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Fanfic! :DD I remember that! (even though i didn't read all of it... DD:)

Anywhoooo~ I really like your art! 'Tis very cool. :D The Naminé picture is neat, but I like the KHAD picture, too. (especially the coloured picture of Hikaru) And the coloured version of Hikaru's keyblade looks really good! As for criticism... both of your pictures, more the KHAD picture than the Naminé one, look stiff and unnatural. There's also a couple of parts where the proportions are off. Hikaru's neck also looks wonky with the proportions of the rest of his body, like the neck wants to be completely realistic and not stylized (I guess...?) but the rest of his body is already stylized so it looks weird. Thinner neck? I dunno? XD; The two other characters, who's names currently escape me, also have weird fists. The hands look really small and awkward or something along those lines... 8D; Anywho! To cure stiff poses (after lots and lots of drawing), quick figure drawing is your best friend. Posemaniacs is a really good site for that, though there's other resources for that sort of thing.

Block of text is not fun. D: Sorries. But I hope this helps! :]
 

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Haha, I'm glad somebody recognises it. ;D

Thanks for the comment. Poses are definitely something I'm trying to work on, so I'll keep your crit in mind next time. :)
And I may need to try the quick figure drawing too, sounds like it'll help. :D
 
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