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Avin smiled looking at Konoha. He then noticed a fight going on outside of the village but it seemed under control but he didn’t know who was even fighting. He did the first thing he could think of which was rushing their as fast as he could. Jumping from building to building to trying to be unseen since people would be worrying if an ANBU was rushing somewhere. He stopped checking again with his Byakugan if he could see who the people fighting were.

The fight seemed unfair to Avin two against one but sometime people have to do that. He noticed one of the ninjas quickly since it was Arashi one of Avin’s friends. Then he saw two Dawn Village ninja from the look of it they were probably Chuunin from their abilities. By the time Avin would get there it would be over so he quickly just waited at the gates for Arashi to finish. Avin laughed alittle after seeing Arashi take down the two ninjas easy. “That is sad if the Dawn Village is going to bring two people to attack a Jounin bring decent ninja at least.”

Avin said to himself. He started to walk then saw both ninjas drop dead which Avin didn’t mind since he was use to seeing people getting killed. Avin continued to walk over checking their bodies for anything he then looked at Arashi who had entered the city. “Hey Arashi! You had to kill the guys I don’t mind but it would have been smarter to get some information out of them.” Avin said then following Arashi. Avin looked at the two dead shinobi one more time and how it would be when a real war happened.

People started to look at Avin since he was an ANBU he looked back at them but didn’t say a word. Avin looked at the busy village then remembered when he was like that. The Genin all running around for trying to become Chuunin or learn something new to become the strongest. All Avin could do really was give a small laugh since he was like that too and becoming a Chuunin wasn’t as easy as you thought even though Avin became one at a young age. He then looked at Arashi asking,” how has it been?” He then waited for a answer.
 
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Hotaru jumped from one branch to another. Many thoughts and memories raced through his mind. Of his past with his team. At the moment, Hotaru was racing to Konoha, with words from the Raikage. 'Nothing.' he thought. Hotaru missed the constant babbling of his father when he was alive. After the death of his father, Hotaru had matured a lot. "I'll kill the both of you." He whispered, speaking of his brothers. He sighed, and then laughed. "Look at me, sounding just like Sasuke." He said, jumping to the next branch.

Hotaru looked forward, to see a fight. He was almost to the village, traveling for about three days. "Arashi." He said, noticing by the attack. He stopped in the tree just above Arashi. "Now to return back to the village." Hotaru looked a bit ahaid of him. "Konoha...hadn't been there in a while." He whispered. Hotaru jumped to the next tree, keeping his distance from Arashi. Hotaru entered the gates of Konoha just moments after Arashi. ” How has it been?” Hotaru stood on the rooftop of a building. Someone was speaking to Arashi. He then jumped down next to Arashi, facing the opposite way. "Been a while. See you still know the Senhappa. Last time I saw that by you is when I used mine on you." He said in a whisper. "But that's all behind us now." He said with a smile.
 
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Ooc: Hidden Dawn Village all the way!!!

The dawn approached.

Lifting his head from the pillow, the dawn nin woke up with with yawn. Rubbing his eyes and relieving them of the crust, he opened both eyes which were sterling silver. The expression on his face was pretty drowsy as he'd had a hard time getting to sleep. Eyes barely open, sliding off to the side he looked over at the clock and noted that it was really early. Staring the day now wouldn't be that much of a hassle for him so he turned his head off to the table near the kitchen and went to get some breakfast. With yet another yawn, he moved to the distinct part of the room and sat down for some breakfast. A piece of toast, eggs, sausage and two short stacks. This was something uplifting in aroma as is chef material came from the unorthodox classes at the academy.

"Time to start the day..." The dawn nin yawned.

Finishing off the breakfast he had before him, he smiled and moved the the bathroom where he had a quick shower. Stepping out he got dressed, pulling out black pants, silver undershirt, beneath that a fishnet shirt, over it all a black jacket with short cut sleeves, and a popped up collar styled with the symbols of two clans, Raito and Kunokai emblems overlapping on his back. On the top of his head, were silver lends shades and the hidden dawn headband over his head. Reaching down in the corner he placed his black katana to his side as it did belong to his father. Setting out the door, he locked it behind him and lifted his vision loosely over to the Dawn Kage's mansion.

"Such a marvel of beauty and also peaceful." he said with a sigh.

With a swift leap, he hopped up on the buildings of the village scaling the rooftops, the thought of his father in his head seemed to plague him. To witness it...and only be a genin, it was enough to really rattle a person. The young one tried to shake off the edge to the side and smile as he sat on the roof of a local building only slightly taller and near the front gates. Laughing it off, he cleared his mind and sat with his legs folding smiling and staring down.
 

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Toruma wasn't sure how much time had passed, he may have drifted off to sleep, but wasn't sure. The large clock tower was facing the other side from where Toruma was located, but this was not a problem. Seeing directly through the stone, Toruma easily found out what time it was, and saw that only about 15 minutes had passed, since his serene moments had began. He felt much better now, but was becoming a bit annoyed that Kisuke was so late. It really was no surprise to him though, tardiness was more than a normal thing for the young ninja. "He really needs t get here before I......", he closed his mouth, as a young man landed on the roof of a nearby building. Of course it was none other than his "grandson"

"I sure hope this isn't too much on him, but he needs to informed, before it's too late to go back."

With a high jump, Toruma landed on a roof several yards away from Kisuke, and then simply flew across the small gap to where Kisuke was sitting. He looked peaceful at the time, and Toruma was willing to bet that the news he had would more than make Kisuke freak out, but then with the mind that his "grandson" had, he might be able to deal with it much easier than most would take it. He sat next to the boy and sighed.................."Kisuke there is something I need to tell you. I am not who you think I am." He paused as he stared ahead.

It was harder than he thought to speak about the matter. "I know that you haven't seen much of Daaku, and that your father was very close to him and all, obviously, yet there is something you don't know." He touched Kisuke's shoulder. "I am Daaku and this body you see is nothing more than the curse of a jutsu that keeps my soul alive as time passes on. There is much about the jutsu that I'd rather not explain, but I can tell you that the battle that killed Rayex, is most likely my fault." Tears ran down Toruma's face, and he could not even look at Kisuke...............
 

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Name:Hakumei Myou Tomoshibi

Age:45

Personality: Hakumei is basically what most people would classify as ‘the strong silent type’. He’s not the one to just throw out random and useless words and comments, he will only join real conversations, or speak when confronting or being confronted by an enemy, or if he is bringing up a matter of importance, but for the most part, most of it stays inside. He can however be quite cold to those that act out of pure stupidity, or to those that he dislikes, even to those that he cares about. It’s just in his nature to do so. At times, he could be rather cocky, especially to other ninja. This was one of the few ways that he ever had fun in his life.

It is very rare to see Hakumei in great anger, or show strong emotions towards something for that matter. The only things that are able to draw out his true feelings, be it anger, sorrow, agitation, aggravation, whatever it may be, are his enemies, and those he cares for. There are very few things that finds worth living for, though. The only things he really believes in this cold, sinful world is justice, loyalty, trust, peace, friends, and family. Other than that, he doesn’t care for much else. He used to be a carefree, fun loving guy, but his heart has hardened over the years, and it’s only getting harder as time moves on.

When in battle, Hakumei keeps himself calm and collected, so as not to make any stupid mistakes, no matter how small they may be. If ever thrown into a berserk rage during battle, he is merciless in his actions, and may even possibly be on the verge of borderline psychotic, though one has to drive his emotions over the edge for this to happen.

Village: Originally from the Hidden Stone Village

Ninja Rank: S-Class

Appearance:


Weapons:


He carries twin katanas, and average sized shurikens, nothing really out of the ordinary. He carries the occasional smoke bomb every now and then.

Side: Unknown

Clan/Bloodline: The Uchiha Clan: Being connected to the Uchiha bloodline, Hakumei has inherited the Sharingan eyes, the eyes which all of the Uchiha are born with.

Extra: Missing-Nin

Bio: He was found as a baby, left and abandoned outside the Village Hidden in the Stone. The babe was found by Tsuchikage Tomoshibi, helpless and sobbing, while he was out taking a stroll through the village. Seeing no tracks that led to, or away from this crying child, the Tsuchikage knew he should take it into the village. Though the man wasn’t exactly known for a warm heart, he wasn’t cruel enough to leave a baby out to die in the dry heat of the land.

Finding no one that would take the child, Tsuchikage Tomoshibi took it upon himself to raise the boy like his own, and teach him the ways of the Ninja as he grew of age. Until then though, he cared for him, fed him, clothed him, put a roof over his head, he did all that he could for the babe. He named the boy Hakumei Myou Tomoshibi, giving him his last name as well. For the rest of the infants childhood, he would be under the safe protection of the Tsuchikage of the Village Hidden in the Stone.

As the years passed by and Hakumei grew old enough to finally begin training as a ninja, he was placed in the academy to begin his journey as a student in training. Tshuchikage Tomoshibi noticed something very peculiar about Hakumei in only the first month of his time at the academy. The boy seemed to learn things much quicker than all the other students, and learned the required Genjutsu far faster than anyone in his class. Anything that was taught to him, seemed to latch onto his brain in such a way that he would never forget it, no matter how long it had been since he had heard it. Tomoshibi had seen intelligent, advanced students before, but nothing quite like this.

One day after a day at the academy, and Hakumei was not but several yards away from his house, with his ‘father’ waiting outside, he caught a glimpse of something up on top of the roof of his home. Almost as if out of nowhere, three ninja came from above, their weapons drawn, and seemed to have the full intent of killing Tsuchikage Tomoshibi. Hakumei had just enough time to pull out a shuriken to strike the one in the middle, which alerted Tomoshibi of the danger above him. The one that Hakumei had hit, which seemed to be their leader, caught sight of him. The thought of being hit by an academy angered the assassin, enough so for him to use Ninjutsu on the brat.

The man got into a stance which made him seem as though he was going to sprint. Suddenly, the man seemed to disappear. This caused Hakumei to panic a little. Just as Tomoshibi was finishing the other two killers, he looked over to see if Hakumei was alright. He saw that the boy seemed to be frightened by something, and as he glanced the area, he could tell why. The assassin seemed to have executed a Body Flicker Technique. No Pre-Genin ninja could possibly avoid a jutsu such as that. Feeling as though Hakumei was going to die, the old man struggled to kill of the two ninja that were trying their best to end his life. However, he failed to notice the red glimmer in the young boy’s eyes…

The lead assassin reappeared from the Body Flicker Technique, quickly unsheathing his blades as he did so, intending to end the Hakumei’s life. Any normal academy student would have reacted to slowly, and have been killed. Hakumei however, dodged the swipe just as it came for him. Not expecting an young brat to maneuver out of such a simple attack, his guard was left open. Hakumei got out of his panicked place of mind, and hit the man several times with a roundhouse kick. Straight afterwards, as if he had done it a hundred times before, he used the Body Flicker Technique, and sped around to the back of the man, and managed to stab the man in the spine with several shuriken, causing him to go into a paralysis like state.

Hakumei took both blades from the man, and stabbed him through the chest on either side. This ended his life there and then. He decided to keep the blades, in order to protect himself from anything like this that happened in the future. Tomoshibi had finally taken down the assassinators, and ran over to his ‘son’. He was worried sick about him, though not wanting to get to emotional, he just kept asking him things such as “Are you alright?” and things like that. The thing he was most curious about though, was how Hakumei had managed to avoid the man’s blades. He should have died, if anything, not dodged it. As he tried figuring out this mystery, he was drawn to the boys eyes, which looked different than they ever had.

They were a blood red, with the same black insignia in both eyes. This was how he did. This boy was no ordinary boy, he had something that very few people had in this world; the Sharingan eyes, an exclusive genetic trait known only to the Uchiha clan. Now the pieces were finally starting to come together.

Tomoshibi spilled out the secret of Hakumei’s past. The boy finally knew that he had been abandoned as a baby, and that the old man had found him on the ground, helpless as any babe would be. He told him how he was able to get out of the killer’s way so quickly, at least at the low level that he was, he told him of the clan that he was really connected too, the clan that had apparently left him to die. This was all such a shock to Hakumei, it was a lot to take in at one moment. Not wanting to have the name of a family who had given him up, a family who didn’t love him, he kept the name of his trainer, his friend, the father in his life… Tomoshibi.

The years at the academy went by quickly, and Hakumei graduated with the highest marks in the class. After that, he started training as hard as he could, all day, sometimes all night, preparing for only one thing: The Chunnin Exam. After long months of harsh, intense training with Tomoshibi, he was finally ready for the exam. Though it was a challenge, seeing as how there were dozens of ninja entering, many skilled with their own unique style, Hakumei managed to pass exceptionally well, and finally took on the title of Chunnin at the age of twelve.

Many more years went by, and through that time, he had copied many different kinds of Jutsu, even ones as high as A-Rank. By the age of twenty, he had earned the title of Jonin. Hakumei was so skilled, that Tomoshibi referred him to the ANBU. However, as much of an honor as that was to Hakumei, he found no interest in it. It just wasn’t his kind of thing. Instead, he led the B and A-Ranked missions at his village.

Also during this time, Tomoshibi taught Hakumei the Jutsu's Chirdori and Rasengan. Though it took several months to perfect them, Hakume managed to execute them quite well. Also during this Jutsu practice, Tomoshibi began a long, harsh, brutal training course that would push Hakumei passed his limits. It would all be for the best in the end though. Once the young man knew how to survive, even when pressed way passed his limits, that would be the key in helping him to achieve the S-Class... and one step closer to becoming a well renowned ninja.

After months of severe training with Sensei Tsuchikage, the old man felt he was ready to be deemed the honor of S-Class. It was very rare for a ninja to reach that rank as such a young age, but Tomoshibi felt that the boy had unimaginable potential, and it only felt right to grant him this incredible honor. Right after doing so, Hakumei joined the first S-Rank mission he could get his hands on.

When he got back home from his mission, he found Tomoshibi beheaded in his chair. This caused Hakumei to pour out his heart in tears, then he turned it hard as stone, turning a cold shoulder to the world. It was then that he struck out on his own, trying to find the one who murdered such a great man. Over the years, he accomplished many great things, assassinated many corrupted ninja, claimed victory in all of the missions that he took on. What really spread his name though, was the rumors of his connection to the Uchiha clan, and most importantly, his Sharingan eyes.

Not much is known about him, most of the time he keeps to himself. There are those very rare people that he opens up to, but besides them, he doesn't say a whole lot. Twenty five years later, he is still wandering from Nation to Nation, trying to find the murderous heathen who stole his Sensei's life away. He has collected a vast amount of information on the man. The man who killed Tsuchikage Tomoshibi, is none other than a descendant of the horrific Ninja, Orochimaru. Now he searches the land for information... and a man with the resemblance to a snake...

(Sloppy bio, I know, but I just wanted to get the bloody thing OVER with XD)

Jutsu:

Tai Jutsu

D Rank:

Dynamic Entry: Throws something towards his enemy to distract them (shurikens, sometimes even one of his katanas), then quickly executes a flying jump kick and nails them in the head (most of the time).

Leaf Gale: Performs a spinning kick and sweeps the enemy off their feet

Piercing Fang: He spins at ferocious speeds and delivers many powerful beast-like attacks on the target.

C Rank:

Leaf Great Whirlwind: This jutsu involves a powerful leap forward followed by a spinning kick with both legs in succession, the second kick being aimed lower in case the intended target ducks the first.

Shadow of the Dancing Leaf: While the target is airborne, the user jumps in such a way as to appear below the target while following a similar trajectory through the air. Since the victim is airborne, he is in a vulnerable position to a more damaging attack.

B Rank:

Front Lotus: The first chakra gate must be opened in order to perform this technique. When that is done, he kicks the enemy into the air, and performs Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, he wraps the opponent into a bear hug, and pile drives them into the ground, often killing the opponent if they are not strong enough.

A Rank:

None

S Rank:

Blades of Blood: Four of the Eight chakra gates must be opened in order to begin this jutsu. Once this is done, Hakumei begins his assault on the enemy. In a matter of seconds, he makes one hundred swipes with his katana’s upon the enemy, though he does not slice through them, he merely gives them deep cuts, causing them to bleed to the extreme. If they victim is not treated quickly enough, they will die of blood loss.

Other Taijutsu:

Eight Trigrams Empty Palm: The palm is thrusted at the opponent, and expels a large burst of chakra. This violently pushes the enemy away.

Leaf Rising Wind: Using speed and agility, Hakumei executes a swift, upwards kick at the opponent or the weapon they are carrying.

Intercepting Technique: He is able to intercept and counter an oncoming taijutsu technique by raising the knee, and driving the elbow downwards at the same time. This catches the attacking limb between his two limbs, and drives the elbow down with great force, effectively shattering the bone.

Peregine Falcon Drop: Hakumei grabs a falling opponent by their ankles, wraps his legs around their wais, and drives them head first into the ground.


Ninjutsu

E Rank:

Body Replacement Technique: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.

Cloak of Invisibility: This jutsu allows a ninja to take a cloak or a piece of cloth and blend into an object, making them invisible.

Rope Escape Technique: This jutsu allows Hakumei to free himself if he has been tied up.

Transformation Technique: This jutsu allows him to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu.

D Rank:

Hiding Mist Technique: This jutsu envelops the surrounding area in a dense mist, reducing visibility within the affected area. The density can be controlled by the user, allowing them to create a mist so thick that even they can't see through it.

Earth Release: Inner Decapitation Technique: Hakumei emerges from the ground below the target area, and pulls down the opponent so that only their head is above ground. (Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique is needed to accomplish this)

C Rank:

Earth Release: Split Earth Turn Around Palm: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them.

Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique: Using this jutsu, Hakumei can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent.

Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique: Utilizing a large amount of chakra, a large ball of flame is produced when the user exhales in a style similar to fire breathing. The user places one hand close to the mouth, igniting the air by mixing the breath with the chakra in the hand.

