less is more ^_^

[xx kairi xx]

looking back at some of the other signatures iv made, i found that i always crowd the canvas :/
This is my first one in a while and iv decided to keep it as simple as possible. its also the first time iv used hue's and dodging.

anyways, could u CnC meh latest peice? ^_^

 

[Lancelot]

I'd say you've got some nice things happening there, it's just a pity the stock is a bit LQ. Try sharpening/smudging it a bit to fix it =/
I also think you should scale it down too, if you plan to keep it that way, so what there is of emptiness isn't as noticeable

Aside from that, very well done ^^

 

[xx kairi xx]

thanks ^_^
I'll fix it up like you suggested

EDIT:
bit better?