of doing with without any heart and instead of becoming what they had planned to become their bodies and souls became the first nobodies. The influence would soon enough spread to the point where it would affect those who followed the light turning most of them into heartless, the remaining few would go on to populate the universe with the races that now exist.
As more and more Nobodies came to exist they began to swear loyalty to Esrex who had, as a result of the experiments had become the creature that the first race had been planning to make of themselves.
Esrex had taken the moniker given to him by his people and gave their new forms the very same name. Nobodies. He looked after these creatures who now only wanted to exist in happiness where they had failed to during their past life.

It was during the war that the key blades had been created by those of the light to help fight of their kin who had as well become heartless. The key blades however were lose to the darkness after the end of the war and only a few remained din our realm of existence. The others drifted off to the realms of light dark and twilight to be used as deemed necessary.

During these early centuries Esrex was a mighty leader of his nobody people and given the highest respect above anyone else. And during this golden age was when the second human Nobody had appeared her name had been Ife. He had immediately fallen in love with her and eventually made her his queen. However due to the generally emotionless nature of the nobodies, a call back to their past lives. Such a strong emotion was seen as week and a group of nobodies claiming to be true to the race overthrew the current king and began to rule under a policy of self hate, an ideal that said that nobodies were incomplete and must attack those with hearts so that they could become whole again. This ideology would live through the centuries and become the basis for the modern Nobody belief.
Ife and Esrex were forced into hiding after being declared hereticle and impure, due to their human appearance.
To hide themselves they began to live within human society under the Names of Xerxes and Fixes, their true names already known to the civilizations of the “complete” races and seen as an enemy within those circles as well.
With the resurfacing of the key blade sin this realm the Nobody civilization as it existed then fell after many centuries of internal strife and Xerxes along with his wife returned to reunite his people. But he was now out of touch with his children and their culture was alien to him. He grew distaste for their new philosophy toward life and being so different he soon became fearful of his own people and shut himself away.

Through the centuries that followed the hearts of the complete grew stronger and stronger with each generation yielding more and more human nobodies. They banded together seeing themselves above the lesser nobodies. The committee was the result of Xerxes wanting to try and reunify his race under one government again. But he soon realized that there was little hope of such a thing as many of the human-nobodies shared the ideals of past tyrants and he began to loose trust in all but his closest followers, those he had given the title, Children of Ife.

When Organization XIII formed their leader constantly belittled Xerxes and mocked him at every turn it came to the point where in his radical experiments of the heart to become human again Xemnas had taken Fixe and killed her in a failed experiment. This is when most of Xerxes will to live and lead his people died out. And in an act of revenge gained the loyalty of many in Xemnas own order in an attempt to end his life. However tis is when Sora interrupted the plan but thankfully would go on to destroy Xemnas. The death of an Entire Organization is what fueled many of the nobodies into action against the key blade and Xerxes now almost entirely indifferent toward what his children decided to do allowed the war to take form and will back his children if his fears aren't realized and he is deposed as the head pontiff before anything can begin.

Theme Song Dies Nox et Omnia (day night and everything)

listen to it here
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?CurrentPage=1&bandID=493512
 
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Calling all new people to this RP and people who didn't post in the last one!

Here are some rules that I'm surprised crashkid didn't include in the first post:
--YOU MUST POST AT LEAST THREE TIMES A WEEK! (I thought that that would be a good amount; not too often, not too rarely.)
--PROPER GRAMMAR, SPELLING, PUNCTUATION, AND PARAGRAPHING IS (not necessary but) ENCOURAGED!!! People will get confused on what you are trying to say and might even ruin the story you had in mind for your character.
--IF YOU ARE CONCERNED WITH WHAT PEOPLE ARE DOING TO YOUR CHARACTER (yes, this is referring to the infamous "I Laughed and People Turned On Me" conflict), CLARIFY! Please don't use harsh language, or immediately assume people are trying to kill off your character.
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OK, some general rules are set down. And anyone involved in the original Organizations XIII RP should agree with these. If you want to see what I'm talking about, click here: http://forums.khinsider.com/showthread.php?t=75734&page=1
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Now, for my templates:

Organization Member:

Name: Graxic

Number: X

Title: The Prince of Calamity

Gender: Male

Element: Fire

Appearance: Graxic is, like all Organization members, very attractive. He's slim, but not actually skinny; he has some muscle on him. Graxic has messy red-blond hair and some 5-o'clock shadow of the same color. He wears the Organization cloak, but likes to deck himself out in a princely manner, since he was a prince (no crap). He wears a red crown with a flame emblem on the front. He also wears a golden ring on both of his middle fingers, has a small loop earring in his left ear, wears a belt with his sheath, and has pointy, steel-tipped boots.

Weapon: A slim, longish rapier held in a sheath on the belt. It can produce fire as it is swung.

Personality: Graxic is a tad haughty and big-headed, but he can be charming. He has a way with words and is very manipulative; he can persuade anyone to do almost anything.

Bio: Graxic (named Craig before his fall to darkness) was a young man, and the leader of his home world, Vanyez. He was born into the royal family. Uproar and revolution were thick in the air of Vanyez; the monarchy was clearly losing its footing. But as Craig grew, and discovered his talent as a speaker and leader, the world returned to peace once again. He convinced the world that his father, King August, was doing a great job, and that everything was under control.