Manipulating Attack Blades: This jutsu allows the user to control and manipulate blades (metal weapons) with chakra

Wind Release: Great Breakthrough: This jutsu sends out a powerful explosion of wind from the user's location, easily leveling anything in its path. A variation of this technique involves a smaller blast of wind that gets ignited with flame, making it stronger and more damaging to the target.

B Rank:

Earth Release: Earth Mausoleum Dumpling: He is able to overturn the earth into a large dumpling-shaped chunk of earth the size of a mausoleum. Using immense strength, he can lift up the ball and hurl it at his opponent, flattening everything in its path.

Earth Release: Earth Style Wall: Hakumei spits out a stream of mud that quickly grows and solidifies into a strong, protective wall.

Shadow Clone Technique: Hakumei can make dozens of solid clones, though the more he creates, the more chakra he needs to distribute to all of the clones. His chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing jutsu on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. Unlike other clones, they can't be detected by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance, making them indistinguishable from the actual person.

Water Release: Water Dragon Blast Technique: Using this jutsu, the Hakumei creates a huge current of water in the form of a serpentine dragon and directs it towards a target. The water used to create the dragon must be present to perform the technique. This technique usually requires 44 hand signs, but because of Hakumei’s intense training, he has brought it down to a point where he only needs four hand signs to accomplish this, which is only three hand signs more than the Third Hokage’s one.

Water Release: Water Encampment Wall: This jutsu creates a water barrier to protect the user from any offensive attacks. There must be water in the area in order for this to work

A-Rank:

Chidori: This jutsu channels a large amount of chakra into Hakumei’s arm. The amount of chakra is so great that it becomes visible to the naked eye. The technique actually alters the nature of the user's chakra, effectively converting it into electricity. As a side effect of the conversion process, the large amount of chakra, and the speed at which the user moves, this technique makes a loud noise similar to many birds chirping, hence the name (if the user is not in motion, it merely makes an electric crackling sound). Once the technique is completed, the user charges forward and stabs their enemy with it. The amount of thrust combined with the large concentration of chakra allows the user to stab through almost anything; as such it is usually fatal to the enemy. This technique is classified as an assassination technique because of the speed at which it is performed, despite the loud noise it produces.

This jutsu has a major drawback, however. The speed at which the attack must be done, combined with the fact that the user must run in a straight line, causes a tunnel vision-like effect for the user. This allows the enemy to easily counter the attack, making it a potentially lethal move for the user. Though this drawback would seem to make learning the technique fairly pointless, Hakumei is able to avoid the drawback because of his Sharingan eyes, which take in every detail regardless of how fast the user is moving. As an additional drawback, the large amount of chakra required limits its use to a few times a day. Hakumei can execute the jutsu about six times a day. Should the user attempt to go beyond their limit, all of their chakra will be drained and their very life force could go along with it, killing them. An additional problem, though not necessarily a debilitating one, is the fact that the large amount of chakra can also injure the user's hand if they put too much force into the attack.

Clone Great Explosion: This jutsu works in combination with the Shadow Clone Technique to create a shadow clone that will explode on command. The blast created is considerable, and could potentially kill an attacker engaged in hand-to-hand combat.

Rasengan: The Rasengan requires no hand seals to perform, instead relying entirely on the chakra control of the user. Once Hakumeicreates a stable Rasengan, however, it becomes self-sustaining, so the user does not need to provide any more chakra after forming it. The force of the spinning chakra grinds into whatever it touches, causing major damage. The force of the attack also causes significant internal injury. Hakumei can also release the spinning chakra, creating a violent explosive force at the point of contact. The one drawback of the Rasengan, if it can be considered as such, is that it requires great chakra control. Of course, this is no problem for Hakumei, for he has been gone through extreme training for that such thing. It can be a problem if some force is disrupting the user's ability to mold chakra. Unlike the Chidori, there is no definite limit to the amount of times this technique can be used in a day. Because it uses far less chakra in comparison, it doesn't carry the same over-use risk as the Chidori, either.

Secret Healing Wound Destruction: Hakumei can concentrate his chakra to a prepared area on his body and begin regenerating the moment the targeted area becomes damaged. Unlike normal healing, this can actually restore dead cells.

Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique: This jutsu is used to fire a massive spiraling blast of water at an opponent.

Swords of the Elements: With the right amount of chakra, Hakumei is able to infuse either the elements of Fire, Lightning, Water, Earth, Wind, Darkness, or Light into his blades. There must be some trace of the actual element in order for it to work, though.

S-Rank:

Lightning Blade: This jutsu is an enhanced form of the Chidori, and has the same, but more powerful effect. This jutsu requires a larger amount of chakra and better chakra control. This is exemplified in their respective appearances. Whereas the Chidori creates a large mass of chakra in one hand that appears near-white, the Lightning Blade is considerably more concentrated and appears in the normal blue color of chakra. He can only use this three times in any given day. He can perform this with both hands simultaneously, but is only able to do so twice a day.

Other Ninjutsu:

Armor of Sand: Hakumei can cover himself in a compacted layer of sand, providing an additional defense should his Shield of Sand fail. Though quite effective, maintaining the armor requires a large amount of chakra and stamina.

Grat Ball Rasengan: This is simply a larger and more powerful version of the Rasengan, but also more unstable. Hakumei needs a clone to form and control the energy.

Technique Neutralize: This jutsu cancels or impedes the occurring of the opponent's technique. It uses the same amount of chakra as the jutsu it intends to cancel.

Personal/Forbidden Jutsu

Rasengan Ultima:: This version of Rasengan was created by Hakumei himself, and has been working on this Jutsu for many, many years. This jutsu is one of the most powerful, and most difficult to do correctly. At least five clones are needed to execute this safely without killing himself. It is also necessary to have that many in order to draw out the Rasengan’s true power (for this JUTSU, not the Rasengan itself, so for those who are obssessed about detail, don't get your shorts in a knot). This form of Rasengan consumes so much of his chakra, that if he were to try to do this with a limited amount of clones, he would besically be committing suicide. Chakra from people of the same level as Hakumei is needed in order to complete the jutsu, thus the clones are a must. Even though his chakra is divided with every new clone, it is easier to control the energy with more than him alone. No matter how many clones though, if they don’t all have complete control of their chakra, the Rasengan could end up backfiring, killing them, and Hakumei off instantly.

