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my poetry!!! (beleive it or not)



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Sterling_Silver

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okay, so me and my friend (who plays guitar) wrote this SONG (that's why it may sound a little off when reading it) about all the stuff that's happened over the last couple of years.... so here it is:

So many are gone,
so many more left,
so i would've thought,
but who would've guessed?

they'd never again see each other...

So while they all fight,
and while they all fall,
the biggest mistake was doing
nothing at all...

and now we will forever wonder...


Why did it come to this?
So ends our peaceful bliss,
When no one's left to resist,
how has it come to this?


Now it is past,
the lesson is learned,
with all they have lost,
just what have we earned?

and for the time, we're re-united

for those who do wait,
for help that won't come,
you know you're delusioned,
with no where to run....

and now their sufferings have been righted


Why did it come to this?
So ends our peaceful bliss...
When no one's left to resist,
how has it come to this?


(drum and guitar solo)



Why has it come to this?
You know you need this bliss,
and now that we've resisted,
we truly see we've missed it....

(the end, i guess) okay dudes and dudettes, DONT LAUGH!!!
i put ACTUAL THOUGHT into this, cause i couldnt get my mind off of how close my parents were to being put on the front lines, so.... yeah... btw, me and my friend are naming this song,"don't perceive the future, don't forget the past"

post what you think about it, and if you want to, rate it. :D
 
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Angel X

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I think that's pretty good, I'm glade someone in this forum shares the same interest as me :p

Anyway, I really like it :D:D:D
 

saratp

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it's okay. not to be mean but it;s okay but not the best thing I have ever herd.
 

Thelonepickle

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Wow, you're helpful. MUFFIN STUFFAH.

EW, KY. I thought you were SKA.

;-;

Anyway...
Uh...

*runs*
 

Sterling_Silver

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DUDE I GAVE UP ON POETRY A LONG TIME AGO!!! HOW LONG WERE YOU DIGGING THROUGH THE FREAKIN' DISCUSSION FORUM??! wth?! will some mod please delete this thread? XP MY GOSH PICKLE, JUST LET IT DIE!! for the love of golf, let it die!!!
 

Cloud_Unchained

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GUITAR/DRUM SOLO!!!

It sounds like an emo song.

^-^

How sweet Silver. Writing poetry. Like that. I could do better though.
 

Thelonepickle

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OH, OH! GUESS WHY I CAN'T LET THIS DIE, KY!

Cause I don't love golf.

XDDDDDDDD

Anyway. "Rite mre! Is rlly gud!"
 
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