O N T H E I N S I D E {Vanitas one-shot}



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Shasha

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AN – I did this in like 10 minutes as a prompt for my English AP class xD
Prompt was, write a story about anything but every sentence has to start with the next letter of the alphabet.
Hope you like it~ I also posted this on other sites that include, DeviantART, Fanfiction.net, Wattpad, Quotev and another that I totally forgot the name of...
Word count – 229
A
gonizing, never ending hate.
B
y now, the hate was normal.
C
ould be the fact that the boy was literally a being of hate.
D
rowning in the hate that once belonged to his other half.
E
very day, he would fight until he could no longer stand.
F
orcing himself to become stronger for the special day.
G
athering up more and more hate.
H
ateful and broken.
I
nversed emerged from his out of control emotions.
J
ust to please his Master.
K
indness was not one of Master’s virtues.
L
osing was something the Master didn’t appreciate, and he would make sure you got the message.
M
ostly everything displeased him.
N
ever had the boy been shown any type of kindness and hospitality.
O
blivious to such feelings, he was cold blooded.
P
ain was also very common.
Q
uickness and caution was the key to avoiding this.
R
evenge was what he aimed for.
S
trangling the life out of the idiot he shamefully called his other half, was all he craved.
T
o end the misery.
U
nlocking Kingdom Hearts with the mighty X-Blade was what he was made for.
V
ictory was only moments away.
W
hatever were to happen, no matter what, he was going to WIN
X
ehanort was going to pay for everything he’s done.
Y
et, the boy was much too broken and power driven, that it all slipped away.
Z
oophagous, he still craved that power he never managed to get.

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This was... AWESOME! Every word of the alphabet to describe Vanitas was brilliantly done! I like how fitting it begins with him being power driven to ending with his unfortunate demise. :c I hope you got an A for this in your English AP Class!
 

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This was... AWESOME! Every word of the alphabet to describe Vanitas was brilliantly done! I like how fitting it begins with him being power driven to ending with his unfortunate demise. :c I hope you got an A for this in your English AP Class!
Ah~
Thank you very much for your kind words~!
I tried my best to keep it in character and as 'angst-y' as possible ;u;
And I did~!
Everyone was taken a back by how sad it was, even if almost nobody knew who Vanitas was~
 

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Ooh. I really wish my AP class let me do stuff like this. We don't do so much writing as we do over-analysis of speeches from 150 years ago.

Anyways, that was impressive, even more so if you managed to impact those who had no idea who Vanitas is.
 

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Ooh. I really wish my AP class let me do stuff like this. We don't do so much writing as we do over-analysis of speeches from 150 years ago.

Anyways, that was impressive, even more so if you managed to impact those who had no idea who Vanitas is.
We usually do analysis stuff as well ;u;
But things like this are usually warm ups so I obviously take advantage of these moments to write fanfictions
Thank you~!
 
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