When executed correctly, a humungous energy wave of chakra explodes from Hakumei (and the clones), exploding violently into all directions on the front side of his body for a long range (about 200 meters/60 feet). This is truly a do or die technique, and isn’t used very often. Hakumei will only use this jutsu when it is absolutely necessary… such as life or death situations. Though he hasn’t had to use it once in a real battle so far, but someday… that day might come.

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Yet another template where one knows the many forms of the chidori, and rasengan, with no valid explanation of how they were learned at all. That is all trivial, as many rpers seem drawn to those two jutsu, and their usage is rather pathetic seeing as how as I said above, they aren't even hinted at in the bio.

There are some things I can't stand to see.............


Flying Thunder God Technique: It allows Hakumei to move over large distances with ultra-high speed. Although it is often compared with the Body Flicker Technique, the speed of this jutsu is much greater. In principle, it is similar to the Summoning Technique, but instead of bringing something to users, it sends them somewhere. Additionally, it makes no noise and produces no puff of smoke, allowing the user to appear behind someone unnoticed.
This is a jutsu that only one man used in the history of Naruto ever. This special technique was the Yondaime Hokage's, and his alone. The secret formula was never discovered, and so the technique died with him, so how is it that your character randomly knows this jutsu?? I'd love to get an explanation on that one, especially since you even left out vital parts of the jutsu description.

Sand Manipulation: Hakumei is able to control and manipulate sand when, and how he wills it.
This is just stupid, because this is not a jutsu, but in most cases an actual kekkei genkai, unless you are saying that Hakumei is extremely skilled in the use of sand justu and manipulation, in compare to such a ninja as the Nidaime was with water. I doubt this to be the case however, as it was never stated.

Rasengan Ultima:: This version of Rasengan was created by Hakumei himself, and has been working on this Jutsu for many, many years. This jutsu is one of the most powerful, and most difficult to do correctly. At least one hundred clones are needed to execute this safely without killing himself. It is also necessary to have that many in order to draw out the Rasengan’s true power. This form of Rasengan consumes so much of his chakra, that if he were to try to do this with a limited amount of clones, he would besically be committing suicide. Chakra from people of the same level as Hakumei is needed in order to complete the jutsu, thus the clones are a must. No matter how many clones though, if they don’t all have complete control of their chakra, the Rasengan could end up backfiring, killing him off instantly.

When executed correctly, a humungous energy wave of chakra explodes from Hakumei (and the clones), exploding violently into all directions on the front side of his body for miles and miles. This is truly a do or die technique, and isn’t used very often. Hakumei will only use this jutsu when it is absolutely necessary… such as life or death situations. Though he hasn’t had to use it once in a real battle so far, but someday… that day might come.
1.)Who are you to say what technique is supposedly used to draw out a rasengan's true power??

2.) How can you say that you need massive amounts of clones to use their chakra?? Clones are not used for that purpose because simply using that technique to make 100 clones would nearly deplete your chakra!!!! Each clone does not have separate chakra, but some of the original users, and you never stated that this jutsu transforms the nature of the rasengan like an elemental release, so the need of clones for that reason is completely invalid.........

3.)There is no way in hell a jutsu has a blast radius that is multiple miles in diameter. I won't say that some jutsu can't be extremely powered, even with force to wipe out a town, or city, but it's simply ridiculous to say that your jutsu goes for "miles and miles", and no definite reach is even applied.
 

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OOC: Hotaru, this isn't the same Arashi from Kissui's rp.

IC: Arashi noticed that Avin was waiting for him at the Gate of Konoha. He stopped a couple feet away from Avin. "Sorry bout that. They made me go serious with their pathetic invasion of our village." Arashi said calmly. He had known Avin since he had become ANBU three years ago. Arashi though was the stronger of the two, proving it every chance he got. "It's been great Avin. My mother's doing okay as the head medical ninja in the village. I visited Sheena and my child's grave today. So what's up? Been training and on missions as usual?" Arashi asked somewhat excited.

Suddenly Arashi heard another voice speak to him. After a second, Arashi really didn't know who the voice was. "I really do not know what you are talking about. I do not know who you are." Arashi's voice began to get serious, "Why have you come to Konoha?" He didn't know the reason for the newcomer's arrival in Konoha but, he hoped the boy didn't try anything. If he did then Arashi was going to make sure that he was defeated and captured.
 
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ooc: Glad SR said something. I was about to.

My bad RC, my fault for making another stupid assumtion.


Hotaru looked at the two. "Why have you come to Konoha?" Hotaru stepped back. "Woa woa, no need to get your panties in a bunch." He said, pulling out a scroll. "But I have vital information from the Raikage of the Cloud Village." Hotaru said with a smile. "I understand that you have recently lost a Hokage." He said, looking at the faces on the mountain. "And because of that, the Dawn Village is suspected of forming an attack on Konoha. Well, this scroll states that the Cloud Village forms an alliance with Konoha." He said, sticking the scroll back into his pouch.
 

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OOC: Dark Heart fix some of the jutsus on your template please or edit your biography.

Avin quickly saw another shinobi behind him which was heading towards Arashi and him. It was someone from the Leaf Village looking from the headband. He stopped for a second on a tree Avin wondered why but then he also stopped seeing as the shinobi was looking at Arashi. Avin was acting polite since the shinobi was a ally but he was keeping his distance from them for some reason. Was it because of Avin being a ANBU? He entered a few seconds after them and started to talk to Arashi since he didn’t know Avin. Finally the shinobi stood next to Arashi and started to talk about the jutsu Arashi did.

So that is the jutsu Arashi used Avin wondered what is was. Avin did the first thing he could think of and introduced himself saying,” Hello, my name is Avin Hyuuga nice to meet you.” He looked at the time and was in shock. Of all things Avin was going to do today he almost missed this. Avin noticed what Arashi said and stopped. “Kind of but not as many as I use to since the village isn’t at its best state right now.” He said to Arashi. He waved goodbye to Arashi and Hotaru then vanished like thin air or that is what it looked like. He jumped from building to building until he was in an open area. Avin started to cry thinking about his brother but got over it looking serious.

