ok this is my first fan fic, and it probably will have some spelling errors since i'm still learning the language. also, i hate using things like he said, and then she said, so i used colours to represent the characters, tell me if you like this technique or not. the first chapter is a bit short and rusty, but it will make a good story, and i'm planning to animate it when i'm good enough.i haven't played KH2 so i don't really know if it contains spoilers.the story begins when they got a letter at the ending of KH2.
Sora=blue Kairi=magenta Riku=darkorchid jiminy=green
My friends, I’m afraid that the evil we once fought together, is back again.
I noticed that the stars are going out again, I’ve sent my men on it to investigate, and they returned with terrible news. The heartless have returned, along with strange creatures, going trough the keyholes as we speak. Someone must’ve opened them. I’ve send Chip and Dale in our best vessel to pick you up. Donald, Goofy and myself will go ahead and investigate. Good luck.
Mickey“The heartless are back?”
“They must be controlled by the one opening the keyholes”
“But who? And what are these other creatures?”They ponder and discuss till nightfall.
“we should go home, I don’t think they’ll show up for us today”
“Yeah, you’re right”
“Look!”
Kairi points at the sky, where a meteor shower was about to begin.
“There’s something coming towards here!”
A shadow was flying towards them, mysterious until Sora recognized the shape
“It’s a gummiship!”
A large, red gummiship landed before their feet, and a door opened, Sora heard a familiar voice.
“Welcome aboard, guys”
“Jiminy!”
“Hello Sora, good to see you again, and you must be Kairi and Riku.
Name’s Jiminy Cricket, at your service, I’ll be the one who will record the adventures that will take place.”
“Nice to meet you.”
“Are you the one who’s piloting this thing?”
“Oh no, I’m not a pilot. Let me introduce you to Chip and Dale, they are our pilots.”Two seats turned around and there were two small chipmunks in the chairs.
“Aww, they’re so cute”
o_o o_o o_o
“Err.. ok, let’s take off.”
The gummiship flew away into the night, carrying our heroes to the start of their new adventure.
i know it's not the best story, but it will be better once i animated it. be honest about it so i can learn how to make a good story.
Sora=blue Kairi=magenta Riku=darkorchid jiminy=green
My friends, I’m afraid that the evil we once fought together, is back again.
I noticed that the stars are going out again, I’ve sent my men on it to investigate, and they returned with terrible news. The heartless have returned, along with strange creatures, going trough the keyholes as we speak. Someone must’ve opened them. I’ve send Chip and Dale in our best vessel to pick you up. Donald, Goofy and myself will go ahead and investigate. Good luck.
Mickey“The heartless are back?”
“They must be controlled by the one opening the keyholes”
“But who? And what are these other creatures?”They ponder and discuss till nightfall.
“we should go home, I don’t think they’ll show up for us today”
“Yeah, you’re right”
“Look!”
Kairi points at the sky, where a meteor shower was about to begin.
“There’s something coming towards here!”
A shadow was flying towards them, mysterious until Sora recognized the shape
“It’s a gummiship!”
A large, red gummiship landed before their feet, and a door opened, Sora heard a familiar voice.
“Welcome aboard, guys”
“Jiminy!”
“Hello Sora, good to see you again, and you must be Kairi and Riku.
Name’s Jiminy Cricket, at your service, I’ll be the one who will record the adventures that will take place.”
“Nice to meet you.”
“Are you the one who’s piloting this thing?”
“Oh no, I’m not a pilot. Let me introduce you to Chip and Dale, they are our pilots.”Two seats turned around and there were two small chipmunks in the chairs.
“Aww, they’re so cute”
o_o o_o o_o
“Err.. ok, let’s take off.”
The gummiship flew away into the night, carrying our heroes to the start of their new adventure.
i know it's not the best story, but it will be better once i animated it. be honest about it so i can learn how to make a good story.
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