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"This hate can only be filled with the power to protect those that need it"

Name: Tamotsu Raizo

Nickname(s): Rai , Desert Child, The Hybrid

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Personality: Goofy, Happy-go lucky, and Confident are the best words to describe Raizo. He likes to live life to fullest and that means everyday. Very easygoing and friendly, that is sometimes used against him. Though Raizo can get mad pretty easily when things aren't goin his way, causing him to become very reckless. One last thing is Raizo has no problem killing so, it's not good to be on his bad side.

Clan mark on the right side of Raizo's chest - http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs4/i/2004/199/c/4/Sword_of_heaven_tattoo_design.jpg

Clan seal on Raizo's stomach - http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs46/i/2009/192/0/c/Pandora_Hearts_Seal_by_sakuranokaze.jpg

Mushashi Spirit appearance - http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs36/i/2008/342/e/1/Samurai_Spirit_7_by_Artgerm.jpg

Home Village: Sunagakure

Chakra Element: Lightning, Earth

Clan: Tamotsu Samurai Clan

Ninja Rank: Genin

Team: The best damn team to ever exist. Team 17

Weapon(s):

Chokuto - Known throughout Raizo's clan as the Devil's Blade, this sword has a dark aura that exists around it all times, giving off sinister chakra to those that it deems worthy. It is said that when one weilds it, they lose all sense of themself and become a deadly warrior that lives on shedding the blood of it's enemy and killing those that get in their way. Given to Raizo during his 10th birthday as a coming of age in his family. It's chakra is always pulsating and stimulating the user's chakra, giving him a large amount to work with if he was to run out of chakra. Because of Raizo's seal and the seal placed upon it, it has not unlocked it full power but, he can stem chakra through it's blade to release waves of evil chakra or keep it within the blade to power up it's strikes. A deadly weapon to behold, Raizo is hesistant to use this weapon to it's fullest.

Chokuto appearance - http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs48/f/2009/177/b/0/Nodachi__Sirakosaku_by_Sennek.jpg

Jutsu: Limit to 12, Divide how you see fit

Taijutsu:

Akuma Doragon Tensoku-ryu (Devil Dragon Godspeed Style) - A style that has been within the Tomatsu family for generations. It is not through blood that it is passed down but through skill. When the student masters the style, they must kill their master by overcoming their the Kuzu Ryu Sen with the succession technique, Ama Kakeru Ryu no Hirameki. When one truly able to learn such a style, they are able to exercise superhuman speed, and reflexes and use Shinshoku (Godspeed). The first learning curve of the style is studying the opponent, and predicting the opponents next move by analyzing your opponent and reading their body movement, and emotions, and using your own senses allowing the swordsman to react no matter how fast they are.

From this learning curve, it will increases one’s reflexes from such exercise. This is where the god speed must come from. One must work their legs naturally through rigorous training. Once the legs are strong enough to move at extreme speeds. The user will then work upon their chakra control, fueling it throughout their legs allowing the muscles to work much smoothly and protecting the tendons from ripping at such high speeds. Once successfully mastered, one can move at such high speeds that even dojutsu users would find trouble in keeping up. The chakra used will be a small amount as if activating a kekkai genkai which is a small amount.

Iaido - The first initial technique of the Tomatsu's sword style. It utilizes the draw of the katana in one swift cut faster then the eye can see nor body can react. Depening on if the user is left or right handed determines what foot leads when the draw is implicated. The momentum behind the draw is great enough to break through steel or a chakratic defense and kill whoever is struck. Being proficent with this technique, Raizo can draw his long nodachi faster then someone drawing a katana. The speed at which he draws is not to be taken lightly for he has the fastest draw in his clan.

