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Zetsumi said:Ah, I see my crusade against really illeterate people who think they can write fanfictions has been carried on in my absense. DS and Mr, I congratulate you on your choice of n00b to pwn.
Look, Zipper-man, or whatever the crap your name is, the fact is, your fanfiction is simply a self-promoting load of bovine excretement that can't survive without your n00b friends bumping your thread. It has no clear storyline, it's basically a cannon story, with cannon characters, and shows no signs of -any- attempt at originality. Simply put, You Fail.
Now please, if you want to continue it, go ahead. It's not my problem. Simply rest assured, however, that it is very, very -bad-.
If you want to see how to write a -real- fanfic, click the link in my sig.
dark_dutchman said:i saw that, it evolving into a great fic
Do you notice, Zetsumi, how n00b fanfictions get lots of attention, yet literate start-up fanfictions (like mine, for example), haven't even gotten past the first page with two LONG chapters and a third LONG one coming up?
It's...strange, to say the least. O__o
dark_dutchman said:it's because the people are too lazy to read the long chapters. if you cut them in smaller chapters and post them with a day between them. if you do that lazy people will read it and it looks like you write every night.
P.S: nice chap Zi
True_Separation said:DAMN.
Mr. what do you worry about? Your fanfic's so original and good, but some people need something attractive so they want to open it, that's all
\beats me, if i'm wrong/
\face it, the truth for meh/
dunno if dark dutchman is right though, basically i like novels, but mehh, people somethings got bored if it's too descriptive and long, except if they have something attractive inside (even The Da Vinci Code, meh I haven't read that, why i care?)
\this previous paragraph didn't come from an official pro's wise words/
now Mr. haven't you commented the previous chapter?
not really improves in my opinion, but i think the story is clear, yeah yeah
\BAKA!/
Ziphiroth said:ill do my best Mr. but whats the review on the last chap. from me? lol how was it? better than the begining?
dark_dutchman said:i don't think that Sephiroth can even fly.
*imagines Sephiroth flying in cirkels because he has only one wing*