Fanfiction ► La Compilation (Kingdom Hearts: AU Infinities One Shot Series)

[madammina]

DANG! Org said pretty much what I want to say.

Er... I wish I could say something original, the only thing would be the overuse of Japanese honorifics, but it did show Zexion's and Selphie's differance.

I liked the thing on Coptic, the Russian title, and I didn't get the mate thing, but I did like this fic!

 

[Azrael]

DANG! Org said pretty much what I want to say.

Er... I wish I could say something original, the only thing would be the overuse of Japanese honorifics, but it did show Zexion's and Selphie's differance.

I liked the thing on Coptic, the Russian title, and I didn't get the mate thing, but I did like this fic!

I nixed the Japanese honorifics and replaced them with something more familiar to the audience.

Coptic I assume would be used in Agrabah in some form since the world is based off the Middle East, Russian title as a reference to the origin of one of the OCs and the mate's been changed to girlfriend.

No one caught the Bleach reference?

 

[UnnamedPerson]

Nice ^^
Well written and enjoyable XD

 

[madammina]

I nixed the Japanese honorifics and replaced them with something more familiar to the audience.

Coptic I assume would be used in Agrabah in some form since the world is based off the Middle East, Russian title as a reference to the origin of one of the OCs and the mate's been changed to girlfriend.

No one caught the Bleach reference?

I didn't...

And I remember what it was! Zexion complaining about Zemyx Yaoi! No idea how he knows about it, but I cracked up.

 

[Deleted member]

Holy crap, I'm really late posting on this, but whatever. Dude, Ziz, Sa'id, whatever your name is time, I absolutely LOVED it. Thank you so much for writing this story. The characterization of both Selphie and Zexion was absolutely great; I could so totally see them acting like that in real life. I especially loved the ending; Selphie making Zexion happy is just total awesomeness. Anyway, thanks again for writing the story, great job, and I look forward to more.

 

[Azrael]

I didn't...

And I remember what it was! Zexion complaining about Zemyx Yaoi! No idea how he knows about it, but I cracked up.

Poor Zexion reads through Zemyx yaoi in the local fanfiction website written by Selphie and the other yaoi-infected fangirls of his. Gives him more reason to avoid Demyx during his free time. And if you did not notice Mina, you should know the names that Zexion mentioned he hated. Shinji and Ichigo from Bleach are referenced, for none of you who failed to catch the easter egg.

What was your favorite part? Least favorite? How can I improve?

Nice ^^
Well written and enjoyable XD

To the point that Audo and Rain are crying.

I jest, thanks.

Holy crap, I'm really late posting on this, but whatever. Dude, Ziz, Sa'id, whatever your name is time, I absolutely LOVED it. Thank you so much for writing this story. The characterization of both Selphie and Zexion was absolutely great; I could so totally see them acting like that in real life. I especially loved the ending; Selphie making Zexion happy is just total awesomeness. Anyway, thanks again for writing the story, great job, and I look forward to more.

You can still call me Ziz, brah. I'm glad that you enjoyed the fanfic and I hoped that Zexion and Selphie were kept in character for the one-shot. Selphie, despite being a crazy, hyperactive girl, is what Zexion needs in his sourpuss life.

Kaimyx is next

 

[madammina]

Poor Zexion reads through Zemyx yaoi in the local fanfiction website written by Selphie and the other yaoi-infected fangirls of his. Gives him more reason to avoid Demyx during his free time. And if you did not notice Mina, you should know the names that Zexion mentioned he hated. Shinji and Ichigo from Bleach are referenced, for none of you who failed to catch the easter egg.

I didn't see the names, care to point them out? (and how do they know of Demyx )

What was your favorite part? Least favorite? How can I improve?

Grr... no, not really.
Fav: how they interacted
least: normally, I put in overusing language or Japanese endings, but the language fits with Zexion's personality. The Japanese name endings also showed their relationship well too (just keep in mind that in a world with no real countries or clearly defined inter world politics characters are NOT Japanese unless said otherwise) So I'm going with the how you didn't mention the whole living together thing and the smile was kind of random.

I can't really see.. You did it REALLY well this time.

 

[Azrael]

I didn't see the names, care to point them out? (and how do they know of Demyx )

the scary looking blond boy with the most abnormal facial expressions in math class who constantly likes to remind me of some spiky, orange-haired jerk who went to his old school iin Karakura Town

Meet scary looking blond boy Shinji

Kurosaki Ichigo, the spiky, orange haired jerk

Grr... no, not really.
Fav: how they interacted
least: normally, I put in overusing language or Japanese endings, but the language fits with Zexion's personality. The Japanese name endings also showed their relationship well too (just keep in mind that in a world with no real countries or clearly defined inter world politics characters are NOT Japanese unless said otherwise) So I'm going with the how you didn't mention the whole living together thing and the smile was kind of random.

