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So far out of the 5 characters I've drawn, 3 are female, 2 of those 3 are main characters, the other female is the Raikage, she's important but the Raikage isnt one fo the 4 Main characters.

I have plans for a main female villian and also the female uchiha will play an important role too.

And dont worry....the Uchiha will not be spammed in my fanfic lol....they dont even play a big role in the story as a whole.
 

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Can you PM me the Uchiha Temps.?

BTW: Sorry about the poor description, I'll find an image.

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Name:
Gattoishi Tankuengo

Age:
16

Sex:
Male

Appearance:
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Village:
Hidden Rock

Rank:
Special Jounin

Chakra Affinity:
Rock/Lighting

Specialty:
Bloodline/Taijutsu

Personality:
Gattoishi has a determined Persona, that influences him to do great things. But he is also down to Earth, knowing that he will never be looked up to, and will never have fame. Though he still wishes to be recognized as a person by his older brother.

Whenever he is given a task that he cannot accomplish, he simply tries harder. While knowing that there is no real use for him if he cannot (somewhat like Haku in a sense). But unlike Haku, he doesn't follow one person, but his whole country...

Signature Jutsu:
Summon: Oniogo
[also uses Dust Release]

Other:
Secrecy & Relevance to the plot;
Gattoishi was born into a secret, and important family of bodyguards. Their main goal was to protect both of the Village's Jinchuuriki, the Yonbi & Gobi. They would achieve their goal by using their advanced bloodline that would utilize the Lightning & Earth elements.

But unfortunately for Gattoishi, he was born a second child. Something that has been prohibited within the family for centuries. And because of this he was not aloud to protect the Jinchuuriki, & while also not being aloud to be included within the common society.

As he had progressed through his life, he had shown that he had natural talents in fighting. He could even been seen as good as his older brother (who had been given advanced training). The Village Leader in particular; knew that this couldn't be wasted.

After months of secret training seminars, and tests, Gattoishi was finally given a position of importance. He was to be a secret agent, somewhat like an anbu. As a secret agent, his goal is to survey other countries & their Jinchuuriki, and to stop any terrorist acts that are directed to the Hidden Rock (and any other country that pays for his duties).

Bloodline;
The Tankuengo bloodline is very unique in many ways. The inheritors of the blood are usually stronger, and more rigid then other ninjas. And most importantly; they are able to use the Dust Release element.

Fighting Style;
Even though he might be thought to specialize in Dust Release, instead he prefers to summon his battle companion Oniogo; a Stone Bull. These creatures are known to have empathy for other Rock affinity users, and both Gattoishi & Oniogo share chakra.
 

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The male Uchiha has already been taken so if you still want to do it you will have to do the female one.

Nice character, he's accepted....I already know where he'll fit in the story.
 

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Could you send me the Clan temp if it hasn't been picked up? I'd like to take a stab at it.
 

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Name: Luna Murasashi

Nickname: Her cousin often calls her “Mu mu” which often brings the angry side of her usually ending with her slapping him aside the head.

Age: 26

Sex: Female

Appearance: Black skin with long dark hair flowing halfway down her back and put into a ponytail. Her eye color is dark brown. Usual outfit: Green ninja vest underneath she wears a black short sleeve shirt a crescent moon style symbol on the arm parts of the shirt and wears dog tags with the encryption “Wolf Hunter” on one and on the other her birth date(you can just make that up). She has on gloves with the Village symbol on it, wears black pants with back and front pockets, and has black shoes on.

Village: Village Hidden in the Clouds

Rank: Jounin

Chakra Affinity: Wind, Earth

Specialty: Taijutsu, Weaponry

Personality: Even though she is known throughout most villages as a savage beast unleashed upon the raikage’s command Luna is a kind hearted person. She cares for others well being however when in battle she warns them that if they get in the way they could get killed (which is why she is known as a savage beast or as it says in her dog tag the wolf hunter).

Signature Jutsu: Wolf Fang- Luna makes chakra forms of wolves to attack her enemy. The technique requires her to first push out her chakra, then
once conjuring the image in her head the chakra takes the form of wolves and obeys her commands however this justu takes up a vast amount of chakra. She can make them explode amount contact and if trying to find someone can contact the others to make the location known.

