Fanfiction ► One Piece the Voyage of a Lifetime.

[ryaneden]

Well this marks a return to my active fanfic writing. as i present to you guys and gals. an introduction into my world of One Piece.

Chapter 00: Introduction

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It is 50 years after the time of Monkey D. Luffy and his crew. Luffy is a renown legendary pirate. Almost everyone has heard his amazing tells. But some doubt there real as they sound like they could have been made up. But Kai, Luffy's son. Knows there true. And wants to know what happened to his father and his crew. So he and his Nakama hope to become great pirates like the original Straw Hat Pirates.


Kai, 18 years old. Has the abilities of the Gomu Gomu No mi. much like his father he will do anything for his friends. Or as he calls them his family. Kai wears his father's signature Straw Hat, which was given to Kai by Shanks, who passed it on from Luffy to Kai. Shanks is thought to of died the following year he delivered the Straw Hat to Kai.




Emmi, 17 years old. Emmi is the younger blood sister of Kai. Emmi is much like her mother Nami.
However. She is much nicer and gentler than her mother when dealing with regular citizens. Emmi is often seen as one of the smartest people in the East Blue. And even though young her Navigation and Map Making skills would make her mother proud of her. Emmi uses dual Chakrams
as her weapon when ever she has to fight.


Ryuu, 18 years old. The Nitoryu (Two Swords Style) Swordsman of the group. He is the son of Zoro. Much like his father he has great pride sometimes his pride will get him into dangerous situations. Ryuu is one more mature members of the group. However he has been known just to act as childishly as Kai. Ryuu has a deadly rivalry with his Marine sister Fuumiko. Not many know the reasoning behind there rivalry. But if the two where to engage each other in serious battle they would wind up killing each other.


Kenji, 19 years old. Kenji is the cook of the group. Much like his father he values the female members of the group more than the males. And put 110% perfection into the female's meals. While he only puts 27% into the males meals. Kenji uses the same type of fighting style his father uses the Black Leg style. And also much like Sanji, he has a friendly rivalry with Ryuu, Kenji is also one of the younger members of the group that has a job on the island where they live. He works in the school cafeteria


Daichi, 16 Years old. The son of Usopp & Kaya. Daichi unlike his father is very brave. However his bravery is just hot air. As he's really much like his father. A pure blooded cowered. But when pushed Daichi can fight back. He uses a Slingshot (Using Usopp's pre-time skip techniques as well)


Kaori 14 Years old. The youngest member of the group. Kaori is the doctor of the group and has a strict no violence rule. She is the only pacifist of the group. But however she has taken training in using a Kendo Stick as weapon by Ryuu. The older members of the group often protect Kaori as much as possible, something that she hates as she wants to prove to them she can take care of her self.


Junko, 32 Years old. The daughter of Robin and the half sister of Ryuu & Fuumiko. The oldest and most troubled of the group. Junko keeps many secrets from her friends. Junko has the devil fruit Hana Hana No Mi. She is also a teacher at the school on the island they live at. Junko is devoted to her friends and is often called there “Mother” by villagers and School staff.


This Makeshift family is about ot have there adventure Un-expectidly start earlier than any of them expected.

There plan is to sail the same path as the original Straw Hat crew. As one day while Emmi was fishing an Eternal Log Pose and A Log book washed up on shore with a note holding them together.


It read.


“Dear, Emmi I hope this reaches you safely. I bet you've gotten so big now. When we left you and the others where babies barely taking your first steps. We couldn't stay at that island long enough, and didn't want you to grow up at sea. I hope Junko-Chan & Shanks has raised you all to be good children. Remember never give up your dreams. Always fight for what you believe in and never let anyone make you for believing in those dreams. We All Love and Miss You all” - Nami it was stained with blood.


Emmi not knowing what to do with the note. Hid it and keeps it close by her. Emmi preys everyday that she hopes the blood on the note doesn't mean what she thinks it does. As she desperately wants to see her mother again.




A lot has happened in the world of One Piece in the 50 years since Luffy is to have said to find the fabled One Piece. Technology has been steadily increasing at an alarming rate. And hoping to derail the new generation of Pirates from there course. The Marine HQ created the school system which all children under the age of 20 must attend until they graduate.


This world is about to be set into motion as the peaceful life is about to end and the Silver Age Of Pirates will began!


Look forward to it in the next chapter!

 

[ryaneden]

Here's the official first chapter of my story. but unlike most of my stories the main characters don't appear right away. but this chapter is important you guys! So read it and don't skip it!


Chapter 01: The Marine Captain Roronoa Fuumiko

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(Note: Chapter 1 & 2 focus's on Fuumiko and the new SH's will not make a physical appearance till Chapter 3 And I am aware that Zhyper died in the Film Z. but my story follows the Manga cannon not the Anime a bit.)


