sorry for double posting but here's chapter six... i need comments on this one....X< and Riku_gunblade i've added Riku to the story =3
Chapter Six
Likke didn’t know where to look exactly for this Sora person but she kept running. She wasn’t paying attention to where she was heading since all Rue said to her were the only things in her head. One priority right now was to find him, whoever he is. The situation was serious but her habit of bumping on to people without looking still got the best of her, since she managed to bump a boy who had silver-like hair.
“Hey are you ok?” he asked.
“Uhm.. yeah. I’m fine if you think so. Sorry for bumping you by the way.” she replied.
“Oh don’t worry about it.” he said and noticed blood on her clothes. “You’re injured?! Look, you’re covered in blood.”
Likke looked at her clothes and he was right. They were stained probably when she helped carry Rue out to the portal. Even her hands had slight traces of blood on them.
“No! I’m not but thanks for asking. And don’t think that I’ve murdered someone!” she said frantically waving her hands in a manner. “The blood came from my friend since he was injured but he’s fine now.”
For some reason, the boy sighed in relief. She didn’t know him but she felt calm around him. Her worries seemed to disappear as well. Also, maybe he knew something about Sora. It was hasty for her to do but she asked anyway.
“Uhm excuse me but do you know somebody called Sora? I need to find him you see.”
“Sora? Why do you need to find him?” he asked confused.
Likke felt kind of embarrassed. She didn’t even know the reason herself. Collsiea only told her to find him and nothing more. It became awkward but she didn’t want to let Collsiea down.
“Well, I do know him. In fact, he’s my best friend.”
“Really?! Please you have to take me to him uh… what’s your name anyways?”
The boy extended his hand to her. She could see him smiling at her and she blushed. Weird enough, her heart was pounding fast when she was about to shake his hand.
“I’m Riku. What about you?”
“Ah… well… I’m Likke. Nice to meet you! Could you uhm… well…” her voice started to sound funny and she became too shy to think straight.
“Come on Likke concentrate!! Sure he’s good looking but that’s not important right now!! Arrgh! I hate me!!!” she thought to herself.
“Lead you to Sora? Sure, it’s no problem but what about your friend?”
Likke stopped for a moment. She suddenly remembered Rue and couldn’t believe she forgot about him. He was recovering but it wasn’t a good idea for him to stay there alone. Who knows what could happen and… Hito may return to finish them. She looked back to the direction she came from and had an uneasy feeling. Something was wrong… and it could be even worse than wrong.
“I have to go back to Rue. I have a bad feeling…” she said gulping.
“I’m coming too. Strange things have been going around here for awhile and it wouldn’t be safe for you to go alone.”
She blushed a little and mumbled, “Uh… thanks!”
Likke and Riku started running back. The path seemed to be darker than before which worried her. It reminded her of what had just happened. It wasn’t an enjoyable experience and she wasn’t willing to endure that all over again. Lost in thought, Likke didn’t hear Riku shout and kept running.
“Ow! What the?!”
A strange creature blocked her way. She had never seen anything like it before. Curious, she tried to get near it but it attacked her in return. The injury was minor though it bled a lot. She then tried to scramble away as much as she could but it prepared for another attack, this time much more painful than the last one. Its claws rose and then…
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wah... need help in writtng... someone care to lend a hand? and please tell if i did something wrong or if i did something messed up :blushing:
