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Warning-This chapter includes very mature themes, and adult situations. Anyone younger than 14 years of age should not read this chapter. But then again, who listens to those ratings anymore?
Chapter Eleven
Insanity

Riku became dizzy watching the blurrs of purple and black wizz by. He decided to close his eyes, and just waited for them to reach wherever they where going. Riku felt his stomach lurch, and he quickly brought his hand up to his mouth.
"Boy! Open your eyes!" Maleficent shouted.
Riku did, and Maleficent gave him a hard push. Riku stumbled backwards and felt himself fall. The purple and black dissapeared, and he fell through a total black sky. Riku felt himself fall into water, but it seemed very thick.
He rushed to the surface, and gasped. He was in a lake of blood, bones and raw flesh floating all around him, and on him as well. Riku couldn't take it anymore. He felt his stomach lurch, the muscles in his arms and neck tightened, and he vomitted. He gasped for air, then it happened again, filling the area in front of the lake in front of with thick bile and other refuse.
Riku coughed several times, and looked around him. Above him, the dark sky was shifting ominously, fortelling that some force of nature was about to begin. He looked into his reflection in the pool and gasped at the site of him covered in blood. He looked utterly evil. He closed his eyes in fear of himself. But as he did this, a vision flashed before his eyes. He saw himself slaying innocent humans, braking into their houses late at night, slaying them mercerlessly in their sleep, their blood gushing out onto his blade, some onto his arms and face. He burst into the childrens room, grabbing them by there puny little necks, crushing their throats. Once they passed out, he dropped them to the ground, stabbing his Soul Eater through their small and fragile bodies. Riku then saw Kairi.
"Come here." Riku said.
She had a frightened look on her face, tears where running down her delicate cheeks. She was sobbing silently, a hiccup was heard every few moments.
"Please, come here, I won't hurt you." Riku said.
Kairi still didn't approach him. Riku walked over to her, and wrapped his arms around her, pulling her close to his blood soaked chest.
"Shh, it'll be okay. Everythings going to be okay." Riku said whiping the tears away from Kairi's cheeks.
"Riku! You killed those innocent people!" Kairi blurted out, hicupping at the end of her sentence.
"What makes you say that?" Riku asked, a smile spreading across his lips.
"I watched you do it!" Kairi said hoarsly.
Riku stared into her eyes. She tried to brake away, but he grabbed her by the arms tightly.
"Uh! Let me go! You're hurting me!" Kairi cried out.
Riku quickly and roughly pushed his lips to Kairi's. He could hear her groan, and he quickly lashed his tongue into her mouth, tasting her deeply, and his hand shot under her shirt and up to her breast, squeezing it tightly through her bra.
Kairi jerked crazzily, and finally manage to push him away.
"What do you think you're doing?!?!" Kairi screamed.
"What's wrong? Don't you want me baby?" Riku asked.
"No! NO! I don't want you like this Riku!" Kairi cried, tears rolling down her cheeks.
"Well then..." Riku said as he summoned the Soul Eater to his hand. "YOU CAN BURN IN HELL, BITCH!" Riku yelled as he lobbed off Kairi's head, her blood flying onto his chest and face.
Riku's eyes shot open, wide in horror. He screamed loudly in fear, his heart racing. He shook his head, and ran forwards. He rushed towards the edge of the pool, wading through the thick, dark blood.
'I-I'm going insane...' Riku thought. "I'M GOING THE INSANE!!!" He screamed at the sky.
He was a few feet away from the edge when he tripped, his mouth and nose getting filled with blood. He sprung up, spitting and rubbing his nose. The image flashed back into his mind as he tasted blood in his mouth. Slaying men and woman in there sleep, choking the innocent children, decapitating Kairi...
"No! I did not imagine those things..." Riku said as he fell to his knees on the shore of the lake.
It was covered with dead grass and flowers. The trees where leafless, nothing but a vally of twigs and branches.
"I didn't imagine those things..." Riku repeated, shaking irratably. "I didn't imagine those things!" Riku yelled, tears rolling down his cheeks.
He bent over, sobbing loudly, his tears falling onto his blood soaked cloths.
"Oh, you poor boy." Said a voice.
Riku looked up to see woman, who looked about Riku's age, maybe a year or two older. She was dressed in a black silk dress, open on the left side from the thigh down, revealing fish net stalkings covering her long legs. Black hi-heels raised her up a little taller than Riku mostlikely. The dress had no straps, and she wore black leather gloves. She had pale white skin, and her lips where shaded black with lipstick. Her eyes where dark brown, and black eyeshadow covered her eyelids, and she had the longest black hair Riku had ever seen.
"I feel sorry for you..." The woman said as she knelt down, her face inches from his.
She leaned forward, and put her hand on Riku's shoulder. Riku looked up at her, his eyes still filled with tears. She leaned in more, and pressed her lips gently to his. Riku's eyes widened, and his lips trembled.
Riku soon found himelf enjoying this, and he kissed her back. The woman pushed herself closer to Riku, her beasts pushing on his chest. Riku intensified the kiss as this happend. She slowly slid her tongue into Riku's mouth, and Riku did the same to her. After a few minutes, she pulled her tongue out, and broke the kiss, but remained close to Riku.
"Looks like you're a very sad boy," She said. "I think I know a way to cheer you up." She said seductivly.
She reached up to the zipper on Riku's shirt, and slowly began to pull it down. Riku only sat there blushing.
"Ah..." Riku breathed.
"Shh..." The woman said as she brought a gloved finger to Riku's lips to silence him. "Just let me do my work."
The woman leaned forward again, and placed her mouth on Riku's neck, sucking and licking it gently. Riku's fist tightened, and his knuckles cracked loudly.
"I'm sorry, but..." Riku began.
The woman stopped giving Riku his first hicky and asked, "What? Don't you want me to give you some pleasure?"
The woman jumped back as a flash of light shone from Riku's hand. She landed by a tree, and the middle of her dress split open, revealing more of her breasts.
Riku stared at her angrilly. He stood up now, and his Soul Eater was extended, the blade up.
"Sorry, but I don't get pleasure from whores like you." Riku said.
Blue lightning shot up from Riku's feet and covered his whole body. His body suite took form as his dark side took control.
"It's a fight you want?" The woman asked.
Riku responded by flipping his sword back to the right position.
"Ooo, I'll take that as a yes. I give great fights too." The woman said as she reached up to a pendant around her neck. She touched it, and it glowed purple, and soon a sword was in her hand. It had a purple hilt and handle, and on the side of it's silver blade was a black lip mark.
"You can call that your kiss goodbye, ha, ha, ha!" The woman laughed.
"We'll see about that." Riku said.
"Oh, we will, we will...You have the great Vatallani as your sweet guide to death my dear boy."