Avin looked at cut pieces of tree which were suppose to be target dummies for training. He was always the training type so he directly charged at the pieces of wood. He hit left and right with his hands flattened which was the Hyugga fighting style. He then said,” Divination Field, 64 Strikes.” With that he hit the target dummies knocking almost all of them down. Avin sat on one of the only ones left and sat on it looking up at the sky.
 

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Ashido and Kankuro were just walking through the desert. "It's been awhile since we've been home, hasn't it?" Ashid said, looking at his Jonin mentor. Kankuro nodded. "Ya," he replied. "It'll be nice seeing Gaara and Temari again. It's been two years." They continued to walk throught he sand until they reached the village gates of Sunagakure . Tjhey walked inside and entered the village.

As normaly in the day time, the village was bussling about in the daytime. Children were playing in the streets. People were visting and buying from the markets. Everything seemed peaceful as it was when Ashido left the village. 'It's good to see thst order has come to this place since we left it. There used to be alot of violence.' Finaly, Ashido and Kankuro reached then Kazikage's Mansion. They were greated by the gaurds of the mansion.

Ashido and Kankuro started to walk inside the enormus mansion. Ashido looked around. Not much had changed in the place. Ashido started to turn in a different direction than where Kankuro was going. "I'm going to my room." Kankuro looked at him and smiled. "Ok, just come meet us in Gaara's room when ever you ahve some time, ok?" Ashido nodded and smiled as he ran off towards his room. WHen he got to his room, Ashido lied down his battle puppet, who was wrapped up like a mummy, and took a nap on his bed.
 

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Arashi looked at the scroll and thought for a second. If Konoha was to start an alliance with the Cloud Village then maybe this could lead the village to get stronger. "Okay kid. Follow me. Time to bring this up with the Counsel." Arashi said before dashing off. He quickly made his way to the Counsel meeting area where the Counsel would meet. He reached the room rather quickly and opened the door to see the Counsel was already there and talking.

"Well Counsel. We have something interesting. I'll let this boy tell you." Arashi said and he took his seat.
 
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Hotaru looked at Arashi, wondering if he would let Hotaru through. "Okay kid. Follow me. Time to bring this up with the Counsel." Hotaru nodded, and began to dash behind Arashi. The two reached the Counsel room. Hotaru looked around. He had been here once before. "Well Counsel. We have something interesting. I'll let this boy tell you." Hotaru stood before the Councel as Arashi sat.

"Shinobi Councel of Konoha, the Raikage of the Village Hidden in the Clouds has a proposition." Hotaru pulled out the scroll. "We are considering forming an alliance with Konoha, due to your recent loss of your Hokage. It is to our understanding that you have word on a supposed attack from the Dawn Village." Hotaru said, taking one step. "We believe this alliance would strengthen our two villages. Raikage-sama also brought up the idea of taking a few of your strongest shinobi, and heading to the other villages, and forming alliances."
 

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Avin started to sweat as he finished his training. There were no more target dummies in site meaning he could rest which he was trying to do. He was breathing hard which would always happen after training. He didn’t move an inch from the spot he stood. His body bent so he could touch his knees and avoid from falling down. He looked down seeing all the sweat that was on the grass because of him. Then his ANBU mask dropped splashing the sweat which could have been a puddle. Avin stood up tall trying to catch his breath and relax. He wondered what he could do and then snapped his fingers and ran off almost forgetting his mask.

Every street he ran thru there were no villagers or anything else living. Avin stopped for a second as two shinobi were beating on an Academy student. He didn’t know what rank the two shinobi were but he didn’t mind harming them at all. Avin rushed in with his Byakugan activated. He focused on their legs and stopped so he could see their faces. He quickly flattened his hands and did a couple hits on both of them. Seconds later he took the Academy student and rushed off since he couldn’t do anything serious on people from the same village. Avin dropped the Academy Student off at a public street so that next time people would be able to see.

Avin was close to where they held there meetings and slowed down. He took of his mask since he had manners and walked up the stairs. The breeze of air had stopped and Avin looked at what he was wearing which wasn’t even close to what he should be wearing but he forgot about that and walked in leaning on a wall. No one really minded that he walked in so he listened to the shinobi who was with Arashi and him a small time ago. “So the Cloud Village wants to have a alliance with us that is good.” Avin said to himself.
 

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He sat poised on the rooftop with little thought going about his head, he let it all fall down with a smile. As his bangs from his hair was lapping over his face, removing the hidden dawn headband; brushing his hair back he laced it all behind the steel plate and cloth as he took it all in stride. With a tight not fastened by his hands, the headband held the annoyance to the way side as he now stood up and stared over the horizon of the rising sun. There was a descent upon him as the shadow of the hidden dawn village. Taking a seat beside him him, the intensity coming from his chakra wasn't something kisukse was used to except for the inherited chakra traits of his father.

"How are you akatskage-sama." He said with a warm smile.

"Kisuke there is something I need to tell you. I am not who you think I am."


He blunk twice.


"Akatskage-sama...your not a kage? Is that it? Or is it something else?" Kisuke's naive patterns of the act were placed with stupid questions.

He began to speak of his grandfather Daaku-baasama whom he really hadn't met as of yet. Only told about him from his mother and father over the years. To have been an S-rank missing ninja for the most part and having a dilemma with the hidden clouds, kumogakure many years ago. He was at least in his fourties then so he'd be extremely old by now. I don't think I've ever met grandfather...it's odd.

"I am Daaku and this body you see is nothing more than the curse of a jutsu that keeps my soul alive as time passes on. There is much about the jutsu that I'd rather not explain, but I can tell you that the battle that killed Rayex, is most likely my fault."

".....Daaku-baasama? Is that really you?" Kisuke was utterly shocked with little to say at the time, he'd always dreamed of meeting his grandfather Daaku-baasama, but like this...and for him to be kage like that. He clutched his grandfather with a tight grip, as he too was crying.
 

