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[keybladeprincess]

i have my reasons to be hateful but im happy this way i have my reason i need to know about my past ........ my name is not important to you but to me it means every thing to me my name is alexica and i will seek out the truth of my past






chapter 1:a road awakes

as I was walking thought the door I was having douits that I wasnt ready for becomig princess i mean my uncle mickey(or king mickey) choose me insteded of my 4 sisters. Im a leadeary princess that means im non a famous princess .when i was walking in twlight town i saw some one in a black robe and a blonie kid fighting i wacthed untill my left arm started to act up it was showing a key birth mark.i was suprined but i wanted to figered out the truth to my family so i left home and set out on to an jorney.so what ya'll think?:thumbsup: or:cursing:

 

[khchick]

Nice, but a little..short. Um..make it longer-GOOD!

 

[Katattack]

That's not a story. It's a plot fragment.

Present your idea boldly. I doubt that's all you have so far. Post it all. Seems to me you're afraid people will reject it.

Post it all and have faith in your own work.