Other: She was separated from most of her family when she was little and has lived with her cousin and father in the hidden cloud village since she was 7. She enjoys walking around and is usually found in the park casually walking by or helping
her cousin repair broken weapons.
 
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@Nevermore...ok you're the first to ask so it's yours. Give me some time to finish it and I will pm it to you tonight buddy :)

@Chaos...she's accepted, you can create 1 more character before I will have to ask for you to stop being so helpful lol. I already know what I will do with her too.
 

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Ok lol and the next one I'll make may be one of the seven swordsman or the mist but first I got chores and homework to do so I may not post it till later on tonight or sometime tomorrow.
 

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I'm going to give you references for my characters. I want you to draw them the way yu feel. Third temp coming later.

Name: Uchiha Meru

Age: 13

Sex: Male

Appearance: http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/079/7/1/718b53fc77c7b156d8ca21aa6ca641b6.jpg

Village: Kumo

Rank: Genin

Chakra Affinity: Lightning

Specialty: Ninjutsu

Personality: Goofy, Happy-go lucky, and Confident are the best words to describe Meru. He likes to live life to fullest and that means everyday. Very easygoing and friendly, that is sometimes used against him. Though Meru can get mad pretty easily when things aren't goin his way, causing him to become very reckless. One last thing is Meru has no problem killing so, it's not good to be on his bad side.


Signature Jutsu: Lightning Fist - By channeling chakra into his hand, Meru manipulates it causing lightning chakra to spark erratically around his arm from his palm and the lightning chakra to pulse up, forming one large chakra wing from his back with a second smaller one underneath it. The wings can be used to allow Meru a form of gliding. If it was cut through, the chakra would simply reform the wings. The lightning chakra makes Meru's arm and hand a weapon. Meru can use it for taijutsu, giving his opponent a nice jolt when attacking, he can grab them, causing the lightning chakra to shock them, or block attacks sending jolts through the attacker. He can fire the lightning chakra off in blasts or arcs toward his opponent. He can also make the lightning chakra extend forward, creating a lightning blade which can cut much better then a normal katana.

Other: Meru and his twin sister have been raised by Ceon since the day they were born.


Name: Tamotsu Raizo

Age: 24

Sex: Male

Appearance: Raizo's hair is in a ponytail that extends to his back and his bangs cover his face somewhat. From the middle to the ends of his hair has been colored a dark gold giving him two hair colors, Black at the top to middle and Dark Gold from the middle to his ends.

Outfit - http://th07.deviantart.net/fs40/300W/i/2009/049/6/4/Naruto_Kyogeki_Samara_Bakyi_by_jasonniceboy.jpg

Clan mark on the right side of Raizo's chest - http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs4/i/2004/199/c/4/Sword_of_heaven_tattoo_design.jpg

Mushashi Spirit appearance - http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs36/i/2008/342/e/1/Samurai_Spirit_7_by_Artgerm.jpg

Village: Sunagakure

Rank: S-rank Missing-nin

Chakra Affinity: Lightning, Earth, and Pure

Specialty: Kenjutsu and Intelligence

Personality: Raizo is confident, but without being cocky. He never second-guesses herself, and makes it a priority to be informed and to be right. He seems to have a sadistic sense of humor at times. He can be just as manipulative as the next person. He's always cool and calm, making it almost impossible to put pressure on him, in or out of battle. It also seems like he's always one step ahead...

Signature Jutsu:

Akuma Doragon Tensoku-ryu (Devil Dragon Godspeed Style) - A style that has been within the Tomatsu family for generations. It is not through blood that it is passed down but through skill. When the student masters the style, they must kill their master by overcoming their the Kuzu Ryu Sen with the succession technique, Ama Kakeru Ryu no Hirameki. When one truly able to learn such a style, they are able to exercise superhuman speed, and reflexes and use Shinshoku (Godspeed). The first learning curve of the style is studying the opponent, and predicting the opponents next move by analyzing your opponent and reading their body movement, and emotions, and using your own senses allowing the swordsman to react no matter how fast they are.

