Finally after a couble monthes I got the Frist Chapter.This is a fanfic is about a boy named Roxas(and in this you will notice the diffirence between this one, and the one from KH2)who has lost everything.One day when Sefier decides to be an asshole and pick on Roxas, he relizes he can weild a Keyblade.So a person just a little older them him named Riku see's him weild this key, he askes Roxas to join the Keyblade Cursade.And in there is where the true fight begins.
To my Best Friend Jimmy
Part 1
Of keyblades, Traning, and Leaders
chapter 1
Sometimes you gotta face the truth, Realty sucks!My friends betray me, my best friend dies in a car accident!My step Parents leave me alone with nothing and go of to some tropical island not giving a shit about what happenes to me!And my REAL parents, they died when I was just 2!SO, what am I supposed to do?I have no home, no food, no friends, and no where to go.What!?The Keblade Cursade?NO NO NO!those were the people responsible for my parents death.If had a chance I would kill every dimwitted bastard that joined that groupe!What, you want to know what I'll do!?That's the same quistion I was asking you!Just....Just go away.Leave me alone.
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I was scared, yeah, scared and upset.So many things had happened, it was like I was asleep and I had just awoken, not knowing what had happened.But then when I was running scared and cring was different.Now I know what happened, I had lost everything.It felt like a life time of of misery those few minutes running, like nothing would ever get better, like things were only gonna get worse.I was right, but at the same time wrong in a sense, For the next thing that was about to happen, just made things worse.I felt something hit my foot, I didn't pay much attention to it, I really should of.The next thing I knew wasthe smell of blood dripping from my head and my nose, then came pain. It me a few minutes to relize that that thing that hit my foot was a stick that I dripped over.I opened my eyes and saw the hard brick side walk so close up that my eyes hurt.Then a voice."Hey, don't you know that it's a crime to cry infront of me?"Said a familer voice.I turned my head up to see who it was.But I really didn't need to.Because you can even feel Seifers presence when you don't look at him.I got up and ran from seifer, I didn't need to have to bother with him on top of everything else."When I tell you that you have commited a crime you have to pay the punishment,"Seifer yelled in an angry tone of voice.
"I really don't feel like paying the punishment right now."I yelled back in a muffled sarcastic voice.I tryed to outrun him, but sadly, he's the fastest runner in the whole god damned town.And, sure enough, he took out a large stick he always brings with him(Your seventeen Seifer, your to young to be useing sticks to fight)and attemted to strike me.And that's when it happened, in the blink of an eye a light shone and Seifer ran away.I was confused and in dismay.Then I felt cool metel in my hand.I looked down to see what it was."What the......."Before I could finish my sentence someone came up said something to me."Hello, I'm part of the Keyblade Cursade, My name is Riku............."
So, what do ya think?
To my Best Friend Jimmy
Part 1
Of keyblades, Traning, and Leaders
chapter 1
Sometimes you gotta face the truth, Realty sucks!My friends betray me, my best friend dies in a car accident!My step Parents leave me alone with nothing and go of to some tropical island not giving a shit about what happenes to me!And my REAL parents, they died when I was just 2!SO, what am I supposed to do?I have no home, no food, no friends, and no where to go.What!?The Keblade Cursade?NO NO NO!those were the people responsible for my parents death.If had a chance I would kill every dimwitted bastard that joined that groupe!What, you want to know what I'll do!?That's the same quistion I was asking you!Just....Just go away.Leave me alone.
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I was scared, yeah, scared and upset.So many things had happened, it was like I was asleep and I had just awoken, not knowing what had happened.But then when I was running scared and cring was different.Now I know what happened, I had lost everything.It felt like a life time of of misery those few minutes running, like nothing would ever get better, like things were only gonna get worse.I was right, but at the same time wrong in a sense, For the next thing that was about to happen, just made things worse.I felt something hit my foot, I didn't pay much attention to it, I really should of.The next thing I knew wasthe smell of blood dripping from my head and my nose, then came pain. It me a few minutes to relize that that thing that hit my foot was a stick that I dripped over.I opened my eyes and saw the hard brick side walk so close up that my eyes hurt.Then a voice."Hey, don't you know that it's a crime to cry infront of me?"Said a familer voice.I turned my head up to see who it was.But I really didn't need to.Because you can even feel Seifers presence when you don't look at him.I got up and ran from seifer, I didn't need to have to bother with him on top of everything else."When I tell you that you have commited a crime you have to pay the punishment,"Seifer yelled in an angry tone of voice.
"I really don't feel like paying the punishment right now."I yelled back in a muffled sarcastic voice.I tryed to outrun him, but sadly, he's the fastest runner in the whole god damned town.And, sure enough, he took out a large stick he always brings with him(Your seventeen Seifer, your to young to be useing sticks to fight)and attemted to strike me.And that's when it happened, in the blink of an eye a light shone and Seifer ran away.I was confused and in dismay.Then I felt cool metel in my hand.I looked down to see what it was."What the......."Before I could finish my sentence someone came up said something to me."Hello, I'm part of the Keyblade Cursade, My name is Riku............."
So, what do ya think?
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