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The Dream

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THE STORY

It is 2999. the new Age of 3000 is coming in ten months and people are scared. Not because they think the new age might have a few surprises. Not because they might think they are old. No. People are scared because of Marsha. Marsha is a strong powerful female who was once a warrior in a few new 'games' that they had created in 2500. Scary and mercy less games. Killing for money, glory and powers in the underground world as well.​

She joined these tournaments in 2980 at the age of 19 and was loved by all because of her power, her strength. Little did they know, behind all that power was her evil intentions. In 2990 Marsha had show her true colours by going on a rampage at a tournament.​

She won the tournament but on of her opponents managed to fake his death. She thought that the people who hosted the tournament was working together with her opponents to over throw her and destroy her reputation. Building her rage she killed every one there. Civilians, security, waiting opponents and the hosts. It was a blood fest and she was later jailed. Sentenced for life. But Marsha had other plans.​

Growing insane the first year she called on some underground 'friends' to bust her out. More people died and it was all over the news. Two years latter in 2993 she became the top gang lord, no, she became the highest gang lord in the world. She had billions of people under her control. People then feared her what she became. She was beautiful but dangerous, many called her a wild rose. Others called her a poisonous snake, which stopped when she slaughtered hundreds on another rampage with a few gang members in 2994. Finally in 2996 she took over the united states. Over throwing the Army, CIA, Marines and many other new war groups. The president surrendered and the age of fear started.​

Now in 2999 she had taken control of the entire world. No one could speak bad of her without getting their head chopped.
In January 20 she threatened to bomb the Russia and South Africa if cities didn’t leave for her top make another haven and graveyard for her soldiers’. When this happened no one dared deify her.​

Now you are a a person who has either been born into this or survived a few of these things. You Might even have had a connection with Marsha years ago. Your here to stop this madness with a group. You are here to either form a group and go against Marsha and overthrow her. Or be part of her group and stop those who deify Marsha. Then again you not be either. Its your decision to survived and live a life of fear in the new age, or live a life of safety and happiness.​

You Decide!
(Side Note: The world does not look like a bomb destroyed it!)​


Quick Brief
(For those who don’t have time to read the story)
Your basicly a person in this time and your job is to either stop Marsha from becoming a big threat or be a soilder part of Marsha’s rein of terror. Oh and Marsha is an almighty strong female gang lord.​


RULES!!!!

1. No God Modding!!

2. A limit of three characters will be the default amount of character you can control but if we need more characters then I’ll bump it up a number which will be chosen with a mini poll.

3. Swearing and Romance is allowed, but please no romance that will make you have....ick! I think you know what I mean.

4. Put detail in you temp if you can.

5. Your post MUST make sense

6. Please post at least once a week. If you don’t post for more than two weeks you could miss a lot.

7. Not two sentence post (Not three either smarty pants!!) It might get a bit boring.

8. Limit of 3 skill. No more than three.

9. Some one has to be Marsha. If you want to be her PM me your temp for her and I’ll see

10. No killing uless you asked.


TEMPLATES



MARSHA SOILDER TEMP (Marsha's army)

Code Name: (Somthing appropriate please)
Real Name:
Age: (18-60)
Gender: (Male/Female)
Natioality: (I think you know)
Weapons: (Any Weapon you want since your on the baddy side >:D)
Skills: (Like agility or hearing. No super hearing or super anything!)
Rank: (Rokee, Solider, General, Area Commander)
Personality: (What are they like?)
Appearance: (Pics Allowed but put a link if it's too big)
Bio: (How did they become part of Marsha's Group? Were they originally there? What was their past like?)​


REBELLION TEMP (Against Marsha temp)

Name:
Age: (13-60)
Gender: (Male/Female
Nationality: (I think you know)
Weapons: (Pistol are the only gun allowed! Knives and other melee weapons are allowed unless their found only in the army)
Skills: (No Super hearing or Super anything! just skills like agility and sight)
Personality: (What are threy like)
Appearance: (Pic are allowed unless their too big, then you can sned a link to it)
Bio: (What's their past? reason you thought of rebelling?)​