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".....Daaku-baasama? Is that really you?"

Toruma wiped his eyes, and stood up,He turned once more to Kisuke who was now holding him tightly. "Yes it is I. I wouldn't lie to you, but for now I am leaving the village for the time being to launch a small scale attack on Konoha. You know as well as I do that it is near impossible to reach the Dawn Village, seeing as how first the mined planes must be crossed near Kumo, and then the genjutsu in the forest makes it confusing to get through." There was a field of nigh perpetual darkness in the forest, and death awaited most who entered with out a guide.

"You can come if you want, I already sent a few squads of jounin, and they should be arriving shortly. I will go just for the enjoyment, maybe I'll find a good opponent. Though I doubt it will happen. Forgive me grandson, but there is also a reason why Ayumi is dead, but I think you know more on that matter than I, yet there is more to your twin than what meets the eye." Toruma jumped down from the roof, and walked past the courtyard gates to the edge of the forest. By now the others still in the village would have already left, or be leaving soon.

The forest loomed ahead in darkness, but Toruma didn't need to go through the forest. It was a simple task to use bukujutsu to fly up and over the forest, and in about a half hour, he dropped down to the other side, facing the direction of Konoha. It would normally take one a few hours ot get to Konoha from his current location, but he began to make hand signs for one of his forbidden jutsu, possibly the most powerful jutsu in existence that involved speed.

"Forbidden Jutsu: Quantum Rush........dive Seinaru form." He took a step forward, as his left eye turned white with an odd tomoe like a scythe in it. His body grafted a white aura, and his body tore into the ground and as he sped towards the field, and then forest, a tell-tale trench was left as his body moved at 4500 miles per hour. Konoha would soon be near........................
 

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Avin continued to listen for some time but then finally yawned from boredom. Randomly his eyes opened he sensed something powerful coming towards Konoha and he didn’t think it was good. Who could it be Avin kept asking himself? He looked at everyone in the counsel and it seemed they felt it too. The only thing Avin could think of doing was focusing who it was and trying to find a plan to stop it. It was his job to protect Konoha and that is what he was going to do.

He put on his mask and in a commanding voice said,” Arashi, let’s get everyone ready and quick just in case. Well this is the fight I have waiting for and since we are shinobi of the Village Hidden in the Leaves it is our job to protect it. “Avin walked out of the room and jumped from building to building screaming,” Konoha get ready something is coming all shinobi get ready to fight!” As shinobi got ready running towards the village gates Avin stood trying to see who or what it could be. Other ANBU stood beside and behind Avin all wearing mask.

Then he saw it from the village gates they were shinobi but they weren’t allies. Then he got it they were Dawn Village shinobi and Avin got ready by flattening his hands and in his fighting stance. Then shinobi from the Leaf Village charged at the opposing shinobi and attacked. Avin already saw people dying on both sides of the field which wasn’t the best thing to see but it didn’t upset him since he knew it was going to happen. Then Avin saw the Kage of the Dawn Village who had amazing chakra which Avin saw with his Byakugan. Then it was time for Avin to fight as a few Jounin approached him.

He quickly said,” Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms.” Then sharp beams of chakra came out of his hands and quickly hit all the Jounin several times.Almost all of them fell to the ground except the two Jounin behind Avin. He smirked some and waited for them to charge and then they finally did. Avin quickly hit both Jounin at several places stopping their chakra circulation so they couldn’t use jutsu or chakra in any way. Avin then finished them off and knocked them to the ground quickly but sadly one of the Jounin hit him right before falling to the ground. Avin checked his arm which didn’t hurt after a minute. Avin looked back at the Hokage Mansion waiting for Arashi to show up and help fight.
 

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It probably sucks but oh well here it is

Name: Ryuu (name given to himself )

Age: 15

Personality: Is very cold. Many people who have seen him have been held back by his cold stare,

Village: none. He was abandoned and found by a secret jutsu training clan

Ninja Rank: jounin if he was in a village

Appearance: has on a black cloak most of the time. His eyes are pure blue. His hair is black. Underneath the cloak he wears a blue sweatshirt with a dragon insignia. He also has blue pants and is about 6’0.

Weapons: kunai knife, paper bomb, shrunken and a samurai sword.

Demon : none

Side (With or against Dawn Village): hates the dawn village but not with anyone

Clan/Bloodline : has a marking on his neck for the dragon clan

Extra : has a brother that is alive somewhere

Bio: when Ryuu was a baby he was abandoned in the forests. He was then found by a secret clan of ninjas called the dragon clan. They would study hidden jutsus that no one else knew. No one knows where they are at. Ryuu was thought everything the dragon clan knows. They where murdered by a rouge-nin that was on his way to the dawn village. He was five when that happened. So now he has sworn revenge on that rouge-nin. He then traind for the rest of his life in hope of seeing that ninja again and getting revenge for his clan.

When Ryuu was ten he meet a dieing man who had recognized him as his son. He had then given him his sword and told him that he had to deliver that to his brother. His dieing words where that he thought he would never see the son he hated again. Those words stuck in Ryuu’s mind and gave him his cold attitude . Latter he found a traveling merchant that was looking for him. He said that his brother had killed his family and joined the dawn group. He also said that the man he met was actually a dawn spy. He then swore that he would find his brother and kill him. For both killing his family and his clan.

Jutsus: summoning technique:
Earth dragon: summons a dragon of earth element
*ninja art: Earth Dragon Projectile
Earth Style Wall
Earth Style Rampart
Earth Flow River
Rock Snowstorm
Water dragon: summons a dragon of water element
*ninja art: Bursting Water Collision Waves
Tornado of Water
Water Fang Projectile
Water Shark Projectile Technique
Water Dragon Projectile Technique
Fire dragon: summons a dragon of fire element
*ninja art: Great Fireball Technique
Mythical Fire Phoenix Technique
Fire Dragon Projectile
Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Dragon Fire Technique
Air dragon: summons a dragon of wind element
*ninja art: Lightning Dragon Tornado
Lightning Edge
Drilling Air Projectile
Great Cutting Whirlwind Technique

Fused dragon: summons a dragon of all the elements
*note: has the powers of all dragons

Genjutsu: Journey into Black Darkness Technique
Temple of Nirvana Technique

Taijutsu: None

Ninjutsu: Earth Barrier
Chidori
Chidori Sword
Whip of Water
Dragon Fire Technique
Sword of Wind
Rasengan
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OOC: Felix, you pped my actions in your post, I never posted arrival in Konoha, nor said that my units were attacking before I arrived. I dealt with it this time, but try to be more careful and don't rush things.......

