Fanfiction ► My Kingdom Hearts story - *spoilers*

[L337 kybldmstr]

Here is a story on Kingdom Hearts. Yes, it is called Kingdom Hearts 3, and yes it follows on from where KH2 left off. It also takes into account (though perhaps loosely) the secret ending in KH2. Both the KH2 ending movie and its secret ending are viewable at YouTube - just do a search. Note that this story will be taken in stages - in three acts, to be precise - but storywriting does take time, so if it doesn't say "end of act" or something like that, it ain't done yet! Please feel free to comment. Oh, and yes, there could be spoilers.

Anyhow, I reckon you've done enough waiting. So here's chapter 1:

Kingdom Hearts 3
By L337 kybldmstr​

It was a bright, clear and sunny day. But Sora stood on the beach, staring into the horizon, not noticing the sky, but thinking about the letter he, Riku and Kairi had recieved the day before:

Dear Sora,

Hope this gets to you. Anyway, we need you back at the Castle or we're all in trouble! Can't say any more, in case this message gets intercepted.​

Your friend Mickey​

What did Mickey mean by that, Sora thought. Why was he worried that the message could get intercepted? And what had made Mickey write that letter in the first place? But at that moment, a voice broke into his thoughts.
"Mind if I join you?" said Kairi.
"Huh? Oh, no, you can stay with me."
"Okay. So," Kairi said, "what are you doing out here all by yourself?"
"Just thinking about that letter we got," replied Sora.
"Yeah, it sounded like Castle Disney was in trouble."
"Probably is," Sora spoke, "but that's not why you're talking to me, is it?"
"Well," Kairi replied, "I'm here because . . ." but she was interrupted by yet another voice.
"Well, well, well, if it isn't one lovely couple."
"Riku!" Sora and Kairi both shouted at him at the same time.
"Well, if the size 50 shoes fit, Sora . . ." Riku responded calmly.
"Size 50 . . . hey! Those are my favourite shoes! Don't diss them!" yelled Sora back angrily.
"Hey, calm down, it was just a joke," laughed Riku.
"Yeah," Sora thought, annoyed, "just like that paopu fruit thing from a year ago was a joke."
"Look," spoke up Riku, I'm here to tell you we have visitors."
"Where are they?" asked Kairi excitedly.
"Just follow me, you two, and you'll see."
So off they went, from the shore and onto the other side of the island. But Sora stopped. The island seemed to be fading, and something replacing it . . .

 

[LadyKairi_19]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

whoa... interesting.... but shouldnt this be posted in the Fan Fiction Section? Its really good so far

 

[Kbdoublewielder]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

yea this is cool.

 

[amurakansen]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

dude...this isnt kh3, its the secret ending to kingdom hearts 2......

 

[Little_Red]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

hey this is pretty interesting, i was thinking about writing my own. And they did look like woman didn't they? And yeah this should be in the fanfic section. Please PM the title and stuff if you put it in the fanfiction section.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

dude...this isnt kh3, its the secret ending to kingdom hearts 2......

Instead of thinking about what I've used, think about what might happen next . . . and yeah, I guess it should be in Fan Fiction, but I just kinda thought more people would see it if it was here.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Re: My Kingdom Hearts story - *possible spoilers*

Sorry but I've gotta run. More tomorrow in Australia!

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry to triple-post, but I'm back! Now my fanfic will be split into chapters, so here's chapter 2!

A fully armoured figure wielding what looked like a large, jagged key, stood in front of a large, dead creature. A Heartless. Before him lay a village in ruins, the one that the big Heartless had overrun. The knightly figure looked around him, and saw two others, with similar weapons, approach him. Anyone looking at these two would have guessed correctly they were young women. The three knights came together and moved forward towards another three giant keys. But these were different to each other. One had a gold handle and a silver blade, with a crown shape carved into it; another was black, but otherwise similar to the first one; the other had a large, sharp point on the end. The three knights each took one. As they did, the male knight noticed something in the distance. The others turned to look at what he was looking at. Something was moving, moving towards them. It looked human, but in the haze it was hard to tell . . .

