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Auron0521

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I look Up,
See a Light,
I Reach for It,
And It slips away.

I follow It,
Drawn to the Light,
Grasping Desperately,
For I am Afraid,
Fearful of the Dark.

When, Finally,
I take Hold of the Light,
I look Down,
See My Shadow has Grown,
For Darkness Feeds on Light,
And Light on Darkness.

How, then,
Can I have only Light?
I try to Run,
But of course,
The Shadow follows.

If I were to Give In,
To Accept them Both,
What would Happen?

I ask Myself this,
But find no Answer.
And how can I,
When asking Myself?
 

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:3 i like it, gives me that riku vibe (not sure if its kh inspired tho) its easy to read for me like that other one to .

i like light and dark parallels x] not sure why and this one was done very well.
 
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KingdomKey

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Had to read this twice, to understand it better. I mean, I know the obvious that its "Light and Dark" But, paying extra attention to the words, helped me see, what I was missing from before. I gotta agree with Gram, on this one. Definitely gives it, a Riku related feeling, to it. How I missed that, the first time, I tried reading it, I don't know, though.
 
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