Ninjutsu:
Lightning Fist - By channeling chakra into his hand, Raizo manipulates it causing lightning chakra to spark erratically around his arm from his palm and the lightning chakra to pulse up, forming one large chakra wing from his back with a second smaller one underneath it. The wings can be used to allow Raizo a form of gliding. If it was cut through, the chakra would simply reform the wings. The lightning chakra makes Raizo's arm and hand a weapon. Raizo can use it for taijutsu, giving his opponent a nice jolt when attacking, he can grab them, causing the lightning chakra to shock them, or block attacks sending jolts through the attacker. He can fire the lightning chakra off in blasts or arcs toward his opponent. He can also make the lightning chakra extend forward, creating a lightning blade which can cut much better then a normal katana. -

Prison Sand Burial - Using his ability to manipulate sand, Raizo will loosen the ground below his targets and cause them to sink to their head inorder to keep them from death but, when pissed or against deadly odds, Raizo has been known to sink his opponents two hundred meters into the earth. By being imprisoned at this depth, the pressure will completely nullify their ability to move. Also, the pressure resulting from being buried at such an extreme depth would surely kill any normal human, if not from suffocation.

Sand Tsunami - This jutsu sends a massive amount of sand towards an opponent in the form of a wave, covering and "drowning" them in an ocean of sand. In addition to the wave effect of the jutsu, Raizo can control the sand, allowing him to attack his opponent while they attempt to outrun the wave. It is usually followed by an area crushing technique to kill the opponent.

Giant Sand Burial - Following the Sand Tsunami, Raizo slams both hands palm down into the sand, creating powerful shock waves that compress the sand. Anything buried in the sand is subsequently crushed. The compressions also creates massive earthquakes.

Sand Prison - After doing only three handsigns, Raizo will control the sand underneath the opponent. The sand will ripple open like a gaint mouth, causing the opponent to fall in. Sand will then enclose upon the opponent, crushing them. Raizo can instead cause the sand to just trap them, bringing only their head above the sand.

Sand Restriction - Controlling the sand to a fine point, the sand will raise up in several tendrils. These tendrils will move quickly, gripping the opponents arms, and legs. The grip is massively tight to restrict movement and escape. Usually used to restrain his opponents, Raizo can use the harden sand to crush the arms or legs of his opponent or slam them around like a rag doll .

Sand Coffin - After a handsign and channeled chakra, the sand will move and envelop the target from all sides with amazing speed. The opponent’s entire body will be encased in sand, restricting all movement. From here, Raizo will use this to set up for another attack or he will crush his opponent, liquefying them. This technique can also be used on opponents in the air and because of its alarming speed, it is hard to avoid.

Sand Fissure - After performing a series of hand signs, a large razor-toothed mouth made from hard sand materials will rise from the sand and 'chomp' down on everything within its grasp. Its teeth are razor sharp and will submerge into the flesh of the unfortunate victim or victims that are captured by the mouth.

Jinseihatsu (Life Explosion) - A jutsu created through the manipulation of pure chakra and pulling it between cupped hands, but it is possible to use it with one hand, but that causes some unstability in the jutsu. It rapidly takes form between the cupped hands, wind swirling around the user's body as the sphere is formed in his hands. This sphere is formed from an immense amount of compacted chakra making it dense and destructive. Then extending the hands forward, the sphere is shot forward. In appearance the sphere looks like a blue fireball, but it has no properties of fire. Moving at a quick speed, it strikes with destructive concussive force causing even those on guard to get damaged.

Specialty: Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Bloodline

Forbidden Jutsu: 1

Kuzu-ryūsen - The “Nine-Headed Dragon” is a formidable technique which utilizes Shinsoku (lit. God-speed) to the fullest extent; dealing nine strikes to the most fundamental targets of swordsmanship (Kara Take, Kesa Giri, Saka Gesa, Hidari Nagi, Migi Nagi, Hidari Kiriage, Migi Kiriage, Saka Kaze, and Tsuki), all at the same time. These points are the focus of the technique as they make up the basis of one’s guarding stance, regardless of style or weapon. So with the Kuzu-ryūsen, attacking all nine all at once, guarding and dodging becomes virtually pointless. It should be noted, that this move was not created for actual combat, but as a byproduct in the creation of the secret; as an initiation for the secret. If the initiate can overcome their master's nine dragons, then they would be ready to acquire the secret. All nine strikes of the Kuzu-ryūsen carry lethal force. However, weight and power play a critical aspect in the effectiveness of the technique. This means, even if the move is executed without flaw, the force behind the technique will differ from wielder to wielder depending on their class in weight and arm strength. Essentially, a "lighter" Kuzu-ryūsen would be overpowered by a "heavier" Kuzu-ryūsen. Even though Raizo can execute this technique perfectly, he is way too tired to continue fighting afterwards.

