No air

[AxelYoYo]

It's too tight
in this life
And no, I don't mean
that good kinda "tight"
I mean, it's tight,
suffocating
death-trap
air-sucking

My tears evaporate
within seconds,minutes
Not even enough
to know
that I
cried just a couple
seconds ago

No one seems to
know my needs
You care? Ha!
I know it's April Fool's
Day
So shut up

I'm pretty,
but no
on
even notices
That little person in my heart
does,though
He makes fun of me
pities
laughs

How goshdarn evil

Suffocating, tight, life.

 

[king_mickey rule]

This kinda blew me away, very strong poem. A little spelling mistake in it (I'm pretty, but no one even notices) but that's all I can say. Really good poem, good flow, good meaning and the use of words is also good. Keep it up!