When the world was away from the brink of revolution, Vanyez actually prospered as a whole; the economy was great and everything was going smoothly. The people loved him. But this extreme loyalty and support inflated the young prince's head a bit. Craig has tasted power, and he thirsted for more. He didn't just want to be a servant to his incompetant father; he wanted to rule.

So, at the young age of 14, he hired a stealthy hitman to do away with his parents, who Craig was convinced were doing all they could to ruin his future as king. He put on a mask of deepest remorse when he appeared to Vanyez the next day, but inside he rejoiced. The world was his plaything now.

He hired his most trusted childhood friend, Nathan, to be his royal advisor. Nathan was a small, meek boy, a year younger than Craig. He was weak, but he could flatter anyone -- he was almost as gifted as Craig in his manipulation. Nathan was bright and very perceptive; he sensed that Craig would become great one day. So at a young age he did all he could to put himself in a good position with the prince.

This very flattery would be the sole reason why Craig turned to darkness.

With his greatest supporter, Nathan, by his side, Craig began to think anything he wanted was in his grasp. Until he met Karina, an beautiful girl who would have nothing to do with Craig. He tried and tried, and nothing he could do would entice her; she alone seemed immune to his charm. And then he found out about the darkness; if she would not go willingly, he would have to possess her!

And a Noboday was born that day.

Theme Song: You Can't Always Get What You Want(?)(I dunno....)
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Keyblader:

Name: Veyal

Number: VI

Gender: Male

Race: White human

Allegiance: Light

Keyblade: Noon's Blaze

Appearance: Veyal has short, spiky blond hair and piercing, pale green eyes. He is of medium height, but he is muscular and quick. He wears a white vest with a light brown T-shirt underneath, baggy white pants (that don't fall down like Riku's), and light brown shoes that are wide, kind of like Vans. He also wears a thin golden chain with a diamond on the end, which matches his Keyblade's keychain.

Personality: Veyal was a born leader, despite his relatively low position in the Keybladers' rankings. He is typically happy and optimistic, but when something happens that causes him deep emotional pain, he gets slightly confused and lost, sometimes even breaking down completely and losing all hope. He is hard not to like.

Bio: Veyal is now 17 years old. He grew up in the slums of a large city, with a lot of sadness and despair around. But he was always lucky, continuously avoiding the dangers of rape, murder and drugs. This luck kept him hopeful; his family seemed to do rather well in the slums.

The hopefulness born of Veyal's luck drew other people to him for comfort; he always seemed to know what to say to calm distressed spirits.

But one night, while he was out late with a few of his friends, tragedy finally found its way into Veyal's life. When he came home, he found his parents and 2-year-old brother dead in their beds. "This can't be happening," he thought. That night, he wandered the city streets, alone and confused. Then, he finally accepted what happened.

Banging his fist on the wall of a local restaurant, he screamed curses into the darkness. He vowed to find who had done this, and why. Suddenly, a small spot of light shone ahead. A blade, a mysterious blade that looked a bit like an overly-decorated key, appeared in his hand. He thought he could hear a whisper in his ear, like the rustle of old newspaper as it blew down the city streets.

"Go."

Veyal raised his newfound weapon to the light, and found himself transported to a new world.

Theme Song: SexyBack (I dunno...)
 

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Name: Rexa

Number: VII

The Fury of Time

Gender: Male

Race: Human

Element: Time

Apperence: Rexa where the standard black uniform of the orginization but the sleves of the uniform are torn to shreads from the weapons imbeaded on his arms. A little of his long red hair sticks out. He is 6'4". His left eye is darkblue while the right is completely white, with a scar running down his right cheek. He is a little stocky but nothing to be proud of. He has the body of a 17 year old but since he can control time he really is much older.

Weapon http://guides.gamepressure.com/princeofpersiathetwothrones/gfx/word/1058323265.jpg called Daggertail inbedded in both arms. Can control them freely with mind and can extend the chains to endless lenghts.

Personality Rexa is a free spirit who likes to make jokes and never takes anything to seriously which can be looked at as lazy. This makes him more outspoken then the other commite members but he never disliked any of them he just did not care enough to make friends with any of them. In his opion they talk to much. He laughs but he fakes it all the time for he can not feel laughter. When he is serious though, he is a differnt person he fights ruthlessly and will not stop til his mission is done.

Bio Rexa was born many years ago but he went by the name John back then. He and his family lived in a small town that was one day ravaged by war. He always helped his family no matter what the problem was he remembers helping his younger brother and sister out all the time. One day he came home to find his house engulfed in flames when he went to check it out closer he found his entire family murdered. Rexa took this hard he began life as a drifter wandering from one town to the next hoping to find some way to bring his family back, he did not.

While he was searching he came across a gummi ship and stole it. He wanted to leave the world that caused him so much anguish so he left his world and went to twilight town for a while there he became a street thug and began to run his own gang. Life was good for him he had a rep and a home. Though it did not last forever.

One day while his gang where getting back from seeing a movie they were attacked by a unknown entity though Rexa would soon learn that it was called a heartless Rexa told the others that he would handle it and the others left. Rexa soon proved to be no match for the heartless and lost his heart to it.

When he woke up he noticed somthing was different the heart that ached in his body so much from the pain of losing his parents was no longer there. He considered this a blessing soon he learned of what he was and began to live life a new. Later on he met a member of what was called Orginization XIII and they seemed to be made up of people like him. He liked that fact and joined up. He now is a committe member and likes nothing more than to do what is told to him he loves doing missions and loves the thrill of conquering worlds.