CAST

Marsha/sorafinalform


REBELLION CHARACTERS

Daniel Winters/varsha

Ren Angel/Shinra X 2

Ryuzaki/icmasticc


MARSHA SOILDERS

Jack Zwolf (Zwie)/varsha

Neko ???????/varsha

Zackery "Zac" Roland/Darkfyre


THE CAST TEMPS
(A few have already given their temps from a different Forum and confirmed they're still in the Rp)


MARSHA

Name: Marsha​

Age: 38​

Gender: Female​

Nationality: American​

Weapons:​








Skills:​

Night Walk: Cloaks herself in the shadows and and silences her steps causing her to be completely invisible.​

Phantoms Claw: Her weapon is wrapped in spiritual energy, reshaping her weapon. It does this by elongating it, shortening it twisting it, curving it, or completely changing the weapons shape all together.​

Time rift: The ability to control time in the area around her, by slowing it down, speeding it up, or even stopping it completely.​

Teleportation: She can use portals to teleport anything anywhere, or she can simply teleport her body and everything touching it to another location.​

Elemental Supremacy: She can manipulate the various elements of nature. Such as, fire, wind, earth, lightning, water, ice, light, darkness, etc.​

Rank: Supreme leader and Master of the whole world!​

Personality: Very seductive with a king side to her. She is easily pissed off, yet rarely shows her anger. She responds to things in the most awkward ways. She keeps a look of satisfaction on her face at all times and doesn't take the many weak people of this world seriously. To her they are all just pawns to be played with.​


Bio: Before her birth her parents were excited for he coming of a child into their perfect marriage. It had only been a few weeks , but they felt that this would be a good thing. The closer they got to the arrival obtuse baby the worst things became for the mom. She became ill and refused to eat. This made her weak. She managed to survive until the birth night. She died after the birth.​

The father fell into a season of depression. He couldn't eat or sleep. He hated that she was gone and needed an escape route. He blamed it all in the baby. Saying that if it hadn't been born his life would be perfect again. So he abandoned it, and gave it to am orphanage.​

She grew to be a beautiful young girl, but she longed for a family. When she was told that yer father was still alive she left to look for him. She went to his apartment and waited for him outside. When he came he looked at her and knew... This was her... the thing hat caused all his misfortune.​

She smiled thinking his blank expression was out of shock. When she went to embrace him he tossed her to the side like some piece of trash. He had given up on life. He was kicked out his house years ago and now.out his apartment. He had no reason to live. His only love was taken from him by this fiend that stood in front of him. He walked away and said, " Father or not... You disgust me. I wish you were never given the chance to see.the light of day. If I see you again... I'll kill you..."​

Those last three words echoed in her head for he next five years. At the age of 13 she found her father again. As he promised, he tried to kill her. She ran. It was like a nightmare come to life. She continued until he couldn't then she did what she had come there to do. Kill him. This sparked the start of it all.​

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THE REBELLION CAST

Renn Angel

Name: Renn 'Angel' Gurski. He onlygoes by Angel because he's distancing himself from his past self, A weak, broken, youth who was close to committing suicide.
Age: 19
Gender: Male duh!
Nationality: Canadian
Weapon: Machete strapped to his back underneath his coat, Desert eagle pistol held in the back pocket of his jeans, Knife in a sheath in his jacket.
Skills: almost unnoticable, good smarts, and very observant.

Personality: He's been through alot for someone his age, And that does take it's toll on him since he's very immpressionable.
He's Silent most times, he has an amazing sense of justice, and although he's unflinching that changes when he's hurting someone he knows.
He's absolutely brilliant for his age though as well, last time he was tested, his IQ stood at 165. and that does make him very prideful. But some things never change, he eats alot when he needs to, and that tends to give him more energy than others, because he pushes even harder than other people might think.

His anger is almost unstoppable, but he can calm it and even focus it to use to his advantage. He's persistant, and almost unrelenting when fighting. And he has only two hobbies, Playing guitar, and Video games.