From this learning curve, it will increases one’s reflexes from such exercise. This is where the god speed must come from. One must work their legs naturally through rigorous training. Once the legs are strong enough to move at extreme speeds. The user will then work upon their chakra control, fueling it throughout their legs allowing the muscles to work much smoothly and protecting the tendons from ripping at such high speeds. Once successfully mastered, one can move at such high speeds that even dojutsu users would find trouble in keeping up. The chakra used will be a small amount as if activating a kekkai genkai which is a small amount.

Jutsu: I've talked to Raiton about this.

Iaido - The first initial technique of the Tomatsu's sword style. It utilizes the draw of the katana in one swift cut faster then the eye can see nor body can react. Depening on if the user is left or right handed determines what foot leads when the draw is implicated. The momentum behind the draw is great enough to break through steel or a chakratic defense and kill whoever is struck. Being proficent with this technique, Raizo can draw his long nodachi faster then someone drawing a katana. The speed at which he draws is not to be taken lightly for he has the fastest draw in his clan.

Kage Release: Namikengi Yaiba (Dark Release: Wave Motion Blade) - Steadily coursing dark chakra through his arm, a blade will compact and extend from his arm. He must have some focus upon the blade or he would swing around a blade about as big him consuming tons of chakra. Swinging the blade rapidly, it will cause massive chakratic explosions and cuts that rip right through their opponents, burning them with each cut. Though if the full charge time of up to 20 seconds is used, then the blade becomes strong enough to rip through chakra attacks and defenses with ease, causing terrible dark waves of dark chakra with every cut but it will disband shortly afterwards.

Raito Release: Namikengi Yaiba (Light Release: Wave Motion Blade) - Created the same way except utilizing bands of light particles to create blades of light. This blade of light, upon fully powered, will create horrific light flares upon every cut. Able to fling the blade from his hand, it flies at the opponent as a wave, demolishing whatever in it's way.

God of the Seven Blades - Chakra is first surged throughout the blade, the the user jumps up into the air and gives a mighty swing in circular motion in the air at the pinnacle of the jump. The sword then releases the chakra. The chakra branches off, making 7 phantom blades which then close off the opponent in a circular "gate" way. The user will then force chakra from their feet, and strike their opponent with each blade before using their original weapon to cut through the enemy as they fall back to earth. After the last strike, the chakra will explode damaging the opponent further

White Whorl - Manipulating the chakra around him or from within him, light chakra will spiral around him and the blade of his sword. Giving a mighty swing of his sword, the light chakra will gather together into a powerful vortex-like force that travels one hundred feet and is 15 ft. in radius. When one is struck, they are cut multiple times by the vortex and will have various lacerations.

Kuzu-ryūsen - The “Nine-Headed Dragon” is a formidable technique which utilizes Shinsoku (lit. God-speed) to the fullest extent; dealing nine strikes to the most fundamental targets of swordsmanship (Kara Take, Kesa Giri, Saka Gesa, Hidari Nagi, Migi Nagi, Hidari Kiriage, Migi Kiriage, Saka Kaze, and Tsuki), all at the same time. These points are the focus of the technique as they make up the basis of one’s guarding stance, regardless of style or weapon. So with the Kuzu-ryūsen, attacking all nine all at once, guarding and dodging becomes virtually pointless. It should be noted, that this move was not created for actual combat, but as a byproduct in the creation of the secret; as an initiation for the secret. If the initiate can overcome their master's nine dragons, then they would be ready to acquire the secret. All nine strikes of the Kuzu-ryūsen carry lethal force. However, weight and power play a critical aspect in the effectiveness of the technique. This means, even if the move is executed without flaw, the force behind the technique will differ from wielder to wielder depending on their class in weight and arm strength. Essentially, a "lighter" Kuzu-ryūsen would be overpowered by a "heavier" Kuzu-ryūsen.

Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki (Devil Dragon Godspeed Style: Heavens Bridging Dragon Spark) - The Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki is battōjutsu that surpasses Shinsoku. This is the key to defeating the Kuzu-ryūsen. Because the Kuzu-ryūsen is a charging technique that cannot be blocked, an attack must be made before the Kuzu-ryūsen arrives, thus the true nature of the final technique: the Amakakeru Ryū No Hirameki must be faster than a regular battōjutsu in order to hit the opponent. The secret behind the technique lays in an additional step with the left foot. This single step alone adds instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword changing the god- speed of Akuma Doragon Tensoku Battōjutsu to "Beyond god speed". However, this extra step is difficult to take as one of the fundamental teaching of battōjutsu states that one should step forward with the right foot as to avoid cutting their own foot with the attack. As such, the additional step forward with the left foot can spell certain death for the swordsman, as it takes precise timing to coordinate, as to not lose any momentum while drawing; it requires the utmost concentration, that can only be obtained by one's desire to live.

There is another secret to this technique. If the initial strike is avoided or blocked, the force of the unusually fast slashing motion displaces the chakra around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the opponent in. As this happens, the body is spun around for a second strike, the previous action adding force and momentum to the swing, making the subsequent strike far stronger. This is the true power of the Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki. As Raizo’s sensei, Hiko Seijiro said, Even if you were able to avoid the fangs of the flying dragon, the gusting winds strip away freedom of movement, and the claws would rip you apart. "Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki" is so fast that its implementation can be successful even when the enemy's strike has actually reached the user's body. As depicted, Shinomori Todoshi’s signature Kaiten-kenbu Rokuren attack has actually begun to cut into Raizo’s chest when Raizo released the attack, and blows Todoshi back before he can even finish. The invincible attack "Amakakeru Ryū no Hirameki" is the final technique of the Hiten Mitsurugi Ryū.

Kekkei Genkai (bloodline trait):

Kon-heisetsu (Soul Tether) - Within the Tamotsu Clan, the samurai are born with a mark upon their arm that tethers their soul to spritual realm. Their chakra is then linked to a samurai soul that once lived within this world. The soul becomes bonded upon the body and their chakra is also bonded to that person's body. Each person within the clan is bonded with their very own soul, keeping them from being taken over by the soul and it's chakra. For everyone born within the clan has a special weapon created that has the same mark that the person is born with that reacts to that person's chakra like a sentient weapon, sucking dry those who's mark does not match or is not tethered to a soul. Though there are instances where a sacred weapon is passed down from clan member to clan member when a powerful soul is bonded to someone.

When the Kon-heisetsu is activated, the image of the spirit will appear behind the Tamotsu with it's weapon in hand. Chakra will take form and intertwine with the user's chakra, boosting it and giving him an enhanced state of power. As usual, chakra will stem throughout the body powering up the muscles, making them run smoother and work harder without destroying themselves. Strength will increase tenfold, releasing chakra during strikes increasing the deadly potency of strikes. Speed will also become devastating up until it looks as though one is teleporting. For Raizo though, he moves at Wrap Particle shift when activated because he is untalented right now. The chakra will condense into a thin wrap around the body, protecting the user from harm and giving him better durability. His stamina and endurance is also raised allowing the user to fight for much longer periods of time before passing out. Because of the spiritual aspect, the user can become advanced enough to cause his strikes to hit the spirit during it's physical strikes but, it doesn't deal as much pain as a physical strike, something that Raizo's subconciously. This is only stage one of the Soul Tether.

Soul Tether Level 2 - By linking Mushashi's soul to Chokuto, Raizo acheives the second level of his soul tether. When linked together, Mushashi's spririt and chakra will invoke a powerful change in Chokuto, increasing it's raw physical power and chakratic power. His power, and speed becoming something of near legend. Because his blade becomes humongous and releases chakratic explosions with every strike, Raizo has amazing range to attack from. Dark chakra can be pulsating around his body and Chokuto.

Soul Tether 2 appearance: http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8682/380pxosspiritofswordwhi.jpg

Mushashi - When Raizo is feeling extreme levels of strength or his body failing during battle and his Soul Tether is activated, Mushashi will take control. The master samurai will strike ten times more fierce then Raizo can. Battling like he once did when he was alive, it has only been stopped twice by Raizo's father and his squad leader. Considered a completely powerful form, this is reason for Raizo's seal.