Theme Song: Comfortably Numb by Pink Floyd
 
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Occ: Ummm,ok i guess we can be both a keyblader and a nobody member which is pretty cool.

KEYBEARER TEMPLATE

Name:Kosuke (Hoko his project name)

Gender:Male

Race: Humans

Allegiance:Keyblade (Nobody Keyblade)

Appearance:
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Nevermnind the sword just replace it with the keyblade.

Personality:Kosuke is pretty quiet at times and also hides his emotions from other people,something inside him takes advantage of this and well..all hell breaks loose. He is also cheerful at times and likes to help people when there in danger...depending who it is.


Bio:Hoko was not really his real name but more of his code name,which ment''Wolf'' where he got it was from Ansem the wise. Way back Ansem the wise did study about human hearts as well as worlds,he also had an apprentice that help him with his studys it was not long before Ansem Apprentice interest about the hearts of all worlds would let him go further till he suddenly became evil and took his name. Ansem the wise was force to hide his face in shame and also had a secret lab in twilight town,there he study the heartless and discover the nobodys..and knew there strength was great. Ansem the wise had to think fast so he adopted a boy from an orphange and made him his experiment..a person that would surpass the nobody and the keyblade itself..that would lie in this boy..Ansem the wise made..a heartless...called ''A heartless beast'' that would forever be inside this boy.

Hoko finally woke up but his eyes were red and a red aura surrounded his body with darkness and destruction. A heartless symbol glow on his forehead and this is how he look like in his true transformation.

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Hoko destroy the lab and left while Ansem the wise fear he ''might'' have made another mistake. When hoko woke up he was in the middle on Twilight town with a black Enigma (Unknown suit),picking himself up from the ground he look around...his memory...was lost...he never remember what he did. Now to face the world at age 15 Hoko does not realize what power lies with him or how it could hurt him in the future. Hoko then obtain a new name..Kosuke Himura..he was chosen by the keyblade..that seems to aid him everytime he battles..the heartless in him is looking for someone..who could it be?

Ansem the wise report ???

''I fear i have made an awful mistake on bringing harm to this child,he does not know what power lies in him. When i saw him break the glass container i knew from then on he has pass the new enemy that would appear in the near future. The sword that he layed on his shoulder was not something i counted on my research..it contain such power....I shall call it ''Shinigami of heartless''. i am nothing but a fool to not learn from my mistakes with my apprentice..when will i do something right for mankind. The boy must know how to control his anger...if he does this the darkness sealed inside him will stay resting...but emotion a strong thing indeed..i fear ''it'' will take advantage of it.''

Theme Song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L4DNBgm8MPM

Title: A Hero comes back.

Occ: My org member on my next post,i call number 11 :D
 

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I come back to you all anew.

Name: Maximus

Number: XI

Title: The Mad God

Gender: male

Element: Power of the stars

Appearance: I'll get back to you on that

Weapon: His weapon is a pair of gauntlets with two blades built into the base

Personality: Maximus is loyal and proud warrior and will give his life for his leader. He is very respectable to his oponents while fighting and will never pull punches He is also a bit psycotic because he is childish but at the same time ingenious, mad and at the same time happy. Also under his exterior he is a minipulative puppet master, what an enigma maximus is.

Bio: Maximus was born in the great city of warriors, Titanus. He was taught never to retreat from battlle, never to surrender, and that death on the battlefeild is the greatest glory you could achive in this life. He was taught how to block off his fear completely, he was taught how to kill, no, how too conquer. He was called by many, the perfect solider.

His childhood was actually quite standard, for a child of titanus. He had a caring mother, warrior father, and many friends. Like the other boys he was trained to fight, he was even put in stadiums because people wanted to see his superior skill over the others. His father was proud of him and such great expectations for his young son. Then the day came that maximus was to join the army under command of his father, a dark day indeed.

Maximus was ready for battle with the rest of the army against an enemy they knew little to nothing about, this enemy of course was the orginization XII. The forces of titanus fought feircly indeed but alas there rebelion was in vein. Like a nightmare they fell like flies and the only left was maximus fending off monsters with his fist alone, bleeding everywhere. This intrigued the leader of the orginization XIII, so much that he stoped the forces from attacking the child as he collapsed from exaustion. After he did the leader came up and captured the boys heart, turning him into a nobody and warped to the castle that never was.

He then found himself in a white room surrounded by tall white tthrones in a black coat such like the ones his old enimies were wearing, he was now one of them. From there on he got his weapons and he befriended two fellow members, marluxia and zexion. He learned things from them and was very interested in marluxias plan of overthrowing the org. because deep down maximus still had much hate for them.

Now he is plotting and waiting in the shadows until he can finnaly overthrow his false lord.

((P.S. - I know, I am horrible at templetes))

Theme Song: Song of storm and fire

((Ohh and pathfinder, I'm terribly sorry but it appears that someone has already taken by R1ku))
 

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Name:Xosuke

Number:XI

Age - 16

Title:The Giver of life/Raiden Nobody (One of the two)

Gender:Male

Element:Nature/Lightning

Appearance:
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Kosuke wears the enigma like all nobody members do,under his black hood is his Blue eyes with brown spiky hair. About 5'4 and weights about 130. When his energy spin out of control his enigma turns red and well as his glove giving it a new design (picture above)

Weapon -Scythe (Same design as Marluxcia) which is located on his back/word (Soul edge) Which Xosuke summons when he needs it on his right hand.