Appearance: http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/d...RennandDA1.jpg
(Cred goes to Ophan for drawing it)
The person on the left is him when he was 17 and on the right is the way he is now... He wears black sneakers,

Bio: Renn was an Orphan, he had nowhere to go...He lived off the streets until he was about fifteen, then he had no choice but to enter the tornaments... Renn was a skilled warrior, using his surroundings to fight, as well as his own skills, some referred to him as cheap but he proved them wrong one year later when he fought against a tornament champion by the name of John the Berserker. Renn was able to win the fight, but that fight left a large scar on his leg. Renn then was thrust against Marsha. Renn was so dazzled by the way she fought that he almost forgot he was fighting her. Marsha defeated him but left him a good scar across his ribs and a small scar that curved from the front of his chin to just above the neck. Marsha had spared his life and after That Renn couldn't help but watch her matches after that... But after She killed innocent lives at her last tornament, Renn couldn't help but see how evil she was, Renn had to stop her, They met shortly after as she left and he drew his blade. Renn attacked her without relent but she pushed him down and slashed him across the face... the scar left his right eye blind. Renn fell into a deep depression that lasted until he was eighteen and during that time he almost threw himself from the top of a skyscraper. He knew he couldn't try to kill Marsha again because she was protected by millions of people who were scared of her. Renn then adopted the Alias 'Angel' and changed his appearance drastically, Using the remains of his winnings in the tornaments, he developed a new persona, and cast off his glasses and had perminent laser eye surgery to fix his left eye and got an eye transplant for his right, but his scar was still there. He then left for a year to train in the wilderness and now he's returned to correct his mistake. He swore to find a way to kill the very person he admired for the first time in his life.

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REBELLION TEMP

Daniel Winters

Name: Daniel Winters

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Nationality: American

Weapons: Pistol Strapped to his bare chest under his clothes (Not veiwable), Daggers straped to both of his legs, Lighter found in his pocket.

Skills: Agility, Strength, Speed.

Personality: Even though he doesn't look like the type, he's a really softie for kids. He's pretty emotional which he thinks is embarrassing around guys that are weaker than him and really embarrassing around girls because then they start to surround him which makes him really regret acting emotional. He's really passionate about nature but still keeps a strong profile. He's extremely polite around others like a gentleman but not to an extent that he starts to be a kiss ass. He can't hate someone for long unless they killed someone they loved.

Appearance: CLICK!

Bio: Daniel was once a millionare. He lived in a big mansion and had a good life. When Marsha took over he lost every thing. She killed his family, freinds and took all his money. Afterwards he joined the rebellion and vowed to kill Marsha.

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REBELLION TEMP


Ryuzaki (last name gone since he was disowned)


Name: Ryuzaki (Doesn't have a last name because he disowned it when he ran away from his parent's home to live life on the streets.)

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Nationality: American(Part Japanese)

Weapons: Twin Machete, Shuriken, Pack of Kunai, 2 Combat Knives(Strapped to his body)

Skills: Speed, Agility, Parkour

Personality: Ryuzaki is an aggressive man. He’s opinionated, reckless, and only thinks of moving forward at a very fast pace. He doesn’t hesitate to say what he feels and he rarely regrets anything in his life. Ryuzaki is a pretty simple person so this is the bulk of his personality.

Appearance: http://rds.yahoo.com/_ylt=A0PDoTC2zIFM9UQAHlCjzbkF/SIG=13ad78gep/EXP=1283661366/**http%3a//www.deviantart.com/download/147335815/The_Breaker_Han_Chun_Woo_by_RedZedEMo.jpg

Bio: Ryuzaki’s past is pretty common to be honest. He came from a normal, probably lower middle class, family as an only child. Though his family tried to raise their energetic son with etiquette and manners, a young Ryuzaki could only think of fighting. From his first experience of self-defense, Ryuzaki became fully obsessed with the world of no-rules combat. Devoting himself to a street training routine, Ryuzaki began to train himself in hopes of becoming stronger. It was then he was introduced to the tournaments.