Ok, I hope none of you take this offensive, as this is SEVERLY different from my other chapters. I'm just trying to make it much, much darker, and plus I had never wrote something erotic like this, or given SO MUCH detail on a character, especially my new character Vatallani. I still hope you people will enjoy this fic as much as you have in the past.
 
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This... this is a weird chapter.... it doesn't have the Kingdom Hearts feel like the previous chapters did... but keep it coming
 

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Chapter 12
The Dark Worlds

"AAA!" Riku yelled as he shot forward at a blazing speed.
He slashed at Vattalani, but he only hit air. Riku looked up to see her slash down on him. Riku crashed to the ground, hit sword locked with hers.
"Ooh, doesn't it feel great to have our bodies pressed together, hmm?" Vattalani said licking her lips.
Riku pushed her off and jumped back.
"You stay off of me, you whore." Riku said angrilly.
Vattalani smiled, and charged. She swung her sword at Riku, and Riku knocked it away with a quick swipe of his sword, then kicked her hard in the stomach. Vattalani gasped for breath and jumped back. She looked up at Riku with a snarl on her face.
"How dare you hit a woman!" She shrieked.
"You're not a woman, you're a whore." Riku replied.
"What?! How dare you!" "That's it!"
Vattalani stood, on gaurd.
"You're dead now you little brat! NOW I'm mad!"
Riku smiled.
"Bring it...Fatty." He said.
The woman screamed as she flew at Riku. They clashed sword, waves of black sparks shooting from their blades. They both pushed at eachother, trying to break through and deliver the death blow. Riku who had begun to loose his grip on his sword, jumped into the air. With his new powers, he jumped maybe twice as high as he usually could.
"Yaaatch!" Riku yelled as he came down quickly at Vattalani.
She rolled underneath Riku just before getting hit, and swung her sword as she turned. They clashed again. Vattalani pushed Riku's sword to the ground, then backhanded him in the face. Riku stumbled backwards, and barely managed to evade when she slashed at him.
"You're pretty fast. I like that." Vattalani said. "It's been forever since Maleficent gifted me with anyone STRONG."
"What? You know Maleficent?" Riku asked.
"Oh, yes. I'm her apprentice. We go way back." Vattalani chuckled.
Riku glared at her.
"You see, I'm addicted to not only sex, I'm addicted to fighting. So first I get what I want, then I kill them. But it looks like I'll have to do it backwards today."
"Just shut up!" Riku said launching himself into the air.
He extended his palm, and it crackled with blue lightning.
"Dark Firaga!" Riku yelled.
The blue flaming orb shot from his palm strait at Vitallani. She knocked it away with a swipe of her sword, but when she looked up Riku was gone. Riku shot across the dead grass, and before Vattalani could see him coming, his sword cut into her. She stepped back with a scream, blood flying from the diagonal cut on her chest.
"You're dead!" Riku yelled as he shot another Firaga spell at her.
She flew to the ground, a large thud being heard.
"Finally. She shuts up." Riku said.
Vattalani laughed as she sat up.
"WHAT?!" Riku yelled. "STAY! DOWN!" Riku shot another Dark Firaga at her, knocking her to the ground.
"Oh...mmm....YES! The pain..." Vattalani said. "You're the first one who's ever hurt me...And the pain...It's simply orgasmic."
"Shut up!!!" Riku yelled as he lunged at her.
They clashed sword several times, before they both jumped into the air, sparks from their blades showering to the ground. Riku was knocked down to the ground as Vattalani slashed at his collar bone. He hit the ground hard, his whole bidy shaking from the impact. Riku's body suite was like armor though, he didn't have a wound at all. He quickly got up, and shot forward at Vattalani. The second he slashed though, he was thrown back by a barrier.
"What the...hell?" Riku said as he wiped the blood from his forehead.
He had landed on rock, cutting his head open.
"That's something Maleficent taught me. You like it?" Vattalani asked.
"Go to hell." Riku growled.
"Ha! Been there, done that." She laughed. "And now, it's your turn to visit!"
She lunged forward, and slashed at Riku with incredbly speed. Riku jumped up, and spiralled around, his sword cutting into her back. She collapsed to the ground, coughing.
