Luxord vs. Namine - Rapbattle



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Venx

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Since I don't believe that the masked tournament will ever start, I wanted to do a rapbattle between 2 KH Charackter anyway. Maybe some people didn't have an idea how it would work and wanna join when they see this. That's why I'm doing it for now with some charackters that probably no one picked for the tournament. If some people enjoy this, I might doing it more often.

Luxord:
Let me start the game, Namine. Show my your cards
can't see the future, but my hand's saying that you have no chance
like friends. You made 3, but they forgot you in no time
to be honest, nobody cares when I'm crushing your whole life
for you I don't even need some luck while gambling
could roxas tell me if you suck dick like you suck at painting?
listen we never met before, but I always wanted to this
because pimpslapping your face, looks like an Orga-exclusiv

Namine:
Crushing and slapping? You're a try hard and not really evil
Wouldn't talk about sucking when I'm looking like a village people
All I need is a paper and a pen to tear you apart
You didn't hit me, cuz your "Hand" is made out of cards
And That coat doesn't fit you, it makes you look like you're dark
You're not a tough gambler Luxord, all you want is a heart
Your luck won't help you whem I'm sitting in my chair and spitting rhymes
we both vanished, but at least I didn't die

Luxord:
Shut your mouth, witch! I roll a 6 and you're burning
I don't need my hands, when my cards striking you you need a surgeon
I will show you respect, it's time to face your death
but see it positive, red would look great on your white dress

Namine:
Until I draw my dress red & white, this ain't gonna happen
according to my newest picture you're the one facing death and
before you can even hurt me, you should try to reach my level
and then show me how to kill with your unpractical weapon
 

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i noticed you haven't made any more of these, most likely due to the lack of responses. i never really got around to reading this until now but its actually pretty good as far as flow is.

some lines are cringe worthy, like namine's general dialogue along with "suck dick" and "pimp slapping" from luxord but i think if you work on it, you could have some great material.
 

Venx

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Didn't have much time or motivation to do more of these. I was busy doing the lion king storys who are way more fun to write, but maybe I'll do another battle in the future.
 

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that's the spirit. hmu when you've got free time and feeling inspired
 
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