"Sora! Snap out of it!"
"What?" answered Sora, rather confused. Strange, he thought.
"Well don't just stand there, hurry up!" shouted Riku.
"Sorry." He started walking again. But who were they, Sora asked himself in his head. And where was that place? What was coming towards them? Did it have something to do with Mickey's letter? Oh well, it was probably nothing.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

And now chapter 3!


They got to the other side of the island. Sora and Kairi followed Riku as he showed them to an area near where a paopu fruit tree plantation was. And in front of them was a man.
"Well, this is our visitor," said Riku.
"Cid?"
"That'd be me," he answered.
"How come you're here?" Sora asked.
"Two reasons. One, 'cause I'm taking you for a flight in my ship. Two, so I can give you that ship."
"Where are you taking us?" asked Riku.
"Where you want to go."
"Hmmmm, how about Castle Disney?" said Sora.
"All right then. Castle Disney it is!" smiled Cid.
But to Sora, there was something about that smile that didn't seem right. The fact that Cid had just arrived here to give them a Gummi Ship and didn't mention anything else didn't add up either. There was something going on here, or maybe it was just him . . . but getting to Castle Disney was important. And there was no denying that. So slowly, but cautiously, he boarded the ship with Riku, Kairi and Cid.

The flight didn't seem bad; in fact it seemed quite good. Cid had given Sora and company some chocolate biscuits, telling them "the flight's gonna take some time." However, all of them were quiet for some reason - one that they knew was there, but they couldn't quite place it. But as they realised, to their misfortune, all things are explained in the end. It began when the ship abruptly stopped.
"What the hell was that?" shouted Riku.
"Ohhhhhh . . . just, errrrr, technical difficulties."
Riku suddenly yawned loudly, obviously unable to control it.
"Sorry," he explained, "but I'm a bit tired. Maybe I could rest my eyes for a couple of minutes . . ." which was a bit understandable, considering some time had passed since they'd left the island. But it hadn't even been "a couple of minutes" when he was snoring very, very, VERY loudly. And it was then Kairi said she was feeling a bit dozy herself.
"Maybe . . . if I just . . . have a . . . quick nap . . ." but no sooner had she let those words leave her mouth, that she was out like a light.
Sensing something was wrong, Sora asked Cid "What's with them?"
Cid just laughed and replied, "They're fine . . . for now."
"What's that supposed to . . . those biscuits! You . . ."
"Drugged you? Well, you took your sweet time figuring that one out."
But as Cid said that, Sora himself began to feel tired. However, he hadn't been hungry then, and only had three. But even three had had a strong effect on Sora. He struggled to move, but he was too weak. And with that, came a wave of pain, and then blackness.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Chapter four guys!

When Sora awoke, he found himself in a dark, circular room. He got up and took out his trusty keyblade - a large key used as a sword - which he never left home without. Actually, he couldn't leave home without it; several times he'd tried to chuck it out the window to see if it would warp back to him, and every single time it hadn't even made it through the window. At first he couldn't remember what had happened. But then it started coming back; the drugged biscuits, Cid's newfound evil laugh, his friends under the biscuit's effects. But why hadn't Cid killed them? Surely dying the same death as the others would have been a good enough trade? Why was he all evil anyway? Well, time to look for my friends, I 'spose, he thought.

Sora took stock of his position; the room was large and round, with curtains all around, except for a small gap where a door was. Seeing this, Sora rushed for the door, but it was locked. Then, remembering his keyblade, he drew it and tried smashing it. To his surprise, it gave way completely, becoming nothing more than a pile of splinters on the white marble floor. Ahead of Sora was a long corridor. Not bothering to think of the possible risks he might be taking, Sora ran out through into the corridor.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

And now Chapter 5!

Meanwhile . . .

In another place, a large figure wearing a black cloak was busy watching Sora. Interesting, he thought. So he is the Master of Light. He is fortunate, I will give him that. But what of his male friend, the Master of Twilight? Hmmm . . . and it was at that moment, when a voice entered his mind;
"This world is secure."
"Good, my right-hand. Any difficulties?"
"We are all safe. And nothing serious."
"And what would that mean, exactly?"
"The residents, shall we say, didn't want what was in their best interests."
"I see. That was expected," the cloacked person said. "But was the other goal a success?"
"Yes."
"Excellent. Continue to impress me like this and you will most certainly surpass even I."
"Then I shall leave you to your brilliant mind."
"Understood." The figure turned his thoughts back to Riku. When light and darkness are combined, twilight is formed. But perhaps the two can still be separated . . .