Limit Break Jutsu:

Tethered Existence - Forcing sand up, Raizo will shot it forward at an alarming rate, gripping his opponent by the legs. Slamming the enemy into the ground twice, the sand will loosen. As that happens, Raizo will be upon the opponent, striking with amazing accuracy, cutting the opponent all over their body, drawing blood. Flipping foward, Raizo's foot will connect with the head, sending them into the ground and causing their body to bounce off the ground. Activating his kekkai genkai within seconds, Mushashi and Raizo will become one being for that moment only. Lifting Chokuto into the air, dark, tainted chakra will swirl around it's blade. Dropping the blade upon the opponent, the blade will cut into the enemy, releasing the chakra. It will swirl around the opponent, cutting the opponent even more. Raising his hands, chakra will meld into a sand like substance until it is everywhere. The sand will raise up like a large wave of water and collapse upon the opponent, dealing far more damage then before. Stabbing his blade into the ground, tons of chakra blades will fly up from the sand, stabbing the opponent. If one was to live through this, they would be seriously injured and need medical attention immediately. After this is accomplished, Raizo is completely unconcious.

Kekkei Genkai (bloodline trait):

Kon-heisetsu (Soul Tether) - Within the Tamotsu Clan, the samurai are born with a mark upon their arm that tethers their soul to spritual realm. Their chakra is then linked to a samurai soul that once lived within this world. The soul becomes bonded upon the body and their chakra is also bonded to that person's body. Each person within the clan is bonded with their very own soul, keeping them from being taken over by the soul and it's chakra. For everyone born within the clan has a special weapon created that has the same mark that the person is born with that reacts to that person's chakra like a sentient weapon, sucking dry those who's mark does not match or is not tethered to a soul. Though there are instances where a sacred weapon is passed down from clan member to clan member when a powerful soul is bonded to someone.

When the Kon-heisetsu is activated, the image of the spirit will appear behind the Tamotsu with it's weapon in hand. Chakra will take form and intertwine with the user's chakra, boosting it and giving him an enhanced state of power. As usual, chakra will stem throughout the body powering up the muscles, making them run smoother and work harder without destroying themselves. Strength will increase tenfold, releasing chakra during strikes increasing the deadly potency of strikes. Speed will also become devastating up until it looks as though one is teleporting. For Raizo though, he moves at Semi - Wrap Particle Shift when activated. The chakra will condense into a thin wrap around the body, protecting the user from harm and giving him better durability. His stamina and endurance is also raised allowing the user to fight for much longer periods of time before passing out. Because of the spiritual aspect, the user can become advanced enough to cause his strikes to hit the spirit during it's physical strikes and its something that Raizo does subconciously.

Soul Tether Level 2 - By linking Mushashi's soul to Chokuto, Raizo acheives the second level of his soul tether. The release of chakra will physically change Raizo's outfit into mushashi's old black outfit (The one in the pic). Not only is the outfit formed but, a sacred spritual Tamotsu weapon known as Taigiri forms within Raizo's right hand, channeling the spiritual power of Mushashi into it. It can't be taken or knocked from Raizo's grasp nor can any touch it besides Raizo or Mushashi. The Taigiri is what Raizo uses to control Mushashi's armored form. When linked together, Mushashi's spririt and chakra will invoke a powerful change in Chokuto, increasing it's raw physical power and chakratic power. Empowering Raizo's body with Mushashi's chakra, Raizo's speed is increased to levels of Warp Particle Shift speeds.

Raizo's body becomes a temple for spiritual chakra, phasing through his body and giving him control over it. He can do more then just physical attacks coated with spiritual chakra but, he can now extend the spritual chakra into thin, blade like blasts or waves of chakra from his hands of Chokuto though it must be known that after so many spiritual attacks, Raizo is left weakened and tired. Because of Mushashi's spritual armor formimg around Raizo while holding Chokuto and he releases chakratic explosions with every strike, Raizo has amazing range to attack from. Dark chakra can be pulsating around his body and Chokuto.