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Soul Edge​

Personality-Xosuke still has personality of a 14 year old and is very loyal to his superiors,his always quiet unless he finds something he disagrees with which happens from time to time. Xosuke also wonders around worlds even tho his Superior always tells him not to...like Marluxcia..its a habit hes grown into.

Bio

Xosuke at the time Xemnas was still alive was the ''14th'' member to be found by two nobody (Marluxcia and Larxene), found Xosuke to be weak compare to Roxas and was not to be made a member and was told to be ''dealt with'' by the hands of the two nobodys who found him. Marluxcia never really like Xemnas and refuse this order instead he and Larxene took him to Castle oblivion where that would be the last place Xemnas would look. There Marluxcia and Larxene watch over Xosuke and taught him some knowledge of nobodys.....even tho Larxene was VERY strict on him and Marluxcia had to deal with ''someone'' who invaded Castle oblivion. After a while Xosuke notice Larxene never came back to finish reading him the book ''Marquis de Sade'',Marluxcia came instead and told Xosuke she was dead.. Xosuke ..never felt anything..but stood quiet..sense Larxene was like a ''mother''to him Xosuke only smile and in his head thank her for teaching her the ways of lightning.

Marluxcia soon fell in the hands of the boy who defeated Larxene,Xosuke was left in Castle Oblivion by himself,Marluxcia Scythe appear in his hands..this was mark that Xosuke elements were decided and thank his teachers..but much rather say his ''Adopted parents'. Xosuke then sat on the throne of Catle oblivion waiting for someone to find him..many years later someone did find him and was a member of a new Org XII, Xosuke always reading ''Marquis de Sade'' while walking..he still hasn't finish the book.

Theme Song -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dS7aZeQ1Ii4

Title Theme - Shooting star

Battle theme - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=29DoeJb2rpE

Titile theme - No Reason!

His third theme song is..Deep dive..and we all know how it goes.
 
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Sephiroth please change your number,i have already called for number 11
 
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I am back. Can you save Xyana VIII and Sade will be returning as well. I'll post my profiles soon. Raiden, Sephiroth was XI in the first time around. Know I know this is a retry, and it is up to Crashkid, but if you are going by calling the position, he out called you. But this is up to you two to figure out. Meh, someone took Xyana's old number so I am taking one under it now.

Also Raiden, sorry i don't mean to sound mean,but something in your bio doesn't exactly work. in order for you to be a leader of an organization in the committee, your organization had to form BEFORE Xemnas's. That is really a note for everyone. that was something we had trouble with last time.

Remember if you are a committee memeber you are the LEADER OF YOUR OWN ORGANIZATION.

Another rule i propose, people with large sigs, try to remember to hide them for the RP. It just makes things easier. I will do that from now on and there are sigs far bigger than mine.
 
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Sorry for the double post but this thing is long enough on it's own. For those of you who knew Xyana and Sade, the only change is Xyana's number.

Name: Xyana

Number VIII

Title: The Rebellious Nightengale

Gender: Female

Element: Sound

Appearance: Xyana looks young, seeing as she was only 18 when she lost her heart and became a nobody. She wears the Organization cloak, the same as Xemnas’s organization; Her hair is cut unevenly, up to her chin on the right side and past her shoulders on the left. It is a pitch black with purple streaks. Her eyes are violet, and can be both charming and piercing at the same time. It often looks like she is wearing eyeliner. She is fairly attractive with a small nose and medium sized lips. Her ears are pierced, the right one 5 times and the left 3. One of the holes on each side contains an earring with the nobody symbol. She is about 5' 8' and weighs about 130 lbs. When not in the Organization outfit, if ever, she dresses in a relaxed Gothic Lolita style.

Weapon: 2 ball and chain that can be summoned seperatly. (Think Gogo from Kill Bill vol. 1)

Personality :Dark and cynical. She fully embraces the idea of Nobodies not letting emotion cloud her choices, but she does sometimes pretend to have them. In truth, she feels that having memories of emotion acts nearly identically to having a heart, only it allows more control of them. She loves logic and puzzles, as well as being very smart and an abstract thinker. As with many intelligent crafty cynics she isn't the most respectful and is very independent. Often deep in thought, Xyana can sometimes look as though she is depressed, and sometimes her thoughts are a bit, but as a Nobody, depression doesn’t effect her as it would a complete purpose. At times Xyana can also be quite irritable, while other times she will search another out to have a discussion or debate.

Bio: Well you didn’t want it to be short…
AS A FULL PERSON
As a girl, Naya grew up in a small peaceful village. She was always the loner and outside. Being the cynic she was, she questioned the stringent religious beliefs of the village. She was branded a heretic. Children her own age were told by their parents not to be friends with her. It was little wonder that when a mysterious illness started spreading, the overly superstitious town blames the 15-year-old Naya for starting it. It didn’t help that for a year of the plague, Naya’s own family, as well as the family of her only friend were not harmed. They said that she was channeling the energy of an evil spirit, or than some god had punished them for the sinner in their mists. It meant nothing to them when Naya explained that her family and the others who avoided the plague lived on a hill and got their water from a different source, or that the fish were becoming fewer in the stream. The accusations got so bad that her own parents asked her to leave the house. So she did, with the only person who believed her innocent being her younger sister Diani.