"Donald?"
"Yes me!" replied Court Wizard Donald.
"What are you doing here?" asked Kairi.
"Saving your life, that's what!"
"How?"
"Well, Kairi," answered Donald, "Goofy and I just happened to see you floating in space. Be happy we were passing by."
"Where were you headed?"
"To your island!"
"Where are the others, then?"
"I don't know where they are, the ship malfunctioned!"
"Then we'd better start searching, Donald!"
Donald merely nodded and drew his favourite rod: the Save the Queen rod.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry I just posted for the seventh time in a row, but how do you like my fanfic so far?

 

[Jax-Oh1]

Coooooooooollllllllll!

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Great! I'll start on the next chapter once I have a few more replies!

 

[kevlexcruz]

Get to d next chapter. It's good.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Guess I'd better, huh? Well, yeah I'll get started.

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Sorry guys, the next chappy won't be up tonight, but it will definitely be here tomorrow. So you'll have to wait twelve hours at least for the next chappy. Again, sorry!

 

[212]

Oh man......the story was getting good......

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Okay, the next chappy will be up today. It was just I got REALLY p****d at a certain someone yesterday morning because they were being an absolute w****r to me (glares at sora212). I just didn't feel like doing anything after that. But the new chapter will be up today.

p.s. if you want to know why, go to that ridiculously pointless thread called "L337 kybldmstr (good things)" started by sora212. It's in Forum Insanity (which is exactly what I think the thread is - and not in a good way at all).

 

[L337 kybldmstr]

Okay, here's the next chappy!

Sora ran through countless rooms, corridors and steps, but without any success. Eventually, out of breath, Sora sank to his knees in a round room - the one he'd started in.
"Gwarsh! Hey Sora!"
"Goofy? I'd recognise that voice anywhere!"
Though Goofy had found himself in the same room as Sora, in actual fact Goofy hadn't started there - when the Gummi Ship crashed, Goofy explained he had found himself on top of a very high embattlement - at the top of the castle, in fact. He then waited for the very slight aching to go away, got up, slipped backwards on a conveniently-placed bannana peel, fell of the embattlement, hit a staircase 50 metres down, tumbled down it, hit a wall at the end he was heading for and fell all the way down, into the moat, was knocked up 70 metres by an alligator, landed on the small drawbridge that was almost all the way up, hit a curved wall ahead at an angle and into a corridor, ricoched off the corridor walls and into the door, and slid all the way accross the room, to where he was now. To be honest, I think it was a wonder Goofy didn't break every bone in his body, and even then he would have been the luckiest person ever alive. Run the sequence through your head and you'll see what I mean.

When Sora asked what Goofy was doing, he replied, "Well, Donald and I were coming to pick you up . . ."
"You were coming for us? But Cid came to us!" Sora exclaimed.
"Gwarsh, Sora, I never knew about Cid coming for you!"
"You didn't? Figures."
"Anyways, Sora," Goofy continued, "we were on our way to your island when we saw you floating around in space. So Donald waves his rod of his, and this huge air bubble came around you and the ship. But then we lost control of the ship and crashed here.”
"So then why does the King need us at Castle Disney?"
"Gwarsh, Sora, I don't know."
"Oh well," said Sora, "we may as well find the others, eh?"
"Sounds like a plan to me!" And with that, they headed off into God knows what part of the castle. Little did they know, that they were being watched . . .

Elsewhere, two cloaked figures, the one who had spoken to the three knights, and another one, were in conversation.
"So he is with us now?" inquired the first unknown.
"Considering what was in his heart, it took time. But yes, he is with us now," answered the other unknown.
The first unknown, who had his eye on an orb which showed him what he wanted to see that was for real, nodded and said, "Then shall we deal with the intruders?"
"No. I will," was the second unknown's response.
"Then do as you must. I will take care of . . . other matters," said the first unknown, still eyeing the orb. And with that, the second unknown walked into a large, black orb and vanished.