Man I'm stuck.

[Crimson Crashing]

I don't know what's wrong with me lately, I end up making then deleting a crap ton of unfinished sigs 'cuz I just get stuck and don't know what to do next.

Anyways this is what I have so far.
Any help please?

EDIT: I'm also sharpening this up, so don't worry about that.

 

[Eric]

Establishing a good background with some flow might help. It could use some more colors too, probably yellow would do it good.

 

[Davey]

moar head room.
he seems smooshed on the bottom of the sig. plus then you'll have more room to move around and work with.