Only 13 years old, Ryuzaki left the comforts of his home. Deathly serious about training and fighting, he figured that if he threw himself into the cruel, uncaring world unprepared, he could strengthen himself physically and mentally. He began to steal for food, practice Parkour to drastically improve his speed and movements, and get into many gang fights to give himself experience. It was after a typical gang fight that Ryuzaki met a self-proclaimed “promoter”. This promoter claimed that he could give the young boy money beyond his wildest dreams and all he would have to do in return is take a couple beatings. Ryuzaki agreed but only because he became intensely excited at the idea of stronger opponents.

At age 17, Ryuzaki had established a small-time name for himself. He was known as a brutal, no-holds barred brawler who would continue to fight even after it was clear who the winner was. People flocked to see a human being who was quickly becoming known as a person who had exchanged his humanity for incredible fighting talent and gore-ish brutality. Ryuzaki couldn’t of cared less because by this time he had heard of another. The teen had discovered information pertaining to another fighter who was said to be ungodly strong. The only info he had on the person was that their name was “Marsha”. After that, Ryuzaki began to fight even more fierce so he could quickly meet up with such a fighter, but it would never happen. Angered over the length of time it was taking to find Marsha, Ryuzaki quit the tournaments and began a search of his own.

At age 21, Ryuzaki stumbled upon the Rebellion. Their main goal was to take down Marsha and some other bull Ryuzaki didn’t care about. Seeing this as an opportunity, Ryuzaki joined the Rebellion in hopes of finding Marsha and getting his chance to prove his strength. Now age 22, Ryuzaki has been with the Rebellion for a year but is still no closer to finding Marsha.

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MARSHA SOILDERS

Jack Zwolf


MARSHA SOILDER​

Code Name: Zwie​

Name: Jack Zwolf​

Age: 39​

Gender: Male​

Nationality: Part German part English (More on the English side)​

Weapons: Shotgun strapped on his back, a combat knife hiddden in his boot, pistol straped around his waist.​

Skills: Stealth, Strength, Defence, Speed (I allowed 4 because he is second in command)​

Rank: Second in command​

Personality: He has a misterious side to him. He never talks alot around strangers but is completly chatty around all his soilders. He has great tactics but he can't think one up if he has been given the time to. He does have a gentle heart though even though he has slaughtered many. He always talks in a freindly tone aound Marsha and her freinds, even though many of her freinds envy the fact he is always around her.​

Appearance: His age doesn't show with him. He has a small 25 year old look but the charming english voice of some one much older. He has strong muscular body that most of the female soliders tend to stare at. He has deep blue eyes but has to wear small but notr ugly rectangle glasses. Brown hair that grows and stops at the very start of his shoulders. A very thin patch of hair covering his chin. He wears a white tank top under a long brown coat. Black half skiny half baggy pants and black boots. Black gloves and a gold watch.​

Bio: Jack was a healthy and happy child when he was born. His mother was English and his father was German. He took most of his mothers looks but his body figure was of his dads. They were a rich family because his father and mother were both judges and earned amazing amounts of cash, but with the jobs came danger.​

A man that was in his mothers court when he was ten was pleaded guilty for rape. He was a member of a gang called the black tails. Hen was sentenced for ten years and before he was taken to jail he yelled out "'ll have revenge. Our gang will make you entire family pay!". They thought it was a minor threat, until the accident.​

His Mother was raped the next year and then murdered in an alley way. His father went into deppression and Jack started to fail at school. Ten days later when the funeral had gone underway. The police arrested his father at home. Accusing him for the rape and murder. Jack was furius and couldn't control his anger. He grabbed a knife from the kitchen and stabbed the police to death. His father couldn't belive what Jack had done.​

The police was all over the crime scene. They were going to put Jack in jail. Jack thought he'd be saved by his father but, his father turned on him instead. They put him in the adult jail for so many years. He grew up and so did his anger for his father. Marsha was thrown in Jail within his years in jail. She was so beautiful but yet so fragile. No one dared to make freinds with her in jail, so Jack went up to her.​

They became freinds instantly. he couldn't control her insanity but he could help her through the time. Thats was kept them as freinds. When jails fights started, he'd be there fighting alongside her. When she had not been gived food, he gave her his. When the jail break happened she made sure he came with him.​

After the jail break he helped her concor citys with his tactics that he gave ot genrals. Thats when Marsha apointed him second in command.​

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MARSHA SOLDIER

Neko ??????


