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I added some on in there, guys - I needed to make sure my chapter was long enough for you.
AND YOU CAN TALK, 212? YOU WERE SPAMMING ME AND LYING ABOUT ME AND B******G TO ME! YOU WERE BEING A SORE LOSER - YOU THINK I HAVEN'T HAD IT WITH YOU? HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IT IF I DID ALL THAT TO YOU?
Call down, people! Please! If you want to talk about it, do it on that thrend or PM each other.
But good Update!!!1
But good Update!!!1
Sorry for the delay, but the new chappy will be up by tonight. If I wasn't writing this from my PSP, I'd have almost done it by now.
wats going on with 212 and l337? it was getting good
Was baned, just re-subscribing.
Can't wait!
oh now i get it sorry im slow today
I know, I know - it's been a long wait, but the next chappy's finally up! This chappy will be one of the crucial parts of the entire fanfic, but why that is, you'll have to find out yourself!
As Sora and Goofy ran through the castle, Sora felt the strange feeling that Goofy wasn't the only person accompanying him. He felt they were being watched. And that whoever was watching them, they certainly didn't have any Elixers on them (he was getting very worn out from running). At least not for him, anyway. But then everything seemed to slow to a crawl. All time seemed to stop. And his vision became clouded, before another sight replaced it . . .
The once magnificent Castle Disney lay in ruins. The lovely garden hedge that once was frequently home to Goofy when he needed to catch some sleep, was nowhere in sight anymore. The flags that had adorned the castle's towers lay on the ground, tattered and burning. The sky was dark and stormy, with rain pouring down hard. Everywhere, weapons of all kinds - swords, slings, crossbows, javelins - littered the muddy, depressing soil, which had been painted with blood and gore. It was an overall despairing scene, devoid of any emotion, save that of sadness, of shock, of misery; those sorts of emotions. Only something truly evil would - could - have created such a scene and not even so much as think of doing it.
"It looks like we were too late for this world." It was the male knight from the previous vision. "And even if we weren't, I doubt we could've stopped it anyway."
"But most others are safe," added one of the female knights.
"Yet many more are in great danger," continued the other female knight.
"But they don't just want the worlds. They want the competition out of the way," said the male. "And if it weren't for Cid, there'd be hardly any left. Except for us. And the Puppet Master."
"I know," began the first female, but the rest of her words became unclear and hard to understand. The ruins were fading . . .
"SORA!" shouted Goofy.
"Wha . . . huh? Oh, sorry," was Sora's reply.
"Gwarsh, are you alright?"
"Of course, Goofy. Why?" but no sooner had Sora said this that he realised he was on the ground. Must've passed out from exhaustion, he thought. And as he got up, he heard heavy footsteps. Drawing his keyblade and bracing himself, Sora stood, ready to fight. But the keyblade clattered to the floor when a voice broke through the near-silence.
"Sora? Sora!" yelled Kairi.
"Kairi!" Sora shouted back. And as he did, he ran straight for her, and when they came together, he grabbed her and hugged her tightly; Kairi did the same. And though they both knew it was only a few seconds, it seemed like forever to them.
"I'm so glad I found you," said Sora.
"So am I, Sora."
"How sweet. It's a wonder niether of you have popped the question yet."
All of them turned to face where the voice had come from.
And there he was. Riku.
"Looks like the whole family's back together," beamed Sora.
"Actually," said Riku, "I've found another. One you must join, Sora . . ."
As Sora and Goofy ran through the castle, Sora felt the strange feeling that Goofy wasn't the only person accompanying him. He felt they were being watched. And that whoever was watching them, they certainly didn't have any Elixers on them (he was getting very worn out from running). At least not for him, anyway. But then everything seemed to slow to a crawl. All time seemed to stop. And his vision became clouded, before another sight replaced it . . .
The once magnificent Castle Disney lay in ruins. The lovely garden hedge that once was frequently home to Goofy when he needed to catch some sleep, was nowhere in sight anymore. The flags that had adorned the castle's towers lay on the ground, tattered and burning. The sky was dark and stormy, with rain pouring down hard. Everywhere, weapons of all kinds - swords, slings, crossbows, javelins - littered the muddy, depressing soil, which had been painted with blood and gore. It was an overall despairing scene, devoid of any emotion, save that of sadness, of shock, of misery; those sorts of emotions. Only something truly evil would - could - have created such a scene and not even so much as think of doing it.
"It looks like we were too late for this world." It was the male knight from the previous vision. "And even if we weren't, I doubt we could've stopped it anyway."
"But most others are safe," added one of the female knights.
"Yet many more are in great danger," continued the other female knight.
"But they don't just want the worlds. They want the competition out of the way," said the male. "And if it weren't for Cid, there'd be hardly any left. Except for us. And the Puppet Master."
"I know," began the first female, but the rest of her words became unclear and hard to understand. The ruins were fading . . .
"SORA!" shouted Goofy.
"Wha . . . huh? Oh, sorry," was Sora's reply.
"Gwarsh, are you alright?"
"Of course, Goofy. Why?" but no sooner had Sora said this that he realised he was on the ground. Must've passed out from exhaustion, he thought. And as he got up, he heard heavy footsteps. Drawing his keyblade and bracing himself, Sora stood, ready to fight. But the keyblade clattered to the floor when a voice broke through the near-silence.
"Sora? Sora!" yelled Kairi.
"Kairi!" Sora shouted back. And as he did, he ran straight for her, and when they came together, he grabbed her and hugged her tightly; Kairi did the same. And though they both knew it was only a few seconds, it seemed like forever to them.
"I'm so glad I found you," said Sora.
"So am I, Sora."
"How sweet. It's a wonder niether of you have popped the question yet."
All of them turned to face where the voice had come from.
And there he was. Riku.
"Looks like the whole family's back together," beamed Sora.
"Actually," said Riku, "I've found another. One you must join, Sora . . ."
Hey! Like the new chappy? I feel it's gonna be the best yet! And also, do you know who makes sigs? I think we need an official sig. Not to mention a fanclub . . .
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Great story!
Glad you like it!
bring on the next scene.
Cool! I'm gonna start a fanclub and have an official sig made for the fanfic. How 'bout it?
Cool new chapter!
well..its erm alright? theres so many gramatical errors and not to mention there is no paragraph allignment which makes it really hard to read and to understand..you have a few plot holes too..but its progressing with each one i guess..
ERRORS?! Ah well. Don't worry, any questions about the plot will be answered eventually . . .
kool fic write more
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