Soul Tether 2 appearance: http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8682/380pxosspiritofswordwhi.jpg

Mushashi - When Raizo is feeling extreme levels of strength or his body failing during battle and his Soul Tether is activated, Mushashi will take control. The master samurai will strike ten times more fierce then Raizo can. Battling like he once did when he was alive, it has only been stopped twice by Raizo's father and his squad leader. Considered a completely powerful form, this is reason for Raizo's seal.

Kekkai Genkai Jutsu: He hasn't learned any yet.

Bio: At least a paragraph

-Early Childhood

Born to mother Kina Tomatsu and father Meru Hasigani, he was the only child they could produce after many years of trying. When born, he was given the name of his grandfather and his chakra mark was formed upon him. Stopping the flow of spiritual chakra, no soul was bonded upon him at that time. It was felt that if a soul was bonded to him now that his childhood would be terrible. Though being born into such a family was amazing for he was the child of a samurai and a shinobi. He had been born into a clan that for years had protected people form the spirit realm and kept the demonic, chakratic demons and souls from escaping.

It was upon his sixth birthday that a soul was allowed to become tethered to his existence. They waited for a reaction from the child and they got it as his body convulsed until he instanly stood up. Everyone in the room was shocked at what they saw. Raizo stood there with an evil smile upon his face and there was the dark soul Mushashi staring at them. It had been years since his release from the spirit realm that he had been trapped in by the Tamotsu clan. Rasiing Raizo's hand, Mushashi summoned the Chokuto forth to his hand and it's sinister chakra swirled around the child as Mushashi took control. Meru lunged forward in an attempt to save his son, only to be struck down by his son. The blade pierced his heart and Mushashi moved the blade once, ripping it from his chest. This was all the time that was needed for the other clan members to restrain Raizo.

Placing a sacred seal upon him, Mushashi was forced back and Raizo's body was under Raizo's control once more. Luckily his father was saved and Chokuto seal wasr repaired for the child. If Mushashi was to be forced out the body, it could hurt Raizo unbelievebly or even killed. But Kina and Meru had faith that their son would be able to control his spirit and the deadly nodachi.

-Academy Student background

The academy years, the day where one learns the ways of the shinobi and attempt to become complete badasses. Well that was the case for Raizo. Deciding that he would need more then kenjutsu, Meru taught Raizo to manipulate sand when he was not at the academy. Raizo had a hard time adjusting to the academy life. He was late half the time and he didn't get along with most of the students since samurai weren't really welcomed in Suna after Raizo's grandfather was blamed for their Kage's near death injury. He didn't care though since he knew he would outclass these kids one day. Almost everyday he was picked on and got into fights, getting him into an infinite amount of trouble but, his grades always made up for it.

Upon his tenth year of life, it was founded that his father was a double agent acting for Konoha to keep tabs on Suna. After being found out, his clan moved and decided to take refuge within Konoha. They were welcomed within arms and became Konoha's premiere clan in no time. Adjusting to Konoha's academy was much better then he thought. He found friends were easy and the work was of better quality. Though there was probably only two people he actually befriended at the school, Kai Kagemukai and Erebos Kunokai. Keeping them close, Raizo found that life was easier with two good friends by his side.

Though there was one thing that Raizo noticed. His father was living at hours of the night and sometimes leaving on missions of his own. He was scared that his father was acting as a double agent again and it didn't seem right but he knew it wasn't his place. He would find out one day.

Finally the day of teams was upon him. He was hoping to be grouped with Erebos and Kai but that wasn't likely to take place. Split up from Erebos, he was placed on a team with Kai and Erebos's brother Rayman. He had never interacted with the kid but, if he was like his brother then they would get along fine. His jounin though was what worried him. the guy was called the Pink Scream. It sounded gay but, Raizo had hope that the guy was like some super ninja. Things were about to become promising.

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Raizo's recent apperance change: Appearance: http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs41/f/2009/035/e/c/Naruto_Eledia_Ryo_Aokawa_by_jasonniceboy.jpg

Soul Tether Level 2 - By linking Mushashi's soul to Chokuto, Raizo acheives the second level of his soul tether. The release of chakra will physically change Raizo's outfit into mushashi's old black outfit (The one in the pic). Not only is the outfit formed but, a sacred spritual Tamotsu weapon known as Taigiri forms within Raizo's right hand, channeling the spiritual power of Mushashi into it. It can't be taken or knocked from Raizo's grasp nor can any touch it besides Raizo or Mushashi. The Taigiri is what Raizo uses to control Mushashi's armored form. When linked together, Mushashi's spririt and chakra will invoke a powerful change in Chokuto, increasing it's raw physical power and chakratic power. Empowering Raizo's body with Mushashi's chakra, Raizo's speed is increased to levels of Warp Particle Shift speeds.

