Fanfiction ► Life's Struggle..

[Ziphiroth]

no... in a cut scene... sephiroth is flying...

 

[Mr.]

no... in a cut scene... sephiroth is flying...

Actually, yeah, in Showdown of Fate 2, he hangs in the air for a second...

 

[dark_dutchman]

i live in EU remember? i don't what happens in KH2. and watch out Mr. you're on the edge of spoiling

 

[Mr.]

i live in EU remember? i don't what happens in KH2. and watch out Mr. you're on the edge of spoiling

OH NOEZ D:
NO, IGNORE WHAT I SAID.
Showdown of Fate is the only Showdown of Fate there is. <.<
>.>

 

[Katattack]

I've only read the first couple chapters of your fic, I admit, but I think it's pretty good.

I don't have much time to keep up with many fanfictions, but this one seems pretty good.

I do think that if you haven't already, you should consider writing in past tense. I find that it gives more control over a fic. I think you'll find you can write better descriptions and such.

Just give it a try if you feel like it.

 

[Ziphiroth]

ill try Kata... ill see what i can do and too all of the rest of you.... GO TO HELLL!!!!!! lol jk


i hope you get hit by a fugin bus

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva]

ill try Kata... ill see what i can do and too all of the rest of you.... GO TO HELLL!!!!!! lol jk


i hope you get hit by a fugin bus

....ok....it seems that since ive been gone you crazy levels have rised

 

[Ziphiroth]

gee KH_fan... thanks... i love you too lol

 

[KH_Fan_4_eva]

gee KH_fan... thanks... i love you too lol

lol...................aww

 

[Mr.]

ill try Kata... ill see what i can do and too all of the rest of you.... GO TO HELLL!!!!!! lol jk


i hope you get hit by a fugin bus

I hope you get humped by a mad elephant and have hybrid children who like to hump things and get mad cow disease.

>:3

*bumps on-topic for good measure*

 

[Ziphiroth]

lol Mr. thanks i love you too but KH_Fan more

 

[Mr.]

lol Mr. thanks i love you too but KH_Fan more

O__o

*takes out notebook and jots down:*

NOTE-TO-SELF: Ziphiroth...is...very...gay...

Oh, and good chapter, just make it longer and better.

Yeah. .__. *on-topic*

 

[dark_dutchman]

rrrriiiiiggght >.> i'll just go now *sneaks off so that the bi/gay people don't say i love u*

 

[Ziphiroth]

*tackles and lick Dutchman in the face* HAHA!

(back on topic for good measure )
anyways..... lol thanks for the help Mr... the "constructive" *coughflamingcough* critisizem lol

 

[dark_dutchman]

*being on topic for the same reason*

can't wait for the new chapters

 

[Mr.]

*tackles and lick Dutchman in the face* HAHA!

(back on topic for good measure )
anyways..... lol thanks for the help Mr... the "constructive" *coughflamingcough* critisizem lol

I've made some enemies, including TSora, Sacred_Sora, and some other people....
*coughcoughmaybeevenamodcoughcough*

Meh, screw those two retarded premium n00blets. >__>

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*NOT TALKING ABOUT THE MODS* ;~;

You just gotta improve a little bit, Ziphiroth.
Make it longer, better.

 

[dark_dutchman]

it doesn't matter if they're mods because they can't ban you just because they don't like you.

 

[Ziphiroth]

True Mr. I'm working on the new chap as we speak...

 

[Mr.]

it doesn't matter if they're mods because they can't ban you just because they don't like you.

No, TSora and S_S aren't mods.
(If they were, I would leave the site. D=<)

I'm hated by a mod. D:

 

[Ziphiroth]

if you were going to leave this site i got one for you! lol