"You still think pain is orgasmic?" Riku asked.
Vattalani turned around, scowling. Her face was spotted with blood, blood had leaked out the side of her mouth, and the blood from her chest wound had thuroughly soaked her dress.
"You still won't win." She said pointing her sword at him.
"You wanna bet?" Riku asked taking his stance. "If I win, you tell me what you know about Maleficent and the darkness."
"And if I win...Well, you know what I'll do." Vattalani said smiling at her thought.
"Well then, let's go." Riku said.
Vattalani and Riku carged at eachother, their swords held high. Just before Riku slashed, Vattalani teleported behind him. Riku turned, but stoped as he saw the point of Vattalani's sword at his throat.
Riku moved to slash, but the point remained at his throat.
"Ah-uh." Vattalani said. "I have one. No matter what you do, you'll die. Looks like I have one. Besides, if you where dead, it's wouldn't be as fun."
Vattalani moved closer to Riku, the point of her sword still at his throat. She finally dropped it, and grabbed Riku, kissing him softly. Riku could taste the blood on her lips, and his dark side peaked. She slid her tongue in, caressing his.
"Mmm..."
Riku watched as reached up to the top of her dress, ready to pull it off. Vattalani screamed as Riku launched another Firaga into her guts. She stumbled back, and Riku plunged his sword strait through her thin torso. Blood shot like water from a fire hidren from her stomach. She coughed as blood flew out her mouth, splattering onto Riku. Vattalani fell to the ground with a scream.
Riku stared at her body, a scowl on his face.
"Now, tell me what I want to know. Who EXACTLY is Maleficent?" Riku asked.
"But-I had-"
"Shut up! Who's the one with the stab wound here?" Riku said stomping on her chest, causing more blood to flow out of her mouth.
"Ok, fine. I expect you're body to be mine in the next life though." Vattalani said.
Riku glared at her.
"Ok, Maleficent is a witch from another world. She doesn't live in Hollow Bastion. She used the Heartless to take it over. They said it was destroyed, but apperantly it was only warped. It's a groutesque version of what it used to be. I used to live in Hollow Bastion with my husband. God, he had a great d-"
"Heartless? What is that?" Riku said, cutting her off.
"Ha! You don't even know that? And yet you wear their symbol?" Vattalani laughed.
"What? This?" Riku said pointing at the heart on his chest.
"Yes, exactly." Vattalani said. "They are beings of Darkness. They feed on the weaks hearts, but are always craving the true heart."
"The true heart?" Riku asked.
"Whatever that is, they want it. It is supposedly supposed to be the saviour of the worlds. Whoever that is."
"And what does Maleficent have to do with all of this?" Riku said hurredly, seeing Vattalani was loosing her breath.
"I don't know. She came to our world one day, and then I was sent to exile here. I've been raping men ever since." Vattalani said.
"You're a sick woman." Riku said. "But thank you for the information."
"You're welcome handsome. You remind me of my husband. Cruel, and ruthless. He was great. And now you move on to the next world of evil. Beware the giant. That's all I can say." Vattalani said.
"What?" Riku said.
He heard thunder. He looked up to see the clouds part, and light shown through them.
"AAA!" Riku screamed shielding his eyes.
The light was soon replace by a red beam, that shot into Riku.
"What's...Happening?!" Riku screamed.
He felt the beam lift him into the air, and then all went black.

I rock. Enjoy. Once again please report any grammer errors.
 

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Have just finished reading your fic (I had a lot of free time on my hands) and think it is truly awesome and couldn't agree more with your last statement.

By the way there were a few spelling errors but still excellent.
 

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I'm surprised this hasn't been deleted! Well, I plan to update soon, so there'll be new chapters. And about the last two chapters, that is what happens when you're stuck at home all summer, with a massive array of porn on your hands. The chapters won't be like that anymore, so don't worry! ^.~ Be updating soon.
 
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