Code Name: Experiment

Real Name: Neko ????? Neko does not have a last name. It was lost in her files when her parents disowned her.

Age: 20

Gender: Female

Nationality: American

Weapons: None. Neko’s strength, agility and speed have been enhanced to the strength of fifty grown strongmen.

Skills: Agility, Strength and Speed

Rank: General.

Personality: Neko might appear emotionless at time, especially around others, but she’s the opposite. Neko is an emotional and kind natured girl who cares deeply about her comrades, even though they would turn their backs on her. Neko can be shy at times, especially around others that she feels a little connected to. On the battlefield, Neko can be a different story. Neko is always a devil when it comes to fighting the enemy, even though she feels a lot of sympathy for her enemy afterwards. There is a soldier in the arm that she is in love with, but she is too shy and keeps her emotions in since she knows that he has his eyes set on Marsha.

Appearance:

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Other: CLICK! (If it won't load for some reason)



She is 5’5 and has big brown cat ears that she hides by camouflaging it with her brown hair. She had a long brown Cat tail that comes out her tail bone (DUH!). Her top is actually a mini dress that stops three quarters down her thigh. She wears black boots that stop under her knee and have four dark blue belts on them. She wears brown, fingerless gloves and a had a gold, thin yet man like, watch. She has small tiny cat like fangs but they’re not to sharp since Neko makes sure their blunt.


Bio: Neko was born into a family that hated her as soon as they saw her green eyes. She was disowned by her family and given to the government as a test subject she was 2. Ever since she learnt this, she has despised her eyes, even though people say that is her most beautiful feature that everyone loves.

Neko went through many harsh tests. She was tested on new army products and other things that she has forgotten. Even though she was young, she still remembers the days where she sat in the corner of her cell. She was always hungry as she sat in a corner of her cell, as she heard the cries of the other subjects. No one was there to hold her and tell “don’t be scared”; she was all alone in the world. If she ever did get fed, she’d be eating the scraps that the scientists had or drugged sweets.

One day they decided to involve her in a major test, a test to make the perfect human soldier. The test on a male failed as he died two days later, so they decided to test on a female girl, and that was Neko when she was 10. What happened was that they’d put animal parts on her and enhance her skill to also have the abilities of that animal, he animal was a cat.

The tests were successful, but the government closed the case since they thought that she would not be able fight in the battle field. One of the scientists working on her was furious and decided to take matters into his own hands. His name was Dr Linkman. He kidnapped Neko and took her to a secret lab he had.

Linkman did test on her worse than the ones in the governmental facility. Not only that, he molested her when she was 12 and nearly raped her. Neko thought she would be able to be free when the government came and saved her, but that hope died when Linkman showed the results of his test to the government. When the government how successful the test was, they had to continue, so they brought her back to the governmental facility for more tests.

When Marsha took over, Neko felt like there was hope again, and this time it was real. Marsha’s army took over the facility and saved Neko only, the other test subjects wanted to die and no longer suffer, so they blew up the facility and took Neko to Marsha’s lab at headquarters. Yes they did do experiments on her, but the experience was much better than at the facility. She was 15 when she was saved.
The scientist would feed her all her meals and let her try food that weren’t scraps or drugged. She had a cell where the scientist were right around the corner to comfort her for a when when they saw her cry. The tests weren’t done so harshly and someone was there to hold her hand.

When their testing was done and they had no more use for her, they let her go at the age of 17. Neko didn’t know what to do anymore, but she knew that when people spoke of Marsha and said how evil she was, it was a lie. Neko joined the army and became a general at 19, achieving the title of the youngest general ever. She thinks and knows that lost of soldiers hate her, so she always keeps a straight face around them, even though many soldiers care for her very much.

Through her line of work, she met a soldier that she had fallen in love with, but Neko is not acting because she knows that he has his eyes set on Marsha like every other soldier. Neko thought that maybe if those two were destined to fall in love, then she would have to stand by and watch for she only cares about Marsha being happy since Marsha had made her happy.