She fled far from her town. One night a group of mercenaries came through and tried to take the few things she had from her tent. In self-defense, Naya managed to kill one of them with a tent pole. Instead of trying to kill her, the group offered her to join them. She traveled with them as not only their youngest member but the only girl. A year later, her friend managed to find her, with news that her sister had fallen ill. Not only that, the nature of the epidemic had changed. Upon death, witnesses say, the recently deceses turn into strange shadow creatures and attack those around them. If attack, one become ill or dies, instantly become one of the creatures. The survivors had all managed to take refuge in the temple on the hilltop.

Naya returned as fast as she could. She found her sister quarantined with 2 other children and an older man. She was by far the worst off. Despite warning, Naya took her chanced and stayed by her sister’s bed, telling her stories, but more to her sister’s enjoyment, singing. Naya could tell that her sister was about to die that night. Her friend tried in vain to make her leave the room. It happened around midnight, in the middle of her favorite song, Diani’s body began to fade. A purple crystallized heart rose from her chest. Naya kept on singing, a single tear falling from her eyes. Instantly the dark creature appeared on th bed where her sister had been. Naya looked it straight in it’s yellow eyes and continued the song, even as it slashed across her own chest, killing her.

AS A NOBODY
(This takes place in Twilight Town, but it is quite a bit before KH2 and it is a much more violent and dangerous place.) Naya awoke in a strange woods. It was night time and raining. Naya was cold. It didn’t help that she was completely naked. She curled up against a tree trying to keep warm and rationalize what had happened. Suddenly she heard someone yell something to what she imagined to be another person. “Lets get back to the usual spot. We can find him in the morning.” A different voice answered, a girl’s this time. “Yea, if he’s still alive. I don’t know about you, but I am checking the forest.” That voice sounded as if it were getting closer. Naya hid behind a tree as footsteps approached. Naya knew before the girl said anything that she had been found. “What the-“ She girl approached. She was tan with long brown hair. Her clothes were ripped, but Naya was unsure whether or not that was on purpose. She stepped forward. “So your one of those weirdoes who just shows up randomly, and naked. Someone told me about you. What, do you guys live in these woods?” The girl sounded angry, but for some reason, Naya didn’t feel angry back. That made it easier to respond, but Naya still had no idea what to say. Finally she spoke. “Do you have clothes I could wear.” Naya surprised herself with how calmly she said it, the girl must have been to, because she just nodded.

The girl was part of one of Twilight Towns more notorious gangs. Naya proved her skill and was excepted, but at a low rank. She lived with the gang for about a year. As time went on she began learning the secrets of some of the members. She was not the only one who had come here out of no where. There were 2 others, Nathan and Muria. She also found out that both of them had special abilities whose full power they kept hidden. Soon, Naya discovered the same was true for her. She had the power over sound. The three of them became quite close. She also noticed something else set the three of them apart, though she couldn’t quite figure it out

Naya had problems with the gang, the hierarchy and it’s leaders. She was also tired of having to keep what she could do a secret. She had been thinking of leaving for a long time, but the advantages of staying outweighed the advantages of leaving. Naya found herself using logic to figure things out more and more since she arrived. What finally forced her to leave was the death of one of the higher ups brother. He was loved by almost everyone and the whole gang cried, even the toughest. The whole gang, that was, except Naya, Nathan, and Muria. That didn’t go over well with the highers. Branded as cruel, insensitive and inhuman, (the last one being not far off), Naya ran. Nathan joined her soon, followed by Muria. They lived mainly away from town, for fear of the gang, although they could take them on. Together they discovered their weapons and the extent of what they could do.

One day, while visiting town, Nathan spotted a conspicuous man dressed in a black cloak walking towards them. “Do you know what you are?” The man asked. Naya was puzzled. The man pulled them aside and explained what a Nobody was. He didn’t stay long. He quickly vanished through a portal he created. Naya and the others were stunned, but they were determine to find others. Already having nicknames themselves, Naya decided to form an Organization.

Her Organization was modeled slightly after her mercenary group and a little after the gang as well. One key difference is the lack of absolute hierarchy. She shares some of the leadership roles with Thannax, Nathan’s new name, and Ruxima, Muria’s, but other than that, they live more as a group than a hierarchy.

She had mixed thoughts about the death of the three Keybladers. She couldn’t have cared less about Kairi. She was to dependant on others to count for anything. Sora’s passing was almost celebrated. His attitude against Nobodies was nauseating. She felt bad for Roxas though. Poor guy, having Sora as an other. Riku had been curious and daring. His care for his friends reminded her of her own for her sister. But logically it made sense. They needed to go, they were a threat. So she didn’t dwell on it much. So now she sits as the superior of the Organization VIII of the committee.


Just for fun, Theme Song: See who I am- Within temptation.

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Name: Sade

Gender: Female

Race: Eastern Gardener (Made up race. They are human but with pointy ears. This would be the race of Braig, Dilan, and whoever Saix’s somebody was.)

Allegiance: Darkness

Keyblade: Midnight's Void

Appearance: Sade stands at 5’4”. She has an average body structure but tends to lean on the thinner side due to her past. She has dark curls that loom black unless the light hits them when one can see a glimpse of deep purple. She has fairly pale skin which contrast sharply with her violet eyes that are both deep and piercing. She wears thick eyeliner. She has a small nose and average lips. Around her neck she wears a gold necklace on a large gold chain. The pendant is shaped the same as Sora, only upside down. She wears a black long sleeve hoodie that is not too tight or extremely loose. On her hands she wears black fishnet gloves that go up to her elbow. She wears baggy black pants with three chains on either side, and two straps behind. On her feet she wears black combat boots. Here is a sketch I did of her.

