My original character

[Cloud_31]

Inspired by the versus prince (kinda- the way he's looking back) I made up my own character. I only used A mechanical pencil and will be redoing them, and probably coloring the other. Please comment!

Kairu 1 by ~Cloud31 on deviantART

Kairu 2 by ~Cloud31 on deviantART

 

[Blue]

First one: Don't you think his nostril is a tiny bit too big?That's what I noticed right away
Anyway,the rest is really well-drawn.I like his eye and hari style v.v
Also,great shading!

Second one: The upper body is too big in comparison to his legs.Maybe you could try making the legs longer,or else shorten his upper body?

 

[Cloud_31]

yah i noticed the same things, which is why I'm revising them. I also only spent about 10 minutes on each one, which is apperent, but thanks

 

[Nelo Angelo]

Hey, not bad at all my friend. Good stuff. As Blue said, i agree with her.
Looks like he has a big head too in the second one.

 

[Fatal_Blade]

The hair is great for the first pic, however the second pics upper body is to big compared to the lower body, or vice versa.

 

[lonekyuubi]

Yea the nostril on the first pic, you might wanna fix that D:And fatalblade is right. The body is proportionally wrong.

 

[Antiquity]

First one's pretty good, just the nostril that's a little odd. Try making a little comma like shape for nostril if you want.

Second one looks good, and the whole leg thing.

Keep going!^^

 

[Zangetsu]

1st nose is little big

2nd great but upper part looks big for lower part