“Fuumiko. Starting from today onward you will be in charge of the G1 Marines.” Sakazuki said to Fuumiko as they was sailing on a boat to the base. “Eh? Are you sure I’m ready for that Fleet Admiral? I Only just became captain!” Fuumiko remarked to Sakazuki, who turned around to Fuumiko. “Yes, I'm completely serious about this. I Full faith in your skills Fuumiko. “Sakazuki said as they came up to the base the marines stood in salute as they arrived. “You of course know your former captain Majiko once controlled this base.” He continued as they waked towards the based. “Don't remind me of that traitor. “Fuumiko said lying as she though about her Sensei all the time.


“I Can tell your lying but it it's all right. I'm the one that stuck up for you when the others that you where in with Majiko. Because we can not loose someone like you to the scum of the earth. “He said as Fuumiko thought to herself. “Yeah right he doesn't care about me. All the cares about is my family name”


“Remember you are a Captain of the Marine corp G1. And you are my student as well” Sakazuki said placing a hand on her shoulder. “Even though your of scum descent. You have chosen the right path the path of Absolute Justice. Believe in it and will treat you right” Suzuki said as the doors closed has he headed out of the base.


“No hard pressure right?” Fuumiko thought to herself.


Later that day.


Fuumiko feel asleep at her desk while doing paper work and was in the middle of a dream. A dream in which was the last time she had saw her father.




“A Marine huh? Well whatever.” Zoro said scratching his head as he turned away from Fuumiko. “Do you got a problem with it it's my dream!” Fuumiko shouted at him. “No Problem with it. But can you say you'd truly be happy using your sword for them. Knowing everything you know about them?” Zoro said as he walked off. “WHO NEEDS YOU I'LL A GREAT MARINE CAPTIAN SOMEDAY! I'LL CAPTURE EVERY ONE OF YOU PIRATE SCUM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Fuumiko yelled as Zoro waved bye to her.


“Huh?” Fuumiko woke suddenly from her dream and looked down at her desk. “Dream huh? What a stupid dream” She said putting her legs on her chair a gripping them. “It's just stupid.” She said as tears rolled down her eyes.




That night.
While Fuumiko was making her rounds checking on the prisoners She heard a loud explosion coming from outside. “What was that!” She said running towards it. “Oi! Marine's you home?” A Voice said as Fuumiko appeared outside. “Y-Your Zhyper!” Fuumiko said drawing her sword preparing to fight him. “Oi, Oi, Oi you kids are so reckless today.” he said as he made his way towards her.


“Get away from our captain!” A Group of soldier’s said as they come with there pistols and guns
“No you idoits don't attack them!” Fuumiko said turning around but it was two late as they where already brought down by Ain “You eliminated 600 solders in a blink of an eye!” Fuumiko said to Ain “It was child’s play. Plus they where interrupting Zhyper-Sensei.”




“What do you want?” Fuumiko said as she was being held in place by Binz's Devil Fruit. “Your talents” Zhyper said with a smile. “W-What?” Fuumiko said in shock. “I Want your become a Nakama of mine in the Neo-Marines. Your talents are being wasted fighting for these blind fools.” He continued before being interrupted by Fuumiko “Like hell I’ll became apart of that rouge faction!
“Wait, your a swordsman and so is Ain. How about you two have a match without the use of your Devil Fruit Ain. If you lose Roronoa. You'll join us how does that sound?” Zhyper said as Binz let Fuumiko go, who nodded yes. “Then it's settle Roronoa.” Zhyper said


Moments later.


Fuumiko is seen lying on the ground defeated by Ain's skill. “Welcome, Fuumiko to the Neo-Marines” Zhyper said as Ain and Binz carried her onto the ship.




Uh-Oh this doesn't look good for Fuumiko having been defeated by Ain and forced into Zhyper's Neo-Marines that have resurfaced how will the rest of the world react to this sudden development?


Next chapter title: Zhyper's Ambition & Fuumiko's Heart Ache.

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[KingdomKey]

I'm in love with this story already. Why? Because its One Piece related. I really like the introduction of characters, and feel familiar to them already. It's extremely interesting to see Fuumiko had made up her mind to become a marine, instead of a pirate like her father. I wonder why her dream was to be a marine from the start.

Now then, there are a lot of grammar mistakes to be seen, and a few spelling errors. You also need to use periods at the end of the sentences, the characters happen to speak in. Don't get me wrong, you told the story well. In the introduction, you have a lot of 'there' instead of 'their'. Next time you write, I hope you'll look here: http://forums.khinsider.com/creative-writing/182017-lets-talk-grammar.html

This way, you can use them more properly. C:

 

[ryaneden]

I'm in love with this story already. Why? Because its One Piece related. I really like the introduction of characters, and feel familiar to them already. It's extremely interesting to see Fuumiko had made up her mind to become a marine, instead of a pirate like her father. I wonder why her dream was to be a marine from the start.

Now then, there are a lot of grammar mistakes to be seen, and a few spelling errors. You also need to use periods at the end of the sentences, the characters happen to speak in. Don't get me wrong, you told the story well. In the introduction, you have a lot of 'there' instead of 'their'. Next time you write, I hope you'll look here: http://forums.khinsider.com/creative-writing/182017-lets-talk-grammar.html

This way, you can use them more properly. C:

Sorry for the spelling errors i was feeling good when i finished that up. also i used BGM from the series to help me write the chapters ^_^