I can remove it if you want to. The living together thing had to be left to the imagination of the reader until they knew that Zexion was during the moment of the oneshot, staying over at Selphie's house. I just wanted to leave it up to you at that moment.


What do you mean? Egypt and the Soviet Union were clearly referenced.

I can't really see.. You did it REALLY well this time.

Thanks.

 

[madammina]

the scary looking blond boy with the most abnormal facial expressions in math class who constantly likes to remind me of some spiky, orange-haired jerk who went to his old school iin Karakura Town

Meet scary looking blond boy Shinji

Kurosaki Ichigo, the spiky, orange haired jerk

the references!(I mean)

I can remove it if you want to. The living together thing had to be left to the imagination of the reader until they knew that Zexion was during the moment of the oneshot, staying over at Selphie's house. I just wanted to leave it up to you at that moment.

I see, it just was there. I thought they were in a library.

What do you mean? Egypt and the Soviet Union were clearly referenced.

Yes, but... wait.. I forget how that figures in...UGH!

Thanks.

You're welcome

 

[Azrael]

the references!(I mean)

The references were to characters in Bleach. I can't be any clearer than that.

I see, it just was there. I thought they were in a library.

Pillows in the library? *facepalm*

Yes, but... wait.. I forget how that figures in...UGH!

I'm sorry, perhaps I should delete the real world references?

You're welcome

I love you Madammina, you're the best. I'm going to vote for your piece.

 

[madammina]

The references were to characters in Bleach. I can't be any clearer than that.

I thought it would have been other La Compilation, so it threw me.

Pillows in the library? *facepalm*

my library has pillows! It's not bed pillows, but the kind you put on seats and benches and stuff.

I'm sorry, perhaps I should delete the real world references?

NOPE, keep them in.

I love you Madammina, you're the best. I'm going to vote for your piece.

You don't know which is mine!

and vote for which one you think is best. (if that happens to be mine, go ahead.)

 

[Azrael]

I thought it would have been other La Compilation, so it threw me.

There are no orange, spiky haired jerks nor happy-go lucky blondes from other La Compilation...yet.

my library has pillows! It's not bed pillows, but the kind you put on seats and benches and stuff.

Referring to bed pillows.

NOPE, keep them in.

FINE! I WILL! *licks Mina-chan*

You don't know which is mine!

Piece #3?

and vote for which one you think is best. (if that happens to be mine, go ahead.)

I liked yours.

 

[madammina]

There are no orange, spiky haired jerks nor happy-go lucky blondes from other La Compilation...yet.

Cloud is a spiky haired blond jerk...

Referring to bed pillows.

Still... just drop it.

FINE! I WILL! *licks Mina-chan*

Licks by =sakura02 on deviantART


Not commenting on the rest.

 

[Azrael]

Cloud is a spiky haired blond jerk...

I mean orangette but that's besides the point. Cloud is no jerk!

Still... just drop it.

Yo Momma, nah just kidding.

Not commenting on the rest.

Alright, so...what now?

 

[madammina]

I'll work on Larxene and 14? That way I can do HCTB some more.

 

[Azrael]

I'll work on Larxene and 14? That way I can do HCTB some more.

Can't wait for more Larxene and XIV, if only Kairy was a bit more active and I want some HCTB.

Kaimyx is next and I don't know where to go from there and Le Mort is out.

 

[madammina]

Kairy is out. She got mad at me again. And she backed out.

Are you not doing Le MOrt anymore? or until you work on Kaimyx.

And how about Demyx saving Kairi from drowning.

 

[Azrael]

Kairy is out. She got mad at me again. And she backed out.

Are you not doing Le MOrt anymore? or until you work on Kaimyx.

And how about Demyx saving Kairi from drowning.

THAT's ORGANIZATION_42's job to create the plot bunny. It's her request, I'm only fulfilling it lol

Le Mort will be finished in three years I assure you, the remake of Part I will be completely finished by summer's end. I promise.

 

[madammina]

I'll miss it all!

ER... email it to me. You know my address.

I was just offering...

 

[Azrael]

I know and I'll take your offer to consideration.

I'll email it to you when it's ready.