Personality: Sade is dark, cold, withdrawn, and she is hardly concerned with others. She is rude and anti-social. Sade is a deep thinker and is often lost in thought. She is often depressed, and doesn’t talk to anyone about herself. She is very smart and curious, though it isn’t visible and can be manipulative at times. She trusts no one and expects nothing of anyone. Despite what it may seem like however, she listens and hears everything. The only thing that can sway her cool and collected attitude is her own thoughts.

Bio: Sade was got her name, meaning “ray of light,” from her mother and father who were overjoyed finally to have a child of their own. Her name also reflected the situation of her world, Radiant Gardens a the time of her birth. Ansem the Wise nobly rules of the peaceful land. Her father was a cook in the castle kitchen and her mother was a gardener, so Sade grew up in the castle. Her curiosity led her to explore the castle from a young age. She poked around so much that Even, one of the kings apprentices installed multiple new locks on his lab. Some of his apprentices were kinder than others. Sade was always the more introverted type and never really made friends with anyone. She did outwardly have acquaintances, such as another girl growing up in the castle named Kairi.

When Sade was around 5 years old, things started to change around the castle. A new apprentice had arrived, which Aeleus told her was name Xehanort. Sade, ever curious was drawn to the new man. She leaned by hiding in the library about their experiments with darkness and Ienzo’s, the youngest, request for an expanded research facility. Things happened fast. First the experiments increased in number and secrecy. Even the apprentices who had been kinder were hardly seen. Then Ansem the Wise vanished, then Kairi disappeared. Then all of the apprentices. Finally strange creatures started attacking the people of the world, by then called by everyone Hollow Bastion. Some people fled. She heard one say they were off to another world. Many fell to these creatures, known as the heartless. The outskirts of the world fell first, but within a year they had reached where Sade lived. Not being able to sleep that night, she had watched her mother turn into one of them. Sade fled into the castle and hid in a small room she had found while exploring.

She didn’t cry for long. She stayed hidden, venturing out only for food or water. Thankfully the new leaders of the castle needed to eat. It took a while for the heartless to find her, but once they did it became a constant struggle. He fought them off with whatever she could, barely sleeping. She would get sick from lack of sleep, but what else could she do. This struggle for survival lasted like this from the time she was 8 to, the best she could calculate, 11. Three whole years. She was thin and sickly, but alive. At age 11 she began having strange dreams in her short fitful sleep. Dark dreams about a key. One night the dream was especially vivid. She was on a platform in darkness. A voice out of nowhere said. “You are it’s rightful bearer, but the kings heart is strong.” With a flash a key appeared in her hand. It have a silver base and a gold blade. The shape of the key at the end fit perfectly with her necklace. Then next day as a swarm of heartless approached, Sade grabbed for a pole she had been storing for defense. It began to glow a dark purple and red. Suddenly it transformed into an extravagant key-like thing of black and ocher. She didn’t have time to think. This key worked way better than anything she had ever tried. And made her life remarkably easier. She began to venture out of her hiding place to spy on the masters of the castle, a witch named Maleficent, and Xehanort, or what looked like him, calling himself Ansem. She learned of the power of darkness and even snuck into the library to read up on it.

One day while she was curled up on the bed in the old bedroom she hid in a heartless approached. She figured it was as good a time as any to test her theory. It was a theory that slowly developed from a nagging within her heart at the beginning of the reign of darkness. It was shaped by all she had seen and learned. As the heartless approached she whispered softly, “Stop.” The heartless looked around as if confused. More came. Again she whispered, “Stop,” And again they stopped. A purple glow had begun to form around Sade and her eyes looked as if they were glowing. Before she could try anything else, the heartless scurried away.

The responded to the being of the most darkness, which was Maleficent, second only to what she had figured out to be Xehanort’s heartless. She passed her time reading and writing and occasionally chatting with a shadow heartless she had under her “spell.” She found out that Ansem was looking for a key. Whether he didn’t notice her or she was just not the right one, she did not know until later.

When she was 14 someone knew came to the castle, another human. His name, she found out, was Riku. It was no surprise for her that he was fro another world. She had known about them for a long time. She just wished she could travel to other worlds like Maleficent let Riku do, but she didn’t dare try to sneak through.

She followed everything that happened in the last year from Riku’s point of view. She could tell his heart was similar to hers, though also slightly different. She watched him battle Sora and except the darkness, or more specifically, “Ansem.” The more she watched Sora the more she realized that even if Xehanort’s heartless had noticed her, only Sora would have worked. Xehanort truly was smart. She watched Maleficent fall, Sora turn into a heartless and back, and finally watched him disappear into the heart of the world.

Soon after something that Sade had given up on happened. People started returning, and rebuilding. After a bit, Sade came out of the castle. She had not spoken to another person in around nine years. Though she was introverted quiet and slightly disrespectful as a young child, she was now cold and aloof. What else could one ask. Often the returnees would ask for her story after telling their own. “You shouldn’t care.” She often answered. The Hollow Bastion Restoration Committee had set up orphanages for children who returned without parents and, against her will, Sade was sent to live there. The other children tried to befriend her at first, but then gave up. After about a year she ran away from the orphanage. No one tried to stop her, no one could. Naturally she fled back to the castle, back to her small room. That was home for her. During all this time she did not show her Keyblade to anyone and used it only when needed to protect herself, though she did summon it just to analyze it every once in a while.

