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Fanfiction ► La Compilation (Kingdom Hearts: AU Infinities One Shot Series)



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SuperSephiroth15

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Alright, I have read all of your stories posted in this thread.

I must say, I liked the Lexaeus v.s. Riku Fanfic. Well written with some questionable grammar errors still.

The Fanfic of Cloud and Aerith, I loved to pieces; this one was my favorite from you.

Finally, the Roxas & Ollette fanfic I enjoyed, but not as much as the previous fanfic above.

Overall, I love your writing style. You have a good sense of detail and an easy way of hooking your reader at the beginning of your stories. Good job !
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Wow this stuff is really good! In some parts you need an editor. But it was really nice!
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

this is pretty interesting... i would say my favorite would be the riku vs. lexaeus oneshot, i dunno, guess i just like all your fight scenes...-_-

and if you need a commenter just PM me like before...

hoping to see more from ya amigo!!!
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Hey Ziz, the fic of Roxas/Ollete was great! It was cool how the story followed the song like it did in The Lion King and kudos to making Axel a darker charecter, it makes him alot cooler. Can't wait 'till Doomsday is finished, about how much longer 'till it's ready?
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Read a couple of the now ^_^

As i have told you, I am not an expert on fanfics and have never made a fanfic myself so my feedback wont be much of a feedback... All i can say is that I like your writing style. HAve taken a look at some other fanfics and there are too much "blah blah blah" in many fanfics that makes me loose intetrest. It wasn't much of that here so it didn't get boring.

I'll probably read more from you in the future.
 
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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Good work here.

Now rep me >:[

Haha jk.

But really.

Anyways, only complaint is that you spelled "blonde" "blond"
 
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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

So Riku is going to survive whatever happens and get an uber-badass black suit? With Sephiroth-hair?

Fuck yeah, he'll be like Yazoo but hotter :D. Fuckin' muscles and everything.

The one shot will eventually be posted.
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Fuck yeah, he'll be like Yazoo but hotter :D. Fuckin' muscles and everything.

The one shot will eventually be posted.

Hellz yeah, is he also gonna get the pimped gun that shoots out his enemies weakness?
 

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Re: La Compilation des Histoires de Reino Corazones

Gah, Ziz! You're keeping me on pins and needles....

And you want to hurry, or Org_42 will beat you to a Riku/Kelsie one shot!
 
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