Ugh... seriously dislike the name... if you can think of a better one, please let me know. Anyway, I have written this for two reasons. 1) Because I really feel like being creative today and 2) It's my birthday.
CHAPTER ONE
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CHAPTER ONE
At first, everything was blurred. Even the figures around him were just white blobs to his eyes. Jake tried to wave his hands in front of his face but found they had been strapped down. He heard voices all around him, but could not make out what they were saying. He struggled to free himself from the binds around his arms and legs, which seemed to have gained the attention of one of the blurs. He then felt a sharp pain in his arm, after which he fell off to sleep again.
After what seemed like a deep sleep, Jake had awoken, but this time his vision had cleared and he was no longer strapped down, but he felt stiff and sore all over. His arms felt like lead as he tried to lift them. He looked around the room to survey his new surroundings. He was in what looked to be quite a small room, but well-kept. There were a few drawers lined up against the wall and charts were lining the wall on one side of the room. The door leading out was on the opposite side of the bed he was in. There were a few insturments lying around which looked like they were used for medical reasons. This alone gave him the impression that he was in a hospital bed, but he did not know why. He checked himself only to find his chest, left leg and right arm in bandages and a scar on his cheek.
Feling a bit scared, he lifted himself off the bed and tried to stand on the ground, but fell in a heap on the floor. Jake struggled to get himself back up using one of the drawers as a support and managed to get himself on his own two feet. He tried to move himself away from his support, but almost fell over again. Instead, he tried t refresh his memory, in particular how the hell he got here and who did this to him. He tried his hardest, but could not find it in his memory. He didn't even remember being hurt.
"Where the hell am I?" he said aloud, but of course, no one heard him. He pushed himself over to the door and collapsed just short of it. he dragged himself the rest of the way and pulled himself towards the door by the handle and slowly turned the handle. As he turned the handle, he heard footsteps coming towards the door. He froze on the spot and listened. The footsteps came closer and closer until they stopped at the door. Jake slowly let go of the handle while this person was approaching and silently lay back against the wall.
The whoever-it-was slowly turned the handle on the door and held the door slightly ajar, then swung the door open , but did not come into the room. Jake could not get a good look at the person, but he could hear her swearing. It was obviously a womans voice. The woman stood at the door just out of Jakes view. He heard her dialling a number into what he could only assume was a mobile phone and wait for a moment.
"Come on, pick up goddamnit!" he could hear the woman muttering. "Ah, Mr. Carlson! ... no, he is not here... it doesn't matter, the fact remains that he is not here... no, you said that..! Tch, fine!" the woman put the phone away and punched the door. "Dammit, how could he get away?" The woman walked out again and closed the door behind her. Jake heard the woman cursing and swearing until both her footsteps and voice died away.
Jake had been left with a lot to think about while he waited for the numbness in his legs to subside; who was she? Who was she talking to? What did she want with him and how would he escape? All these thoughts flooded his mind as he planned his escape from this hospital...
After what seemed like a deep sleep, Jake had awoken, but this time his vision had cleared and he was no longer strapped down, but he felt stiff and sore all over. His arms felt like lead as he tried to lift them. He looked around the room to survey his new surroundings. He was in what looked to be quite a small room, but well-kept. There were a few drawers lined up against the wall and charts were lining the wall on one side of the room. The door leading out was on the opposite side of the bed he was in. There were a few insturments lying around which looked like they were used for medical reasons. This alone gave him the impression that he was in a hospital bed, but he did not know why. He checked himself only to find his chest, left leg and right arm in bandages and a scar on his cheek.
Feling a bit scared, he lifted himself off the bed and tried to stand on the ground, but fell in a heap on the floor. Jake struggled to get himself back up using one of the drawers as a support and managed to get himself on his own two feet. He tried to move himself away from his support, but almost fell over again. Instead, he tried t refresh his memory, in particular how the hell he got here and who did this to him. He tried his hardest, but could not find it in his memory. He didn't even remember being hurt.
"Where the hell am I?" he said aloud, but of course, no one heard him. He pushed himself over to the door and collapsed just short of it. he dragged himself the rest of the way and pulled himself towards the door by the handle and slowly turned the handle. As he turned the handle, he heard footsteps coming towards the door. He froze on the spot and listened. The footsteps came closer and closer until they stopped at the door. Jake slowly let go of the handle while this person was approaching and silently lay back against the wall.
The whoever-it-was slowly turned the handle on the door and held the door slightly ajar, then swung the door open , but did not come into the room. Jake could not get a good look at the person, but he could hear her swearing. It was obviously a womans voice. The woman stood at the door just out of Jakes view. He heard her dialling a number into what he could only assume was a mobile phone and wait for a moment.
"Come on, pick up goddamnit!" he could hear the woman muttering. "Ah, Mr. Carlson! ... no, he is not here... it doesn't matter, the fact remains that he is not here... no, you said that..! Tch, fine!" the woman put the phone away and punched the door. "Dammit, how could he get away?" The woman walked out again and closed the door behind her. Jake heard the woman cursing and swearing until both her footsteps and voice died away.
Jake had been left with a lot to think about while he waited for the numbness in his legs to subside; who was she? Who was she talking to? What did she want with him and how would he escape? All these thoughts flooded his mind as he planned his escape from this hospital...
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