She did still visit town. Her main source of news was a man who called himself Leon. She would talk to him because he wouldn’t ask about her because he didn’t want the questions directed at him. Nor was he sickly happy al the time like some of the others.

She had noticed that it seemed, for about a year, all of those who had known Sora said nothing of him. She noticed, but didn’t care. What she did notice during that year were a gradual influx of heartless and the appearance of new beings that no one knew quite what to call. After that year, Sora himself showed up. She learned of a new threat. Nobodies. She quickly became fascinated with them. All she felt were negative emotions. To be a Nobody would be a drastic improvement for her. She watched the Organization whenever they were on her world. Alone in the castle she mastered the dark portal she had watched them make. She hated Sora for destroying them, for some of them were not evil at all. The king showed up too. Instantly Sade recognized him and his key from her dream long ago. As she looked at the key it faded ever so slightly for a second as if longing for it’s true master.

She found out from Leon soon after that Sora, Riku, and Kairi had defeated the Organization and returned home. Life went relatively calmly for a few years. Sade took advantage of Merlin, still not revealing that she was a keyblader. Never the less she learned to channel her darkness into magic. She practiced sparing with Leon using a sword as apposed to her Keyblade, and sometimes she would hide away and practice her slight command over the heartless which she was strengthening slightly. But most of the time she spent alone, thinking, reading, or writing.

One night she had a dream. It was a simple dream and it’s meaning was clear enough. Three skeleton keys fell in all black one at a time. When she woke up she knew what had happened. Her trip into town confirmed it. Yuffie passed by silently. She found Leon sitting n a low wall with his head in his hands. She stood in front of him. He looked up. His eyes were red from crying, and she had never seen him cry. “They’re dead aren’t they.” She said matter-of-factly. Leon just lowered his head.

Soon after, the Mouse King arrived to consult the committee. Sade could not get into the meeting unseen so she waited outside. She couldn’t hear much, but all of a sudden she heard Cid scream, “What? A keyblader here in Radiant Gardens?” Sade froze and listened more closely. She faintly heard footsteps coming towards the door. Sade walked a few steps away from the building as not to look like she was listening. The door opened and she heard Leon’s voice. “I bet I know who it is too.” The door closed behind him. “I knew you’d be out here, Sade. You have a Keyblade don’t you.”

“So what if I do or don’t. What does it matter?” She said coldly.

“Come inside,” Leon motioned to the door. “The King wants to talk.” Sade scoffed but followed.

She leaned against a wall opposite the King. The mouse summoned his Keyblade. “You know what this is, right?” He said. Sade chuckled and stuck out her hand. The key vanished from the king’s hand and reappeared in her own.

“A Keyblade.” She said. The key jumped back to the king’s hand as he called it back in shock. Her hand glowed purple for a second as her own Keyblade appeared. “Midnight’s Void.” She stated without emotion. “What do you want.” Mickey explained the meeting of the keybladers. Sade was genuinely not interested in saving anyone, but the prospect of traveling to new worlds won out. She followed the king to his Gummi ship and left.

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If it wasn’t already clear, she is the rightful bearer of Mickey’s Key but his heart is strong enough to hold onto it. Also, your Rping effect which side Sade ends up on, if a side at all.

Theme song. A Dangerous Mind by Within Temptation
 

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I am back. Can you save Xyana VIII and Sade will be returning as well. I'll post my profiles soon. Raiden, Sephiroth was XI in the first time around. Know I know this is a retry, and it is up to Crashkid, but if you are going by calling the position, he out called you. But this is up to you two to figure out. Meh, someone took Xyana's old number so I am taking one under it now.

Also Raiden, sorry i don't mean to sound mean,but something in your bio doesn't exactly work. in order for you to be a leader of an organization in the committee, your organization had to form BEFORE Xemnas's. That is really a note for everyone. that was something we had trouble with last time.

No it makes perfect sense,because my nobody was originally found my xemnas group but Xemnas didn't want him so he told Marluxcia and Laraxene to kill him..but they didn't. After both there death Xosuke was left in castle oblivion by himself till many years later another group found it..simple as that.

Also about the sigs i'll hide them ^^
 
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oh crap your right. When I began typing Kairi'Heart was the only one who had posted. and I guess I never noticed it. In all fairness I should probably create a new character but after spending so much time reworking my character to better fit how I wanted him and getting rid of a lot of things I felt were unnecessary in Xerxes past I feel reluctant to give the position up to someone who pretty much created a Xemnas rip off and only beat me because of my tendencies to over type things. though I guess Ill work on a new character but I call III I have an idea for a character that I do not want to have to give up.

As for raiden what it is is that their were originally 12 organizations that held power over the nobodies each one had a leader and they formed a committee of all the leaders to better the unity of the nobodies so these organizations exist for years and xemnas shows up forms the thirteenth he gets offed by sora a few years later sora and his gang are killed in one way or another the nobodies are angry at the key weilders and thus this war is starting. micky is like all 0h n0ez!!!11!! and gathers up some key bladers to help fend off the nobody horde (give or take a few unnecessary words and or phrases)
 
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Aw. I wanted Xerxes... don't relinquish the position that fast please. II is open for Xoro, if you want. i do agree that he is a bit of a Xehanort rip off. If Xoro is going to be I, Please make it make sense that he is the leader of all Nobodies. That is why Xerxes gets my vote for superior.