Toruma made it to Konoha in no time and saw that the battle had already started which was perfectly fine by him. He purposely chose not to mask any of his chakra, and upon stopping and knocking away a chuunin level ninja who apparently didn't know who he was with ease, kept walking forward. His black eyes were like usual taking in numerous and all details from his surroundings, but what caught his eye was a single man, who must have though he was masterful at his technique, but he had t be jounin level, or higher, and he was taking out groups of Chuunin like they were nothing. Toruma always disliked men who fought those who were weaker than oneself.

"Wing Squad, show yourself!!!", From the trees, multiple jounin floated down and stood at attention, their skill impressive, and havi g been taught by Toruma himself, they were no push overs. "That was such a waste of young spirit. You seriously think those were jounin?? You have another thing coming. That Byakugan of yours will fail you, if you don't pay attention." Three of the jounin stepped forward, and suddenly their eyes opened, revealing voids of darkness, exactly like Toruma's eyes...........

They were special ninja who had been grafted with an artificial kekkei genkai for battle, and one that has the nemesis of the white eye. With amazing speed, each ninja moved in front of the ninja, but in the next second were in the air above him. They all remained silent. "Syn, Asch, Larnesi, you know what your mission is, go and find Arashi. We'll see how he fairs against three burakkuai users at once. I'll deal with this loser here." Toruma stepped forward, and with his great speed, moved past the ninja with out appearing to have done anything.

"It's too bad that your dojutsu cannot track objects, but only see them. I know you can see me behind you over here, so turn and face me, reject..........."
 

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Arashi and the counsel listened to everything that Hotaru had told them. It sounded like a good deal. "The only problem is we cannot send our powerful ninja. We need them all. If we let them go then other villages or ninja would have a chance to attack us." One counsel member said. Arashi replied "I'll do it. Me, Avin, and this boy will do it."

Each Counsel member looked at eachother and began talking. After talking for a bit, they each agreed. "Okay. That will do." One counsel member said, "But for now it seems we have problems. I know you can hear the sounds of combat outside. It is time to fight." Arashi nodded and looked over at Hotaru. "Let us go. I hope you can fight." Arashi said as he dashed out the room and outside the buidling. He ran into the middle of the street and said "Come get some."
 

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Ooc: Coordination of jutsu in some temps is perplexing...there should've been chakra elements/natures for better clarity...seriously.

With a heavy sigh, Kisukse exhaled and began to wipe away the tears on his eyes as he had felt relieved. He'd been alone for the last three years, loosing both parent initially as his time as genin. His father to his step-uncle Mizuki and his mother to his baadaifu Sanosuke's son Soujiro. His eyes...they were similar to Kisuke's, yet so different. As for his great aunt Tomie, she still runs the hidden dark village, no doubt Soujiro his uncle would be the successor of a whole new breed of doujutsu. His head feel down as he was on both of his feet standing in naught of a slump. As his baasama took his leave, he'd been on his way to Konoha for a plot already put into motion, he'd no doubt assist.

"So you just now found out? You crybaby." There was a figure standing behind him.

"Not now Erebos...you should be helping, not blasting that mouth." Kisukse said snapping turning to his fraternal double.

"I'm just saying even I knew the akatskage was grandfather...I mean come on. We grew up with the guy, and didn't it appear strange that he and mother had the same kekkei genkai?" He proceeded to point out obvious signs.

"....Geez give it a rest and lets go help grandfather." Kisuke was pretty serious now.

"Fine, fine. The Hizumu can make the jump...but it's more fun to just make the jump." Erebos said his shifted from scarlet to silver flashing with three four swirling tomoe seals branching from the pupil. "Catch up slow poke."

Kisuke sighed as Erebos was gone with a subtle shift of power entering his body. It's a good thing he never inherited the chakra traits...that would indeed be scary. Making his subtle shift mimicking his brother, the moved to the gates a step after Erebos too the massive leap. A flying step soaring across the wide space in front of him his brother flew and Kisuske in his shadow so to speak. Approaching the thickened forest where the genjutsu rest to thwart entrace as their great aunt Tomie had done, same with Daaku-baasama. The sky dance skill or bukujutsu, was initially soaring over the thicket of the trees. Aligning himself next to his brother he looked over at him with some sense of curiosity.

"So what do you think of him brother?"

"Think of who Kisuke?" His attention was shifted.


"Soujiro...remember we were both there."

"Oh...that bastard...really he's something....but it's in bad blood, to think he's alot like the original Sureiyu at that and found the only 'blind spot' in the eye trait....it's sickening." Erebos said clenching his fist tighter.

Coming to the forest's end, they caught a moments glance of Toruma-baasama before he was gone traveling who the hell knows how fast.

"Holy crap!!! How did he do that!"

"Geez. We're supposed to keep up with that, did you see what just happened to his body?! Pfft, we can't move that fast, but we can move to where he is. Let's make the jump already." Erebos said.

Hizumu Shirubaai!
Hizumu Shirubaai!

The two of them broke in fast shifting burst breaks as they planned to cover distance before making the jump to catch Toruma-baasama as there was the chance, if they jumped early, he'd be a long ways off from them still moving. The ludacris trench he left they that had to follow was extremely massive and something you would expect from a kage no doubt. With enough time passed, the effect of the hizumu kicked in, each picturing an image copied of Toruma-baasama and bringing themselves to the general area near where he was located. If this were short range they would've ended up right next to him. They actually ended up twenty meters from Toruma-baasama. They made note of the leaf village's walls and the shinboi chuunin and up were spilling from the gates, both sitting in a tree a distance from sight, though you'd need to have the eyes to see them.
 
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