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Little poem that I made up



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I_Am_Genesis

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Take Me Away

Take me away to another place
Away from the lies, this life...
Anywhere

Take me away to a place of danger
I want to take risks, I want thrill
I know that in dire times
You'll always be there for me
A place of adventure

Take me away to twilights's end
Descent into the place of eternal night
It might seem like all's gone
With our eyes useless
Then we'll notice the coruscating stars coming out
Shining, playing
A place of hope

Take me away to a place of equality
Love with no hate
Peace with no war
Smiles with no crying
Sky could be our limit
I long for a warm blanket of joy
A place of together

Be my knight in shining armour
My hero in the sunset

Joy, not sorrow
Happiness, not pain

Take me away to another place
Away from the lies, this life...
Anywhere
Just don't leave me here....
<3

So, that's it...I hope it's ok:embarassed: Constructive critisism is very appreciated. I doubt this is real poetry, it's just seemed kinda poetic, to me.
 
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