Raizo's body becomes a temple for spiritual chakra, phasing through his body and giving him control over it. He can do more then just physical attacks coated with spiritual chakra but, he can now extend the spritual chakra into thin, blade like blasts or waves of chakra from his hands of Chokuto though it must be known that after so many spiritual attacks, Raizo is left weakened and tired. Because of Mushashi's spritual armor formimg around Raizo while holding Chokuto and he releases chakratic explosions with every strike, Raizo has amazing range to attack from. Dark chakra can be pulsating around his body and Chokuto.

Soul Tether 2 appearance: http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/8682/380pxosspiritofswordwhi.jpg

Burst Sphere (Hekitama) - Ceon's favorite jutsu to date, he created this during learning how to manipulate pure chakra better. He starts by focusing his chakra upon a single point in his hand until it takes form in his hand. Taking his other hand, he will begin to swirl the chakra around, cotnrolling and fine tuning the chakra until it becomes self sustaining, taking the spherical shape of a baseball. Once this is done, Ceon will rush the opponent and the compacted nature and moving speed of the chakra allows the Burst Sphere to grind into whatever it comes in contact with, inflicting major damage and damaging nerves. The force from the chakra will explode, blowing away any hit by the jutsu.

Ceon has taught Raizo how to use this jutsu and since Raizo is effectively two people, he can stabilize and create the jutsu on his own at such a young age.

Kage Release: Namikengi Yaiba (Dark Release: Wave Motion Blade) - Steadily coursing dark chakra through his arm, a blade will compact and extend from his arm. He must have some focus upon the blade or he would swing around a blade about as big him consuming tons of chakra. Swinging the blade rapidly, it will cause massive chakratic explosions and cuts that rip right through their opponents, burning them with each cut. Though if the full charge time of up to 20 seconds is used, then the blade becomes strong enough to rip through chakra attacks and defenses with ease, causing terrible dark waves of dark chakra with every cut but it will disband shortly afterwards. Taught to raizo for times when his sword is not around.
 
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That's amusing, since I posted and said there was a single spot left, which included Raizo beforehand I didn't need to mention a name. , Solar edited after the fact and changed his team, so you'd out of luck man'g. I pay quite a bit of attention to what is going on.

I'd rather have CaLab, but...
 

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I see no where it was posted that he has the spot, if has then by all means he can go ahead and I'll edit

My temp posted at 11:45
Edited at 12:38
Ubi posting wrong order of team 17 at 1:31

Do the math.
 

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Fail.

Solar I posted way before that at 12:32 then edited my template with Sojiro in it and removed where it said that there were two spots left.

You still wanna keep going?? Right there gave you six minutes to see it and go edit your template.

What J.T.?? Team 11 is full as well, I never said it wasn't.
 

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Perception╘Truth;5211786 said:
Look, teams are assigned by Citrus Cult, let him figure it all out. Also, Ubi, you might wanna check squad 11 cause I keep coming up with us being full.

Co-Signed.

Although, I was basically asked to join this RP on Team 17, but it's not that big of a deal.

Whatever my nigga Citrus decides'll be final, it is his RP.
 

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I agree to whatever spot I get by Citrus, though I lied about nothing.

Notice the difference between August 9th and 10th
 

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I don't care about the spot, I will defend myself when I'm accused of lying.

As for the RP, should be epic.
 

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You do care, before I said you lied you were going in on the subject I love it, but I'll stop and not be a hypocrite.

Besides that I feel great with two characters, but if things get nasty I have a character for the Syndicate in mind, but I doubt I'll use her.
 

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I simplyy pointed out an error, nothing more.

I might make a Sydicate character. Hint: looks like an ape and has multiple arms
 

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Does anyone have any idea of what point this RP will start? Graduation ceremony for academy, chunin exams, average day, etc. ?
 
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