Weapon(s):

Chokuto - Known throughout Raizo's clan as the Devil's Blade, this sword has a dark aura that exists around it all times, giving off sinister chakra to those that it deems worthy. It is said that when one weilds it, they lose all sense of themself and become a deadly warrior that lives on shedding the blood of it's enemy and killing those that get in their way. Given to Raizo during his 10th birthday as a coming of age in his family. It's chakra is always pulsating and stimulating the user's chakra, giving him a large amount to work with if he was to run out of chakra. Because of Raizo's seal and the seal placed upon it, it has not unlocked it full power but, he can stem chakra through it's blade to release waves of evil chakra or keep it within the blade to power up it's strikes. A deadly weapon to behold, Raizo isn't hesistant to use this weapon to it's fullest.

Chokuto appearance - http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs48/f/2009/177/b/0/Nodachi__Sirakosaku_by_Sennek.jpg

Other: Raizo was born with a rare diesase that is only within his clan. His soul is dying slowly from the use of integrating a dark soul with his own soul. He coughs up blood from time to time and the more time that goes by, the more his body dies. Another symptom is blacking out is too tired or hit with too hard of an attack and blurred vision from time to time.
 

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Sauce...I'm gonna accept the Uchiha but I'm gonna change him to Konoha for story purpose and Raizo is awsome accepted.

Oh and as stated he talked with me about Raizo so that's why that character has a list of jutsu.....he's VERY IMPORTANT to the story lol.

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Ok Nevermore.....I'm about to send the temp to you in pm.
 

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Just to clarify, even though you said that this is taking place in an alternate universe, I'm assuming that the geography (country/village locations and the like) will remain largely the same, or will it change?

Also, is it specifically required that the clan be from one of the main five villages?
 

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Name:
Moi Uchiha

Age:
13

Sex:
Female

Appearance:
Moi looks much like her brother in many ways, just with softer/& curvier features. She has straight, black, & long hair, a kind smile, and large blue eyes. For clothing: She wears a sleeveless brown jacket with the signature Uchiha turtleneck (though it's much lower). Dark maroon pants, and her sandals being the same color.

She also wears her forehead protector around her left leg, and carries a pouch full of equipment on her right. There is also a small pin with one impaled bead that lies in her hair. On this pin is the Uchiha symbol that is recognized around the world.

Village:
Hidden Leaf Village

Rank:
Genin

Chakra Affinity:
Fire

Specialty:
Ninjutsu (or bloodline, when considering her use of fire jutsu)

Personality:
Moi is nothing like her older brother Meru; in fact, she is the complete opposite. Moi is a person who is always on task, and is always ready to do missions. While also loving the world around her, her favorite hobbies are smelling flowers, and playing with animals. All in all she is a sweet girl her can find morality wherever she looks.

Signature Jutsu:
Estranged Phoenix Sidewinder Jutsu!
A strong Fire jutsu that can be utilized for backup, the Estranged Phoenix Sidewinder begins with a very basic breathe of fire. Once the fire exits the mouth it starts to form a beam, & is shot out towards the target. Once close to the foe it explodes into many small flaming bullets, these bullets can then form to beaming spirals that act as homing missiles if needed.

Other:
Moi's jutsu can be used to clear a path for Meru's Lighting Fist.
 

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Accepted.....good I have my two Uchiha characters. Thank you guys.

I'm surprised no one has picked a Kage...I figured they would be picked first.
 

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Just a quick progress update. The clan template is finished. The three characters still need appearances and signature jutsus. Two of the three need their personalities expounded. I don't know if I'll get that finished today, but it should definitely be finished by tomorrow.
 

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Surprisingly enough, I was able to finish this first version (reserving later versions for if you want me to change anything, lol). If you wouldn't mind, I'd like you to let me know if you change anything, as some aesthetic decisions were based on certain background information. Of course, I'm willing to change anything to better suit your story. I tried to be both thorough for the sake of description yet open-ended enough to make it easy to incorporate into the story.

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Clan is accepted and I'll send you the temp later Sauce.....I'm about to be late for my morning class lol.
 
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