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MARSHA SOLDIER

Zackery "Zak" Roland

Code Name: Mist

Real Name: Zackary "Zak" Roland

Age: 22

Gender: Male

Natioality: America

Weapons: None(He believes that all forged weapons are a sign of weakness.)

Skills: Agility, Strength and Sight

Not sure where else to put this, but his martial arts rely on speed mostly. He moves so fast that it appears a single blow becomes several.

Rank: Soldier

Personality: For the most part, Zak seems to be an odd one to be fighting for the sake of Marsha due to his laid-back look on how to live life. He's never one to judge others, except those that try to fight against Marsha, and tries to get along with everyone. This, however, does not alter his look on his training seeing as how he prefers to train over spending time with others during his free time. What little time he doesn't spend training he spends worshiping his Idol Marsha and dreaming of the day that he finally proves himself to her and wins her heart, not for her power, but for her sheer determination at accomplishing her goals.

Appearance: His uniform.

What he looks like.

Bio: Zak was born as much of the world, into a caring family that tried to force his/her ideals onto the child. Because of this fact Zak began sneaking out of his house at every chance he got with the aid of some of the family servants and have fun around the city. It was on one of these little excursions that he came across the games where you could watch people die in the most brutal of fashions and walk away with a large amount of money if you were lucky. The money did not interest him in the least so instead he would just watch the fights and always pray that his favorite fighter would show up. From the start his favorite was Marsha and was inspired to learn to fight just so that he could be like she was.

This continued on until he recieved a message from one of the servants that he parents noticed he was gone so he left to get home before he got into trouble. When he got home he managed to play off that he had fallen asleep on the toilet and recieved no punishment before going to bed. The next morning while eating his breakfast he noticed on the news that Marsha had killed countless people at the fighting area and was to undergo a trial. While his parents hated the young woman for what she did, Zak secretly praised her for finally getting tired of fighting only weaklings and letting it be known to the world. Since that day he started to train to fight with his hands and feet as his weapons until he learned of a prison escape involving Marsha.

Now in his teens Zak decided to shed himself of his family to join Marsha and help with her future plans. He did so by confronting his parents while the staff was off duty for the day to test out his own fighting skills. The killing was easy compared to the question of who to pin the blame on and it was then that he felt he was ready to leave. He quickly left the mangled remains with evidence leading to the man that helped him get out all those years ago and packed his bag with only money, food and clothing. From that point on he dedicated his life to finding Marsha and winning her heart for himself.

He finally found her after she had gained a large amount of power and a type of army of her own. Acting only on instinct he quickly joined them and look at any tests only as an obstacle to keep him away from his love. After he had joined the group he started to take any mission that he could to rise through the ranks while learning that there is one man he feels is his rival. That man was the second-in-command and it became his goal to overpower the man to prove himself to Marsha. With that goal in mind he doubled his efforts and quickly began rising through the ranks until the year of 2999. Now he fights only for Marsha, as if it was anything different, and has heard rumors that he is to be promoted to being a General soon. This did not matter to him as long as he still got to kill those that got in his way.
 
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REBELLION TEMP

Name: Pablo Johnston But he always say his name is Rick because he doesn’t like his child like name.

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Nationality: American

Weapons: Machete, pistol, four knifes (One strapped on each thigh and one strapped to his chest and hip)

Skills: Combat, Stealth, Speed

Personality: He has a Major softie side for those who he makes a major bond with. But his cold side is the first thing to come forward. The war had changed him and the senseless killing changed him. Other than that he’s a ladies man because of his deep serious personality and look. Even though girls run after him, he doesn't like breaking their hearts.

Appearance: His eye colour is green but around his eyes there is a rim of grey reaching towards his pupil. Fair skin. Neat, little bit small nose. Long Silver hair covering half of his back with two short strands covering the space between his eyes. Strong muscular build. Black t-shirt under a rubber like torso armour. Metal Shoulder pads . Black Pants with Metal Shin Pads and Black Boots. Gauntlets on his arms and black fingerless gloves.

Bio: Pablo always hated the tournaments until he saw Marsha. The way she fought changed him and made him see a whole new side to it. But then that also changed when Marsha had gone haywire and then taken over the world. His parents and little sister died in an attack. He survived. The rage from that battle triggered the rage inside him. Causing him to be a fighting machine. He joined the SSAM afterwards.