Also, Raiden. Read the RP. These Organizations were around before Xemnas. He was just one of a group of Organization leaders. This is what he said on pge 3 off the original RP.


Xemnas has been eliminated. He was XIII. So that leaves the XII. I'm sorry, but that is how I wanted the plot line to work out. If you have any problems, then you can pm me and use large fonts and the cursing smilie. I'm sorry for any and all inconveniences that this plot has caused.

So according to this RP. we all come before Xemnas, not after. Not my decision. Have a problem? Ask Crashkid.
 

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Yeah I know I liked Xerxes character alot one of my faviroutes thus far. Ill leave the templat eup but im still gunna work on the other one incase.
 

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So according to this RP. we all come before Xemnas, not after. Not my decision. Have a problem? Ask Crashkid.

You seem pretty confident,no i dont have a problem with it..but if you have a problem with my character Deal with it,i am new to this RP anddont know it very well but now i do. Also My story still makes sense,my character lived even thru Xemnas era..but he wasn't in his group of Org 13 so Marluxcia and Laraxene (like it saids in the bio) hidden Xosuke from Xemnas.
 
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Raiden not to seem rude or anything but I don't think you are fully grasping the story. I explained it on the last page for you maybe you didn't see it but I think its the last post. I'm pretty confident in my explanation there but if its still confusing please tell me exactly what you don't understand and ill do my best. Oh and Marluxia doesn't have a c in it.
 

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To clarify the story:
*Organization XIII gone.
*As it turns out, Organization XIII one of 13 organizations, the leaders of which comprise the XIII Committee.
*With said organization gone, the 12 remaining organizations get revenge on keybearers.
*Mickey reveals eight new keybearers to defeat the onslaught of the XIII Committee, now holding 12 organization heads.

If any of this is still confusing, I don't know how to better explain it. As it is said in the Bean Scout Scoutmaster Motto- "Its not fair, but I don't care." Er, not really...
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Name: Miltuxhi

Number: V

Title: The Steeled Scientist

Gender: Male

Element: Metal

Appearance: He wears the standard organization cloak and has long grey hair. He has a pair of bluish-tint glasses

Weapon: He wields a lance that he can summon and dismiss at will.

Personality: He doesn't have many close friends because he is a workaholic. Once he starts an experiment, he may continue it with out rest for days. He is a pretty good cellist.

Bio: Miltuxhi was onced a prominent scientist named Lithium who lived on the world known as Dawn Acropolis. Bathed in the pinkish light of perpetual dawn, he worked as the lead chemist in a corporation named for himself. His greatest contribution to science was a new gummi block known as the Eris-G. He used state of the art technology to create this piece, a block that could attack as well as defend and it could be used to power a ship and navigate it. This scientific start brought him in contact with the one and only Ansem the Wise.

Lithium began to grow interested in the mysterious anomaly that was the heart. He asked Ansem if he could borrow the plans for the experiments on the heart. Ansem vehemently denied this and flew into a tirade, claiming that the experiments were much to risky. Lithium saw this as a ruse for Ansem to keep this his own until he was famous for it. Lithium left, but not without thoughts.

He came back and copied the plans. Lithium took the copies back to Dawn Acropolis and began the experiments in his laboratory. He built all of the equipment, and one day the experiment was ready to begin. He double checked every system then turned on the machines. Everything went wrong. One of his hearts was corrupted by darkness and burst forth as a heartless. Lithium was thrown back by the creature, who had taken his heart. Thus the nobody Miltuxhi was born. Overcome by sadness at his loss and knowing that without feelings he could continue, he left his office and founded one of the Organizations.

Just for fun, Theme Song: Jack Sparrow- Hans Zimmer

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Name: Geiga Taurus

Gender: Male

Race: Nomtra

Allegiance: Light

Keyblade: Cosmic Flail.

Appearance: He has necklength purple hair and yellow eyes. He wears a black jumpsuit with three grey stripes running like this:///.

Personality: He is a risk taker and loves to live on the edge. He often doesn't think situations through and ends up in some form of trouble.

Bio: Geiga Taurus is a Nomtra, a race of beings that can use magic and are often called half-demons. As a young boy his family was persecuted by the city folk on the world he lived, a world known as Gotham of the Dusk. This megalopolis of indigo skies is home to many nomtra, but they are the minority their. Geiga spent most days on the run from gangs out to beat him up for the soul reason that he and his people were different. But one day everything changed.

Cornered. Geiga had slipped into the clutches of a gang and now they were going to beat him up. In a frantic rush he screamed for help, and something odd happened. A light flashed in the gang members' eyes, and when the light left they saw the nomtra wielding a Keyblade. The head looked like a the ball of a ball and chain mace. Then the rod was of a silver material with white rectangles sporadically placed on it. The hilt looked like shining fire with a silver handle in the middle. Geiga marveled at it only for a moment, then he dispatched his oppressors.

Soon after, King Mickey went searching the worlds for more keybearers. Fortunately, he found them and Geiga was taken to Disney Castle to help defeat the menace that is the XIII Committee

Theme Song: The Kraken- Hans Zimmer
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Also, look at the first page to see if you are accepted. Some people would be accepted if they make their character bios LONGER. One Paragraph does not suffice; two or more is best.
 
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