MARSHA SOILDER

Code Name: Zwie

Name: Jack Zwolf

Age: 39

Gender: Male

Nationality: Part German part English (More on the English side)

Weapons: Shotgun strapped on his back, a combat knife hiddden in his boot, pistol straped around his waist.

Skills: Stealth, Strength, Defence, Speed (I allowed 4 because he is second in command)

Rank: Second in command

Personality: He has a misterious side to him. He never talks alot around strangers but is completly chatty around all his soilders. He has great tactics but he can't think one up if he has been given the time to. He does have a gentle heart though even though he has slaughtered many. He always talks in a freindly tone aound Marsha and her freinds, even though many of her freinds envy the fact he is always around her.

Appearance: His age doesn't show with him. He has a small 25 year old look but the charming english voice of some one much older. He has strong muscular body that most of the female soliders tend to stare at. He has deep blue eyes but has to wear small but notr ugly rectangle glasses. Brown hair that grows and stops at the very start of his shoulders. A very thin patch of hair covering his chin. He wears a white tank top under a long brown coat. Black half skiny half baggy pants and black boots. Black gloves and a gold watch.

Bio: Jack was a healthy and happy child when he was born. His mother was English and his father was German. He took most of his mothers looks but his body figure was of his dads. They were a rich family because his father and mother were both judges and earned amazing amounts of cash, but with the jobs came danger.

A man that was in his mothers court when he was ten was pleaded guilty for rape. He was a member of a gang called the black tails. Hen was sentenced for ten years and before he was taken to jail he yelled out "'ll have revenge. Our gang will make you entire family pay!". They thought it was a minor threat, until the accident.

His Mother was raped the next year and then murdered in an alley way. His father went into deppression and Jack started to fail at school. Ten days later when the funeral had gone underway. The police arrested his father at home. Accusing him for the rape and murder. Jack was furius and couldn't control his anger. He grabbed a knife from the kitchen and stabbed the police to death. His father couldn't belive what Jack had done.

The police was all over the crime scene. They were going to put Jack in jail. Jack thought he'd be saved by his father but, his father turned on him instead. They put him in the adult jail for so many years. He grew up and so did his anger for his father. Marsha was thrown in Jail within his years in jail. She was so beautiful but yet so fragile. No one dared to make freinds with her in jail, so Jack went up to her.

They became freinds instantly. he couldn't control her insanity but he could help her through the time. Thats was kept them as freinds. When jails fights started, he'd be there fighting alongside her. When she had not been gived food, he gave her his. When the jail break happened she made sure he came with him.

After the jail break he helped her concor citys with his tactics that he gave ot genrals. Thats when Marsha apointed him second in command.


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I'd join, but it really seems uneven. While the Rebellion has nothing in the way of actual skills (and the temp makes it sound as if no one can get any), Marsha has multiple skills that can be considered "super" and probably godmode bait. It makes sense since she's suppose to be the baddest baddy from badassville, but when everyone else (including her army) only get something that almost sound more like personality traits...well, doesn't that really seem fair. (Fair is a terrible phrase for it, but you get the point) It also confuses me since there were suppose to be death match like tournaments, and it's weird that she'd have those powers when no one else has. Sorry, I know that this sounds more like a bad rant then anything, and it probably seems disrespectful, but I thought it was something I should bring up. :x Hell, chances are I'm wrong about the whole thing and this just makes me look like an idiot.

Anywho, I still plan to join. I'll put a temp up soon.
 

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Know how I think of it... if she can do it that means that someone else could come up with reality defying skills as well but the fact that she is so experienced as she is ... idk I could simplify the skills... the first one is stealth, second is range, third fourth and fifth could all go under mastery if magic I guess... and if want more detail just for ideas on your own temps... third is time manipulation. Fourth is materialization and fifth is seriously jus magic. But hey her mastery over these skills kinda puts her in a league if her own
 

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Her skills aren't really the problem, it was just I thought that no one else really had access to skills like hers.

Got lazy on my temp. <-<
 

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Almost forgot to out it up. I'll get it up know. Oh and sff, you can make another character if you want.

REBELLION TEMP

Name: Daniel Winters

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Nationality: American

Weapons: Pistol Strapped to his bare chest under his clothes (Not veiwable), Daggers straped to both of his legs, Lighter found in his pocket.

Skills: Agility, Strength, Speed.

Personality: Even though he doesn't look like the type, he's a really softie for kids. He's pretty emotional which he thinks is embarrassing around guys that are weaker than him and really embarrassing around girls because then they start to surround him which makes him really regret acting emotional. He's really passionate about nature but still keeps a strong profile. He's extremely polite around others like a gentleman but not to an extent that he starts to be a kiss ass. He can't hate someone for long unless they killed someone they loved.

Appearance: CLICK!

Bio: Daniel was once a millionare. He lived in a big mansion and had a good life. When Marsha took over he lost every thing. She killed his family, freinds and took all his money. Afterwards he joined the rebellion and vowed to kill Marsha.
 
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Well this is intriguing...

REBELLION TEMPLATE

Name: Renn 'Angel' Gurski. He onlygoes by Angel because he's distancing himself from his past self, A weak, broken, youth who was close to committing suicide.
Age: 19
Gender: Male duh!
Nationality: Canadian
Weapon: Machete strapped to his back underneath his coat, Desert eagle pistol held in the back pocket of his jeans, Knife in a sheath in his jacket.
Skills: almost unnoticable, good smarts, and very observant.

Personality: He's been through alot for someone his age, And that does take it's toll on him since he's very immpressionable.
He's Silent most times, he has an amazing sense of justice, and although he's unflinching that changes when he's hurting someone he knows.
He's absolutely brilliant for his age though as well, last time he was tested, his IQ stood at 165. and that does make him very prideful. But some things never change, he eats alot when he needs to, and that tends to give him more energy than others, because he pushes even harder than other people might think.

His anger is almost unstoppable, but he can calm it and even focus it to use to his advantage. He's persistant, and almost unrelenting when fighting. And he has only two hobbies, Playing guitar, and Video games.

Appearance: http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd155/rennygurski/RennandDA1.jpg
(Cred goes to Ophan for drawing it)
The person on the left is him when he was 17 and on the right is the way he is now... He wears black sneakers,

Bio: Renn was an Orphan, he had nowhere to go...He lived off the streets until he was about fifteen, then he had no choice but to enter the tornaments... Renn was a skilled warrior, using his surroundings to fight, as well as his own skills, some referred to him as cheap but he proved them wrong one year later when he fought against a tornament champion by the name of John the Berserker. Renn was able to win the fight, but that fight left a large scar on his leg. Renn then was thrust against Marsha. Renn was so dazzled by the way she fought that he almost forgot he was fighting her. Marsha defeated him but left him a good scar across his ribs and a small scar that curved from the front of his chin to just above the neck. Marsha had spared his life and after That Renn couldn't help but watch her matches after that... But after She killed innocent lives at her last tornament, Renn couldn't help but see how evil she was, Renn had to stop her, They met shortly after as she left and he drew his blade. Renn attacked her without relent but she pushed him down and slashed him across the face... the scar left his right eye blind. Renn fell into a deep depression that lasted until he was eighteen and during that time he almost threw himself from the top of a skyscraper. He knew he couldn't try to kill Marsha again because she was protected by millions of people who were scared of her. Renn then adopted the Alias 'Angel' and changed his appearance drastically, Using the remains of his winnings in the tornaments, he developed a new persona, and cast off his glasses and had perminent laser eye surgery to fix his left eye and got an eye transplant for his right, but his scar was still there. He then left for a year to train in the wilderness and now he's returned to correct his mistake. He swore to find a way to kill the very person he admired for the first time in his life.
 
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Awesome temp, but your gonna have to get rid of one of those skill and be a little more pacific please. Yes I knew people would be interested in the rp when I put it up! but yeah, when you get that stuff finished then your in Shinra.
 

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I edited it to your liking Varsha and good to see you to Sora... nice to see that one of my first RP buddies is still in the game :D
 
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